People Are in Sunagakure, Cloned in the Heavens, Starting with Arkham

The writing of the plot is okay It just feels a little watery as it goes on. Mainly because it is a bit invincible at the end. The description of the protagonist's personal and combat power growth is not as well written as it was at the beginning The Naruto plot was before the 4th war or before Otsutsuki appeared. Except for the moves of the eight zombies, there seemed to be no opponents and pressure. The continuation of the plot with the intervention of the protagonist is very good. At least it is not like other novels that just follow the original plot. But it has its own changes Personally, the only shortcoming of this book is that there are not many updates The use of clones, especially in the world of Demon Slayer. The clones have no appearance, which is a bit of a waste of the settings of the clones There is also a one-person plot that is a bit slow. Personally, I am not interested in one-person plots. I don't even want to use the free coupons for one-person chapters, so I skip them directly To write about the Eastern system, I would rather read the martial arts Shushan Liaozhai type I hope the one-person plot will be completed as soon as possible after all, I have to write about various worlds. At least there are things like Death Pirates. DC and Marvel also have a lot of places to write about.

Added more Naruto part

Why do so many authors like to write about demon slayers? They don't think there is anything good to write about demon slayers at all.

When I saw Chapter 15, puppets named Fat Man and Little Boy appeared, I was happy

One person is too ink-stained, and almost all of them are lost.

Some people only want to watch Naruto, and some people only want to watch DC. It's really difficult for the author

Writing about The Puppet Master requires a lot of imagination and novel viewpoints, otherwise it would be difficult to have a sense of involvement. For personal opinions, the author can take a look. First, Animation. In some novels and movies, puppet robots can evolve into life, so that they have the ability to evolve independently, and can provide ideas and help to the protagonist. Second, Scale, the mechanical legion flow can build factories and production lines, which can greatly reduce costs and make profits at the same time. Housekeeping robots, guard puppets, daimyo nobles, etc. Should be very interesting, right? Third Robot Internet If the Internet of modern society can be replicated on mechanical puppets, it can be said that the strength and heritage of Shaying Village can be greatly improved. Like conveying information items and communicating, a puppet and a phone can solve it.

How can I put it this way, more than 400 chapters have been developed, and with such a big hook, I still know the original plot, and I feel like I am 50-50 with the Hokage Village. If the third generation had not launched the zombie sealing, I am afraid that the record would have been zero 😥

Stop writing about Demon Slayer. The main world is Naruto. Writing about other worlds is for the sake of gaining benefits and developing the main body of the Naruto world. Are you now a clone in other worlds and plotting plots for the main body to watch?

Drive high and go low. In the early stages, it is recommended not to play with chakra strings, but to have some imagination. It's fine now, half lukewarm

The rhythm is quite chaotic. In fact, the setting of traveling through the heavens is not necessary at all. It is difficult to write a story in a world well. If you don't have the ability to grasp so many branches, you will still have to write a pure failure. Even if you have to write, just write one or two is enough. Focus on the knowledge you have learned to open a golden finger in the main world.

What to write about a person's picture? Does it mean it's low level?

What kind of puppet can beat Madara Six Paths? How can we create a puppet that can resist the Infinite Tsukuyomi? The upper limit for puppet masters is really not good. The ninja world still has to practice ninjutsu. There is no use in making robots.

Isn't the role of the clones to assist the protagonist? Just write down what knowledge and skills you have acquired and that's it. Now it's so confusing to jump around and write. According to this way of writing, there will be more clones and more jumps in the future? Do so many authors in the world have enough brains and writing skills? I don't even dare to subscribe.

Don't underestimate my intelligence network. You will definitely open the comment area for fun after seeing this book.

The Scorpion of Red Sand has to kowtow before leaving in Gotham😅. You are a popular puppet master and want to write about daily life?

Let's just change the name - I'll start developing Naruto from American comics. In addition to Naruto, who has a little drama in the early stage, it is not as good as Demon Slayer.

Why is Naruto in the main world? This Naruto plot is really boring. Can the protagonist leave the Naruto world?

A protagonist who mainly works on mechanics ran to Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, and I couldn't imagine what he would gain.

Does the Puppet Master have a plan to get the Heart of Eve? Let's complain The impression of Naruto is greater than that of DC + Demon Slayer, but the author chose to advance three lines at the same time, which makes it a bit difficult Why not choose Naruto as the main line, and other worlds as short story branches to collect science Skills, leave the space to Naruto, Naruto doesn't have to write and jump to other worlds to continue And it's normal to choose whichever world is popular, but at the beginning of the DC multiverse level, is it necessary to go to most of the worlds without black technology in the future? It is better to screen out the popular worlds related to puppets and write them in order from low to high world combat power

We are in Sunagakure, and the protagonist is a puppet master. The future is to develop the chakra puppet industry, rather than develop technology, let the entire ninja world follow the path of puppet industry, and drag the enemy to the track where he is good at, so that Sunagakure can overtake in a corner.

Astronomers and Dragons are the parts I dislike watching the most.

Read 466/542 chapters, about 87% + the last chapter. The difference between this book and the 99-ryu is that this book has a main body (Hokage), and the others are soul clones that can communicate at any time, so it is possible to have several chapters in a row, each chapter is: half a chapter of this world, half a chapter of that world. In addition, the time flow rate is basically the same, and it is not as coherent as ordinary 99-stream reading. If there is a world that you don't like, and you want to skip it, you may miss part of the plot of the world that you like. Up to the end of the book, open Naruto (Kazekage, Sento), DC (Gotham businessman, underworld overlord, Zhenglian veteran), Zhu Mie (Demon Slayer clan leader, police officer), Marvel (rich businessman, director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Supreme Mage, Asgardian priest), One Man (academician of both academies), and One-Punch Man (hero). Because knowledge can be transferred for free, adding money (luck value) can buy the talents of "others and me" in other worlds such as "ghost body", "superpower", "serum", etc., But items such as unique metals and infinite gems cannot be transferred. So we can see that after defeating the Kryptonians, Brainiac, Dormammu, and the second gem Thanos, the main body on the other side is afraid of being taken away by Bamendai. In short, each world is fine when viewed individually, but writing them together feels a bit fragmented. I feel like I wanted to write a new 99 flow but didn't handle it well. So I couldn't stand it anymore later on. However, after reading the comments section of the last chapter, it seems that there is no bad ending, and the comments can accept this ending. above

Why do you have to have endless clone plots? After a few chapters, you have to write it all over the world. You might as well learn that one. Fortunately, clones can be cast into thousands of worlds. In other world plots, you basically skip a few chapters in total, and then get something that is beneficial to you.

Personally, I feel that the separate book he wrote about those heavens and worlds is quite good, but it feels a bit uncomfortable to travel through time at the same time. After all, I feel that he wrote that part very well and then turned around to write other things. It is so uncomfortable to travel through time at the same time.

The author will open another book, something similar. Good looking. Love to watch

Except for the plot of Naruto, I can understand it, but the other worlds are a bit cool and I can't understand it.

I haven't watched Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, so I'm advised to give it up.

In which chapter of Goodbye Ma Xianhong will Ma Xianhong appear again? What happened to Chen Duo?

Brother, why did it end? Is this the end of your latitude demon?