Panlong, Pick up the Main Godhead at the Beginning

Fellow author, I suggest you calm down, separate yourself from the subjective perspective, and then read chapters 18-48 yourself. Chapter 30 of an important battle has been written. Do you think this is what readers want to read?

Lower gods can refine space rings. Since you are writing a fanfic, you should read the original work carefully, otherwise you should not write it.

Space rings are very rare. They are for those in the holy realm and below. The protagonist of this book is Shura. Space rings are like family heirlooms. You know how to use poison.

The whole book is written about the grudges with the four divine beast families. As a result, the protagonist's middle god is chased and killed by the lower god, and in the end he has to rely on Augusta. The protagonist is set off the same as 💩. Later, Augusta couldn't feel happy even after killing all the four divine beasts. It was the same as the main story about abuse.

The God of War, a lower-ranking god who refines the godhood, would give away space rings casually. It is estimated that refining space rings should be very easy for the god.

These 8,000 words are worth 7,500, which is ridiculous. No wonder no one has read it. It's so procrastinating. Look at the two chapters you recently updated. The word count is 15,000, but 13,000 is worth it. It's all such nonsense. Goodbye.

There is also a possibility that something like the main godhead cannot be inserted into a space ring. The reason is that Beirut specially built a cemetery of the gods to install the main godhead. If the space ring can be installed, there is no need to be so troublesome and it is safer. Secondly, if the space ring can be installed, the main godhead may be hidden, and the main god is the manager of the magic universe. For the sake of convenience, it is probably normal that it cannot be installed.

Is it still necessary to read this? We are watching the protagonist grow up, but the author describes the battle between the four mythical beasts at great length, which is not interesting or intelligent, and also deviates from the theme. The battle between the four mythical beasts is also written as a game.

The settings are okay according to my personal feelings. At least it's not a cliche opening of Magnolia Continent. The writing feels okay. At least it's readable. It's just watery. However, the free chapters are at least not worth the money. Playing a bloody battle stage and playing more than ten chapters is free anyway. Just don't vote. There are some details, which makes me a little bit sad. 1. The protagonist lost a high-level god who has been practicing for billions of years, and whose soul seed controls all the middle gods in the plane. He only got a space ring, and the upper-level god didn't seem to explain it (I didn't notice it anyway, and I didn't understand why he didn't take it with him to the underworld as a starting capital, and stayed in the material plane to refine and save his life in emergencies. It still needs to be It takes time, and you can't become a main god after refining, I can't figure it out), there is no high-level artifact of the high-level god (the two high-level artifacts mentioned in the article were both refined by the protagonist), and there is no mention of other materials collected by the high-level god (billions of years, the high-end combat power is still controlled by him, even in the material plane, there is no chance of anything good None of them 🤔 Even if there are no good things, it is impossible to only have a space ring. This is the only high-level god before the protagonist in this plane...) He just let him go without receiving any benefits from the middle-level gods who besieged the protagonist. He is really a good person 🙂 2. The protagonist's character design before and after There is a big contrast (many people who have read the last few chapters are saying this). Before going to the underworld, I was either obedient or not, at least not arrogant, and a cautious type. After arriving in the underworld, I had no start-up capital and no high-level artifacts, so I started fighting on the bloody battlefield, sharpening my sword and chopping firewood. Invincible in the material plane but submissive, small in the highest plane but ignoring risks? Before getting the main godhead, you can spend hundreds of years cultivating to reach the higher god's revenge, you can spend nearly a million years integrating the mysteries, and you can have nearly ten thousand years to practice the rules of death. After getting the main godhead, if you haven't made progress in thirty years, you can conclude that you can't make progress unless you reach the divine plane, right? That's a bit too arbitrary 🙂 After all, you haven't made any progress for three thousand years before going on. No one knows that the main godhead is in your hands, and it's not the supreme god's mission and the instruction manual may be exposed. In the nearly one million years of practice, you haven't tempered your character at all? Schrödinger is cautious, right? 3. Villain setting Some people say that the four divine beast families all rob, so how can they use strategies? I think everyone has their own opinions. After all, the general direction is that there are always a few unique ones 🙂, which is acceptable, but the training setting of the protagonist, tsk, is full of routines. On the way to the city, there is a robber who dares to offend the protagonist. They said the plane of gods was too big, and then randomly went to a city and started to challenge and experience, and they met the elders of the Four Divine Beasts family planning. At this time, why not say that the plane of gods was too big, and then force the elders to have murderous intentions (but according to the explanation in the article and the original setting of the Four Divine Beasts family, this is not very forceful). The protagonist killed the elder decisively. Personally, I think this The plot is a bit outrageous in that it is forcibly pushed forward. Most of the time it will be the attack of the four divine beast families, and the protagonist will fight back, break through in danger, and hug his thigh. Of course, it is just a routine 🙂 To sum up, it is watery. A few chapters cannot push a plot. The protagonist is a five-melted Shura, fighting a three-melted level, relying on the blood of a seven-star demon, even if he has The power of the main god, but from chapter 26 to chapter 34, there is basically no plot advancement in the middle. You are the legendary water master 🙂. As for some secondary designs, as long as they don't obviously conflict with the original work, they are fine. But the legacy of the upper god is basically zero. The contrast between the protagonist before and after going to the underworld depends on your acceptance. Others are just fine.

This is the most devouring fan I have ever seen! In the underworld, in order to trigger a conflict with the four divine beast families, twenty or thirty chapters of the "Challenge Challenge" were prepared. The four divine beast families came to seek revenge. They sat in the plane teleportation array and lost a whole chapter (Chapter 52)! I am really convinced, the author Ning is the real "Water System Dzogchen"

I was so frustrated that I just looked at the catalog without any desire to read any more and subscribe.

Right, right, right, after getting the main godhead, I can't break through the upper gods. I want to write an invincible article, but I have to suppress it. What's the point?

Maybe I don't read enough books, but this is the first time I've read a 9,000-word novel without a protagonist. The author writes well. Please read this book when you have time.

There are a lot of problems with the details. Beirut's use of his tail to hook the main god's corpse and main god's personality is said to be his body entering the space turbulence, and he also relies on the strength of his body to move. Why can Beirut move in the space turbulence? Is swimming based on high physical strength?

Author, this one of yours is too watery. The amount of 8,000 is 6,000. Let's talk about the four divine beasts, one thousand protagonists, and one thousand Aiken heading to the material plane. If this continues, I won't read it.

I suggest the author change the title of the book to: Panlong, my battle with the grudges and hatreds of the four mythical beast families.

Author, have you achieved great perfection in the water system?

Do you need to write so much content that has nothing to do with the protagonist? Doesn't the main god of the four beasts kill people? Are they all decorations? Is it necessary for the protagonist to stay in the divine plane? You have offended the four divine beasts to death, shouldn't you immediately escape back to the material plane? Isn't the focus at this stage immediately on cultivating the water god clone to great perfection? If you want to stay in the divine plane, you must take refuge in a master, be protected by the master, or at least have a supreme soul defense artifact to ensure that you can survive safely in the period of the four divine beasts. Why are you still staying outside God? The characters in the story should be intelligent, able to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and be able to actively analyze and think about problems on their own. They should not stay in the divine plane to satisfy the need for leeches. When writing a book, you must learn to conceive the plot yourself.

Just put it on the shelves. . . I've read Chapter 20, but I won't read the rest. I'll wait until the main character comes out in your catalog. . .

I just watched it, and it is really too watery. I wrote about a battle in more than ten pictures, and it slipped away. . .

The original work is about the main god of light using three supreme artifacts to kill the four divine beasts. The protagonist is a middle god. If caught by the four divine beasts, he will die 🥵. They did not violate any agreement between the main gods by killing the protagonist.

Any series has its own lethality, don't let it fail at every turn.

The six mysteries of the water law are water element, water body technique, water movement technique, mist illusion, ice sharpness, and roundness. Where does the mystery of mirror image come from? ? ?