Don't Say My Script Is Fake

The time traveler is not the protagonist, Zhao Qinghan is the protagonist. This is not a time travel article, but a systematic article by Zhao Qinghan.

"What happened two hundred thousand years ago?" "Two hundred thousand years ago... What do you think of the way of heaven?" "Well... Although the way of heaven is ruthless, the way of heaven is impartial" "Yes... The way of heaven is impartial! The way of heaven is impartial!! It's because He is ruthless! But what will happen if He is sentient?" >"This... I don't know" "Alas~ Back then, the entire world of spiritual practice had reached its peak, and the way forward was not obvious, so someone proposed that 'the world can be raised to a higher dimension by raising the world'. Many powerful experts deduced the way forward, and finally came to the conclusion that 'the three talents of heaven, earth and man can be used to raise the world's dimension'" "Then what happened next?" "Oh, what happened later? Tiandao has the desire to control the three realms, so he came up with the "Fighting of Heaven". "So, what is the purpose of Emperor Si Tian?" "What! How is this possible?" One of the treasures of the Tao, the soul seducing rope, belongs to the tunnel. There is nothing wrong with getting the earth book and reopening the tunnel. It's just that this guy is a little greedy and wants to surpass those guys and become the master of the tunnel."

This book is a 💩heart cake covered in cream. I thought it tasted pretty good before I ate the filling. Although it had a bit of a strange smell, it didn't affect the overall situation. Until I ate the filling, I thought it was chocolate at first. After taking a big bite, the author turned out to have made a big lump.

After reading the author's profile, I found that the comment section of his last book was terrible, but this profile is very attractive, and he dared to open both! You shouldn't be force-feeding shit in the middle, right?

I think it's best to start accumulating this kind of cheat from small lies. As the saying goes, a lie requires multiple lies to complete. If you don't create a big scene in the early stage, other powerful people won't pay attention at all. Otherwise, it will trigger a search by those powerful people. Doesn't this world of immortality not even have the ability to search for souls? That's up to you

The beginning is to fall in love with the system. . . . This joke is so vulgar, and it also has to count the number of words. Don't you know that the first three chapters can probably determine the score of the entire book? How can the orthodox Great God Book start like this? It's really just twenty or thirty words, so I'm sure it's not what I want to read. Thanks to the author, the main theme is a true feeling. Write down the characteristics at the beginning. To prevent us trolls from seeing too much and just trolling blindly

The writing is not good, but it is a bit new. I am willing to subscribe, but you asked me for twenty coins for this chapter. I bought it and read it. Half of it was various explanations and my own thoughts and opinions, as if discussing it in a forum, but I paid to discuss it with you? You can make a pamphlet about some things. If you don't mind the trouble, write and send a pamphlet. It's wrong to include it in the text and ask for money. It's acceptable if you have fewer words. The problem is that at least half of it is nonsense. As for the story behind it, it's a Nuwa. You talk about the origin of Nuwa, and the story of the magical soldier Xuanqi and the young general. If you also explain things, it gives me the feeling that you are not writing a novel, but chatting with people and talking about your imagination. When you talk about one thing, you talk about other things, and then continue to talk about your imagination, and then explain this thing or this person. There are several stories and settings behind it, just like chatting and talking about other things. I ordered a few chapters on the shelf. I just skipped and read. There was a lot of skipping, but the plot progressed just like that. Then I read it in succession at the Nuwa Temple. One card was twenty, and you went out after three or four, but what did you write? Oh, we introduced the peach tree, the magic weapon egg, and here comes the giant spirit dragon. Did you read it again after you sent it? If you don't correct the typos, you won't read the plot yourself? Are you really just going to post it when you are happy? In Pantao, you talked about the longevity star, the Antarctic Immortal, and the Immortal Emperor. The Pantao Society has also been adapted. Introducing the Divine Weapon Egg, you talked about Nuwa, and also talked about the characters of Shenbing Xuanqi and Shenbing Xiaojiang. Shenbing Xuanqi, Nuwa Zeus, is an alien high-tech creature, but you only take a little plot and don't write these. The situation of the giant dragon in the two stories is blah blah blah. No, buddy, I really can't help it, there's too much nonsense. If you want to write it for free as a hobby, let's read it and discuss it together. If you think it's free, some people will criticize you. You're writing the book for yourself, so just write a statement. There's a lot of nonsense in the book, please subscribe with caution You'll cost me ten points for the normal plot, and ten points for your nonsense. These twenty starting points will make you crazy, bro. Especially if you copied this myth or that story in a normal plot, it was just fine when it was first released. You said it would not do anything, but the prerequisites are all there and you must do it (Ye Huohuo plot). You wrote these in and included them in the paid chapters. It was okay, there were not many words, and the further it went, the more outrageous it became. Then there was the chapter where I jumped to the Nuwa Temple, and the sky was full of nonsense.

Just make up two people, an unknown hero, who does all the good things that no one knows who does it, and a villain who takes the blame, and he does all the bad things that no one knows who does it.

It's not bad, it's just that the people in the world are unlucky to meet such a protagonist.

Seeing that Rain Master couldn't stand it anymore, the protagonist didn't even have a plan for what he was doing. He was just someone who used the system to play games with the world, right? The wholesale boss slaughters ordinary people in large numbers, and the people buried among the indigenous people feel like they are just tools to play with the indigenous people of this world. The protagonist's hanging system can release monsters that exceed the world's top combat power at the beginning. Rather than finding a place in the new world, what the protagonist is asked to do is more like constantly using the system to send bosses to show off in front of the natives of this world and beat up children in the kindergarten.

It's so well written, I'm so excited. Don't write it next time. Go to the factory and screw it.

The part before it was put on the shelves was barely edible, but after it was put on the shelves, it directly exposed its true nature😅 Geneva, refund your money! 😅

The common people and ordinary monks feel the same as in a difficult situation. It is automatically refreshed at 0 o'clock, otherwise they would have died long ago. You create a new character and die in a continent and half a continent. Are you planning to create a dozen characters and just play with your left hand and right hand every day? If you don't even have a native character, what else can you do to practice? Or does it count if you create a character letter? If so, why can't it be created directly? At present, it seems that there is no outline, so you can write whatever you want, and then forcefully fill in the settings. After completing the settings, you will mess around, and then there will be infinite matryoshka dolls?

Now I'm completely wasting my money on Shui Zi Shu. Don't read the rest. I started doing Shui Zi Shu after it was put on the shelves.

Emperor Jun is the Emperor of Demon Court. According to the records of Shan Hai Jing, he is the first Emperor of Heaven on the land of China.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Take time travel as an example, being deceived by the system is quite novel, but why does the system deceive you? What is the purpose? There is no explanation. Do you simply want to find a host? There has to be a process for making a lie come true, how to make it come true, how to make it come true, what conditions are needed, and a brief introduction. Why the protagonist does these things, and what the protagonist can get are not expressed. Of course, if the protagonist is a fun person, then just pretend that I didn't say anything. The most basic golden first three chapters have nothing to express. Suddenly fast forwarding to the main plot is very abrupt, and I don't know how it came about. Let's talk about the plot. Let's talk about the world view first. There is no introduction to the character background. I only know the name of the heroine who appears first, and nothing else. It is all supplemented bit by bit at the back. It is all scattered and unclear. It all depends on the reader's imagination. It is very confusing and has no idea what the plot wants to express. The novel should be a behind-the-scenes, group-portrait article. Personally, I think the novel's excitement should be brought about by the impact of different worldviews. The novel's description of the indigenous worldview is very important, because the impact of the worldview is an impact on the indigenous people. Otherwise, where would the excitement come from? The author's introduction is okay, and there is no big problem. Many people fall into the trap because of this, but after reading more than ten chapters, I can't see that it has anything to do with the introduction. The above are purely personal opinions

The classic Lu Zhan novel was quite exciting before it was put on the shelves. As for after it was put on the shelves, tsk tsk tsk, I understand everything. It is recommended to only watch free content.

I wrote it too hastily. I wanted to express it all at once, and I wanted to give people a shocking feeling, but the writing was too rough and it seemed messy. This kind of novel is not suitable for writing too rough and messy. It should be written slowly to give people a natural shock. Currently, it is all booked, which makes me feel that it is not worth it. Some parts are ready to be abandoned.

The introduction is pretty good, but the content is really mediocre.

I feel like the Si family is a bit funny. Let's add some settings to them, otherwise we won't be able to write the main character.

Author, you have a good idea, but your writing skills need to be improved. To be honest, if your writing skills keep up with this idea, it will definitely be platinum, but your writing style is really just like... Like a primary school student writing an essay. The content in a chapter is too complicated, and the greed for too much will make the narrative unclear, and the reader will have a question mark when reading. (I suggest you read Master Gu's new book and learn from his writing style. Several major events happened in one chapter, but his writing style is not messy and the narrative is clear)

After the book was released and before it was released, basically, after the book was released, the author pulled out too many things at once, suppressing all the forces in the original world, and almost turned it into looking at the origin of mythology and the disputes between various schools of thought. Moreover, the author also plans to create three parallel eras: mythology of the ancient times, hundreds of schools of thought, and two hundred thousand years ago. The three lines are parallel. It is not clear which of the three is the main line, which leads to a sense of separation. Coupled with the fact that the author's writing style cannot convey emotions, this makes this book very boring to read, especially the chapter on Zhuzi Baijia that I saw combined these things together, which is extremely discouraging.

There are actually two-thorned apes coming in behind, 🐮13, see you soon

The writing is not good. I feel like the villain has no chance of winning. There are too many typos. A ruler is almost invincible. It highlights how powerful the villain is. But as soon as the results come out, the character is completely lost. The villain is written as too weak.

So pretty! I couldn't help but feel excited when I saw it. In a word, the author is awesome!

AI writing? After reading eight chapters, I can hardly stand it anymore. There are no descriptions at all. Isn't this just a running account? It's a messy setting and it's hard to write a dry review...

Very well written👏

Damn, I got it too early, it's not satisfying

There are too many typos, and the author doesn't correct them, and the names are often wrong. The chapter about Red Dragon is called Feng Bo and Rain Master, which gives people a headache.

I've read dozens of chapters and it's very well written, but I don't have a sense of immersion. It's all a group show, and the protagonist is completely behind the scenes. I hope there's more plot for the protagonist.