Demon Sword Storm

The classic character image means that the character has its own characteristics, such as appearance, personality, strengths, flaws, and unique experiences. Such as Cao Cao, Guan Yu, Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie, Song Jiang, Wu Song, Alien, Predator and Terminator.

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It's actually pretty good-looking, and the writing style is clearly Jin Yong's! They are 80% similar in spirit. And the writing style is really good, surpassing most people who write online articles. But why no one watched it, I thought about it for a moment 1. The characters who appeared were boring, too serious, and had no characteristics. Entertainment works should also take into account the lovable protagonist 2. The author may want to learn from Jin Yong and change the main point of view while writing, but Jin Yong usually writes dozens of chapters from the perspective of one character, and the reader will be completely familiar with a character before changing to the next protagonist. The author has only written a few chapters, but the perspective has changed almost three times. Before he can get the charm of your character, he just beats you randomly and immediately changes to the next one. The sense of immersion is too bad. 3. The author wants to learn from Jin Yong in writing plot-based group portraits, but he has not yet learned the essence: when Jin Yong writes about a person, he can stand up as soon as he appears on the scene, and he can carve out a character in just three or two strokes, and he can express it vividly. The author has only learned to let a bunch of characters take turns to play, but has not learned to let the characters stand up 4. The character lacks motivation, the character has no short-term and long-term goals, and there is no hook and sense of expectation. This has something to do with the lack of good character design Just tell me your own opinion

The author has some pen and ink, but he is not suitable for writing novels. He can write articles, essays and the like. It is quite good. Writing novels requires talent. You need someone who can write novels to write your story. He will write interesting stories. The world is inherently unfair. Some people may not be as educated as you or as knowledgeable as you, but he just writes novels and it is very interesting. I felt so uncomfortable after reading Chapter 15. , The editor of Qidian is very discerning. He will know after reading a few thousand words whether you can write a novel. You are really bad. Your book is really a negative teaching material for Qidian!

Jin Yong was able to describe martial arts and carve the story to perfection. No one can compare to this, not even Gu Liang Wenhuang. A lot of characters appear at the beginning like mine, which is setting up the story. Most works are like this, including Blood Sword, Snow Mountain Flying Fox, Demi-Gods and Dragons, the Four Great Classics, the foreign Lord of the Rings, A Song of Ice and Fire, Harry Potter, and Sherlock Holmes, not to mention War and Peace, Homer's Epics, and Grimm's Fairy Tales. You must have told me that Internet articles cannot be written like this. According to statistics, there are more than 30 million authors and more than 50 million works in the Internet literature industry. These authors all write in the style of Internet articles, but successful authors are only a small fraction of them. In other words, there are 30 million authors and 50 million failed works. This is a realistic example. Facts have shown that literary creation is never about writing whatever you want, but about writing whatever stories you have in your stomach. Successful internet writers earn much more than traditional literary writers. Do those great writers have a grudge against money? Why don't they write online articles? Traditional writers can't write online articles, and online article authors can't write traditional literature. At least I don't have that ability. I can write whatever stories I have. Literary websites are like supermarkets, and novels are like products in supermarkets. Readers have their own preferences. If you like it, buy it. If you don't, just put it down. No one forces you to buy it. I welcome you to share novel plots, characters, or literary creations with me. For those who find it difficult to read this work, but insist on making comments that are inconsistent with the actual situation of the book, or even abuse it without knowing what it is about, what else can I say except to advise them not to read it?

It's awesome. I worked as a writer's assistant. It took me seven years to write it and then upload it. I'm really persistent. How many seven-year periods can there be in life? It's awesome.

In fact, I should be the one who has read your book the most. I have read more than sixty chapters!

Too many names of people (things) are distracting! (I only read the character introductions before your text), I suggest you think about it. Are there only a few main (famous) characters in historical masterpieces such as "Journey to the West" and the popular online book "Fight to Break the Sky, Coil the Dragon, Cover the Sky"? It is recommended that there should be 3 or 5 people in a chapter, and the appearance of the characters (people with names) should be related to the protagonist!

That's awesome. I came here from the community and wanted to know if you are interested. I have many friends who have signed but not yet signed the contract. Let's discuss it together.

Awesome brother, I feel like I have gone back to the time when I read Jin Yong's novels when I was a child. The writing is really good. I can't sign a contract simply because the subject matter and rhythm are not in line with the market. I really need to find a publishing house to publish it. This group of people online are not your audience, especially online writing platforms.

There is no data for this book. I think the main reason is that it cannot be published on this platform. The starting point is mainly online articles rather than traditional literature. This must mean that most readers like to read online articles for fun rather than traditional literature. My father likes to watch short dramas and also likes to read books, but he will not look for masterpieces by famous artists on platforms for watching short dramas, nor will he buy physical books online. These are two completely different things. There is no data for this book, so I think the audience for this book is not for this type of novel. Douyin has separate sections for videos, and the same goes for novels. If the author just wants to write his inner story and doesn't care about the data, then just pretend I didn't say that. If you want to pursue data, you can either find a website with a large audience for Jin Yong's martial arts novels or publish a book directly. If you want to explore it, you have to change the style to cater to the tastes of Qidian readers.

I came here because of my reputation. Although there are many flaws, it can be seen that I wrote it with great care and ideas. Come on.

"The Buddha said that all Dharmas are due to all the minds of all sentient beings. If there is no all the minds, why use all Dharmas." Prescribe the right medicine to the disease. Avatars can easily intimidate people, so don't be too hasty to save people, the more effort you put into it, the more you can do. As for the concept of martial arts, you prefer "precepts", which is not suitable for today's people. "The right method is saved by precepts, the imitation method is through meditation, and the final method is through the pure land."

After reading two chapters, it's a bit awkward to write the story directly at the beginning without any background introduction. Try not to use the opening film and television effects in online novels.

I'm here as a writer's assistant. Your novel is not in the style of an online novel. It is more suitable for martial arts 6 or 70 years ago. When martial arts were all the rage, it was a pity to submit it directly to the publishing house.

This book is thick and difficult for readers to read

Why don't you have a monthly pass?

Watching Jin Yong's martial arts, I feel that the plot is simple and classic, and your works are delicate and rich.

The reading threshold is too high, and it feels even beyond the average level of print novels. At the starting point, it was difficult to have readers.

If you don't have a sense of immersion, you shouldn't publish it at the starting point. Find a publishing house to sort it out and polish it into a physical book, and then promote it online. It may be a bit messy.

Disappointment! I thought that my eldest brother was an undiscovered gem like Jin Yong, but I didn't expect that from the moment he entered the assassination of the emperor, he was like a different person, with all kinds of things. I couldn't stand it at all. He was just settling in.

The first chapter can explain something clearly in one sentence, but you wrote a whole chapter, and expanded it from dozens of words to thousands of words, and you still complained that you couldn't sign the contract 🤔🤔

Hello, hello, can you see it?

I have a feeling of sympathy for you, and I always use Jin Yong's writing style

Brother, don't you read it yourself after you finish writing? The content of the first eight chapters is okay. When it comes to Feng Wu taming the emperor, won't you read it after finishing it?