Dog Planning! Play the Plot You Wrote Yourself!

For grass jelly, I would give it a 4.5-5 Out of 5 points. To be honest, when I saw this name, I rejected it, but there is really a shortage of books... I am not used to the mainstream style of cool writing that makes no sense or only has good combat. This book is very suitable for my personal taste. The writing is good and the plot is smooth. The biggest problem is that some parts are slightly deliberately reversed for the sake of reversal, but instead fall into the cliche. In fact, sometimes a grand finale is a good choice. When you feel it, even if you bow to the air alone, isn't it a grand gesture? Currently, I feel that the author wants to write a family-friendly ending after sorting out the many conflicts. Although I also like happy endings, they are often too perfect and not realistic enough. Finally, it is of course very important whether it is a pigeon or a pigeon, but if it is an anticlimax sometimes it is not as good as a pigeon, at least give it a thought. My greatest expectation for this book is that it can be like a puzzle, with small stories pieced together to achieve a grand ending. Maybe the author should really crowdfund a name. The biggest failure of this work so far is the name and introduction. Unfortunately, I am also a bad namer, so I thought of throwing a brick wall - whoever digs the hole in the fantasy world can't bury it too much ********** A brief talk about my favorite character 1. Hang Zihua The character is full and lovable. After all, who wouldn't like a sly, silly and cute little lolita who can transform into a tall and cold lady? And friends of Amomum villosum know that Amomum villosum is easy to bury. How important it is to carry such a cute little corpse-killing expert when you go out, not to mention that she can be recycled and reused, which is not only environmentally friendly, but also efficient! 2. Red Kite Probably for personal reasons, I really love this dedicated, beautiful and intelligent yandere sister! The slight flaw is that it is not crazy enough or crazy enough now! My personal feeling is, don't blame me if you don't like her: This kind of young lady should be the kind of girl who, even if she is not around, will make you horrified to find that her breath is present in every step and every glance when you think about it. Her figure makes you feel her forbidden, hot, crazy, and suffocating feeling like drowning all the time! Love! In comparison, the second lady of the Liu family is a bit less interesting, she is only a little crazy when she dives into the water to save corpses.

After all, character creation also takes the screenwriter's energy. It's normal to die, but it would be too wasteful to die every now and then. And if there are two versions, it depends on the production capacity. If the production capacity is low, it may not be possible to shape the characters well.

Why are they all praising? Are they deleting posts with great intensity? Where is Shennong?

Dog planning, the male protagonist has been set up a hundred times, and he still wants to enjoy it? Nausea

It is my first time to write an article at Qidian. I am not used to the platform, and the various adjustments in writing methods during the transition period will inevitably cause discomfort to readers. I would like to trouble all readers who are willing to read it if you encounter a plot that you think is problematic. Please help us to provide feedback on this page so that I can adjust the problem as soon as possible [For example, many people have recently reported that the author Wenqing suffered from illness, and the creator himself was not aware of it. Please specify which plot it is] Thank you for your hard work

Jie Jie Jie, Ah Jing's new book, let's take a look

The protagonist feels more and more like a mother-in-law, without that kind of decisive and rational thinking. At the beginning, the protagonist had a sense of wisdom, and I felt that he was the kind of rational, unpredictable, and stable temperament... The kind that no matter what happens, he will solve it calmly. Even if he is a little surprised, he will quickly find the key and end it... But the later the protagonist's quality declines faster and faster, first the corpse-eating girl at the beginning, then the carefree girl at the end, and then the boss, the leader of the Jinyiwei... Wow! Isn't it too senseless? I know that they are protective or helpful to the protagonist, but based on the protagonist's performance, it doesn't look like they particularly need others to help them make decisions, and they don't have the feeling of indifference to humanity that the Man-Eating Tree mentioned. The protagonist's status is lowered again and again... First he recognizes his mother, then his master, and then he recognizes his brother... Of course I know that these are just the protagonists who seem to be of lower seniority, but the problem is that before they recognize these relatives, the protagonist's original seniority is higher than them. Isn't this just taking advantage of others? Especially the Bai family. Even if he doesn't recognize him, the protagonist himself is senior to the entire Bai family, and there is basically no use for the Bai family. At most, he needs the help of the Bai family for some things, and ends up recognizing his eldest brother out of nowhere... Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The author's writing is still very good, and I like it very much, so I just hope that the book will get better and better.

It's been a month since I opened the book, and I'm finally here to test the waters. It's almost five in the morning and I'm still tossing and turning and can't sleep, so I opened my mouth to ask for a vote from all my readers To be honest, this book has a rough start. The title and introduction are messy, and I don't grasp the rhythm of the beginning very well. Thank you readers for your continued support, otherwise it would be really difficult to write on a single machine. This article... As you can see, there is no system and no upgrade. But I guarantee that I did my best to write it well enough. Basically, I didn't get much work, so I just let the brothers do the work. I hope that readers who can continue to read can help promote it in the future and reward a few tickets. Hey, let me tell you from my conscience, who doesn't write articles for the sake of popularity and to make money? I really hope to advance to the second round. I can't guarantee updates these days, but I will ensure that the quality of the articles does not decline. Don't overdo it, don't mess up the rhythm just to break the news. I hope you readers of Radio Wave will enjoy watching it. I also hope that my novels can be recognized by more people.

How come the protagonist's seniority has always declined, and now he has two mothers and one father?

The writing is getting more and more mother-in-law-like, not as stunning as the beginning, and it only has so many words. What kind of hobby? After more than fifty chapters, I have recognized two fathers and one mother. Putting aside these two points, the writing is very beautiful.

I love it. My sister wrote it very well. I love it.

Little slut, let me watch you to death, Jie Jie Jie

I'll go, God's Book, I can give it an eight out of ten.

Brothers, I just want to ask Is the author Dahao an old pigeon I read it today and found that it was updated a day ago I felt something wrong in my heart I will moisten it if it is

The writing is quite good, but the update is too slow, and it stops as soon as the mood comes up. I guess the results will not be very good.

Just two words, just read it

This new book title looks like there will be players or something like that