Purgatory Script, but in the Style of Love? !

Supernatural, harem, upgrade, past and present lives - I passed this book three times in a row, but ignored it because of its poor performance and lack of interest in the introduction. It was not until yesterday that I clicked on it. This book will undoubtedly score very high marks for readers who like related topics. The descriptions of the harem are numerous but not complicated, and there is no such thing as my least favorite description of being so crowded that they cannot coexist and cause trouble to the protagonist. On the contrary, although there are descriptions of mutual displeasure, they are kept at an appropriate level and will not give people an offensive feeling. The upgrade is not so much an upgrade, but it gives me the feeling that the protagonist is getting back the power that belongs to his past. And I didn't feel that it was forcibly increasing or suppressing the protagonist's combat power. On the contrary, some temporary enhancements or weakenings (such as the maid lady being shattered on the floor) will only give people a reasonable feeling. The rhythm is so well controlled that one wonders if the author is the reincarnation of a little-known veteran. As well as the supernatural, there are many books about romance that use the supernatural as a gimmick. However, in the later period, these books became pure love, and the supernatural became a dispensable addition. But this book has so far kept the supernatural as its main theme, rather than gradually diluting the supernatural. What can be seen is that not only has the supernatural not been diluted, but it has become an important part of advancing the plot and meeting new characters. This is what I am most satisfied with. As for other parts worth talking about, it lies in the author's emotional description. Switching the perspective to enrich the character from the perspective of the supporting character is undoubtedly a tricky method, but it is also a very useful method. This avoids the lack of character description in the main plot, making the characters appear thin and one-sided. The first thing readers see is a three-dimensional and comprehensive character, and due to the setting of the past and present life, the emotional warming of the protagonist and the female character later is not abrupt or blunt. All in all, this is a good book with few poisonous points, compact plot, moderate intensity, and rich character descriptions. It is worth reading. As for the reason why it is not popular now... I think it may be that the scope of this book is too small, but I don't really understand this aspect, so I will just mention it briefly. The author will update soon!

I didn't expect to see Riqing's writing 😍😍😍 on the starting point. To be honest, maybe to cater to the market? Most of the light novels in Qidian. Com are written in third person. They lack the first-person perspective and the switching of character perspectives in Nissei. Emotional expressions are separated by a layer, especially in the genre of youth love. I feel that the essence of Nissei has not been learned. However, the content of each plot is a bit thin, which makes the plot arrangement seem a bit tight. Overall, it is a good book, and it may be more suitable for those who like to read Nikki. I think it is better than some of the books at the top of the monthly ticket list, come on! (Personal sense)

Teacher, code well! No eunuchs! Come on, this is what you do

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This is my first time reading this genre, but it's very interesting and the plot is also good. Come on, author, please update soon.

Water the seedlings. This book looks good. The author is writing so that it doesn't seem to fall off. Come on, keep reading.

I haven't slept yet today. After reading it, I understood the charm of light novels. The light novel is wrapped in a heavy core, which is both freehand and true. This world may be hard, but we can live more comfortably.

My guess is that there are light novels of this quality on daily reviews, and I finished them without paying attention.

I found out that there is a rare and excellent book in Japanese Derivation Poison. I voted for it every month. Come on.

Brother, there is nothing wrong with what you have written, but it is too little. The impression of the follow-up is very poor. Basically, the impression of the follow-up update that requires writing a copy is not good. Everyone wants to support it. There is nothing wrong with your book. I will order it first.

A rare piece of food, but the plot is a bit confusing. There seems to be no description of whether the protagonist knows that Qingmei is dead at the beginning.

This book is so well written, why has no one read it?

I found that the author seems to like to write storyboard-style chapters with a single character's perspective. I'm not saying it's bad, but this book is a story from the male protagonist's perspective after all. Of course, it can be like this for the male protagonist. It would be boring to have a chapter where the character recalls killing from the first perspective. The more you read, the more distorted the description becomes. As a result, I feel that there is a strong sense of separation between their own characters and the relationship surrounding the male protagonist. The completion of the character should start after the appearance and experience with the protagonist, either as an introduction to the incident or as a filler to complete the character's personality. Nothing has happened to each other yet. And it feels a bit abrupt to start describing her past from a first-person perspective after she has already passed the stage of establishing her character. Using the third person does not have such a strong sense of separation. I have seen this kind of writing more often in memories after experiencing major events (or in the process of plot needs), or as a new character. At the beginning of the character design, the first-person perspective in novels is actually a thankless and difficult act to use well. Except for those supernatural beings known for their sense of substitution, tomb-robbing novels rarely maintain this tone. The big-eyed Xiling Empire had to change more than eight million words of chapters because of the first-person perspective problem. Again, I am not saying that I hate this kind of writing. The main reason is that it is used too frequently in dozens of chapters. There is no need to use the first person in the first chapter that is not a necessary plot link or character setting. It is still a first person that basically has nothing to do with the male protagonist.

Here I would like to explain why the author's recent update time is not very stable. The idiot author was deceived into becoming a black slave. He still has to be a black slave for more than half a month. During this period, the author will be from six in the morning to twelve in the morning. Please forgive this idiot.

It's a pity. There is an original design, but the writing is still very immature.

Light novels are indeed quite difficult. This book should have done better.

Don't cut it, don't worry, I'll cover it for you to continue reading, and I'll give you all the money during the period ❤️

Fuck, watching this with the lights off at night scared me so much that I even turned on the lights 😡

New readers, don't read the comment section, just rush in and you're done.

Is it really a cure and not a cause of depression? Please be sure. Please don't use the knife. 😭😭😭😭😭

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The reason for the author's dismal performance this month is probably that the timeline of Xiaoxun's copy is too long, and there is relatively little interaction between the two, whether in reality or in the novel. Also, the author is playing guessing games with us. There are several plots that you have to watch later to understand. If you don't grasp the rhythm, you will really not be able to watch it if you don't have the patience. But overall this novel is worth reading

Burn incense, summon the soul, and bring the soul back