A Literary Career That Started in High School

With so many "ah"s, I thought you were writing an H book.

Do you still need to study for a literary major? There is no need to learn it, maybe you still plan to create it yourself?

Just stop writing that the main character is handsome, that's disgusting.

The writing is smooth and there's nothing pretentious about it. It's just that there are too few updates. I'm afraid I'll die if I keep on using it.

Your online article can be considered a written work. Why do you use so many modal particles such as "ah" and "ah" in descriptive paragraphs? Writing is not about dictating to readers. The wording and some "educational" parts all have this sense of déjà vu.

I like it. Different from other writers' works, there is not so much violence. It's just comfortable to create.

I remember that Xiao Longnu was raped because Jin Yong's dream lover got married. It seemed to be called Xia Meng. I forgot where I saw it. It seemed to be a program on TV.

Before I express my opinion, I'd like to put my foot down first. What I am saying is just to give the author a reference. It is not a guideline or a pointer. It is just a reference for the author. 1. The cultural level of the protagonist is a bit too low. A poem like Mochizuki can be written by an 18-year-old boy, but it cannot be written by an 18-year-old boy with no cultural background. 2. You don't need to write about so many hostile people. It's a bit boring to keep the same routine.

Is it possible for a group of Eastern faces to play Westerners? It's not impossible, but when I think of all the Eastern faces in a Western background, it makes me feel uncomfortable. . . Very weird

Martial Arts Dance is waiting for your next theme

The last 20 chapters don't feel particularly good. I suggest you adjust it. I'll give you two monthly votes first.

First, the early emotional scenes were so well written, why not continue writing them? Secondly, starting from the early graduation from college, the plot is very cliche. I have always just written books, published them, been questioned, and then pretended to be slapped in the face. Although it's fun to watch, it's really boring if you watch too much of it. Third, why is there no book club group? ps I am a genuine reader and read it on QQ Reading.

Just wait a minute. Do I have any misunderstandings about literary figures? What did you copy?

Why don't you write about your daily life now? Just repeat new books, reviews, reactions. I recently looked at the catalog title and knew the general content, so I didn't want to order it at all.

It feels comfortable to watch, and there are no disgusting things 😁

The writing is not as good as that copy. That one is really good.

Um? Cat vest? Your idea is really similar to Mao Mao's book. Have you opened a trumpet?

What a great book, read it quickly and absorb the material of your own book

How is this book? Worth seeing?