After Creating a Weird Sequence, the World Regretted Stabbing Me in the Back

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This introduction is too clownish and trashy, right?

The idea of ​​this book is good, it is relatively novel, but the logic in the book is not enough, there are too many flaws, behind-the-scenes stories, but the traces left by the protagonist are too obvious and too obvious, making people think that everyone else in the world is an idiot, which makes readers feel that it is just a mindless and enjoyable book. This is a point where progress can be made. There is also the creation of characters. At the beginning, the story is okay, but gradually the appearance of characters is too sudden. Since you want to write about behind-the-scenes, creator, and group portraits, then you should shape each character well and polish the stories of different characters, instead of creating a bottle of medicine and then adding such a person. I hope the author can go further.

How do you feel about it being a studio article? Is it too early to charge for only twenty chapters?

I quickly came across someone else's explanation and came over to read it.

Seeing it now, I already feel a little embarrassed and not very exciting. Let's save it and take a look.

It's basically the same as Tomato's, except that Tomato's doesn't have a system.

The author greatly requests an update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I came to read it because of the novel subject matter, but I felt that the content of the work was a bit random. Like in this chapter, Li Ran was discovered to be the murderer of his son without any plot or clues. At least there was surveillance on the street. The pace was a bit too fast.

Renew! Renew! ! Renew! ! !

Come on, author, after all, there is still a lot of room for improvement. I also came here after watching the video. Although the video is not as enjoyable to watch, there is more room for improvement and the writing is pretty good. It's not a piece of writing anymore

It looks good, but a little bit

System? Will he be the kind of person who is awesome without any brains and systems?

There is no heroine. Is the protagonist a eunuch?

It's not buddy. Is it over?

When will the author release a new book?

Can anyone send me all the pictures from the beginning to now? Please

Can I still continue reading? The author's CPU is dry?

Is it going to stop updating? It was agreed not to be a supervisor. Although the writing power is not enough. But it's quite creative

When will the author update?