Top-Notch, Start over from Lianzong

This is a novel disguised as a romance variety show + a music variety show. If you write a romance variety show, you should write it well, and here comes an amateur trash that no one dares to mess with. His behavior is very classless and he wants to get into the industry to make money. It's disgusting! I'm here to see the candy, not to eat the garbage. I don't care about the priority.

The writing is good, but the pace... It's already fifty-five chapters, and it's not exciting at all 😰 The first exciting point is probably the first party singing. It's chapter fifty-five and it hasn't started yet, and the protagonist is unlikely to be the first to perform. According to this rhythm, it will be the protagonist's turn for at least sixty chapters... It's a bit too slow~ The writing is okay, but the reality is really not interesting. The character of the protagonist is not particularly likable, although he is not annoying either, it just feels like this.

The narrative is very flat. After reading the novel for more than ten years, it feels like the author wrote it for himself.

There is a suspense at the beginning. How did the all-powerful protagonist end up like this? It doesn't even say how bad his reputation is. Unfortunately, the middle part is too dull and not interesting for people to understand. Instead, it focuses on writing and writing. It feels like suspense is filling the cake.

Where is the water deep? Did you write 100 words less?

This book... Feels like you have completely missed your focus.

Not bad. The expectations are raised very well.

I went to sing. Give me a song to soothe my sorrows. Is the literary youth suffering from illness?