Heavens: Ninety-Nine Clones of Me Hug Each Other's Thighs

Brother, you don't seem to understand the essence of Tongchuanliu. It's all about yourself. Why are there bad people? If a person can't even trust himself, then why are he still alive?

To tell a joke, the protagonists can attack each other in the shared space and hurt each other.

To tell a cold joke, Jiangnan wrote about Lu Mingfei, and the author wrote a lot about Lu Mingfei.

So when the protagonist goes to sea, he meets Creek who was cut down by Hawkeye while he was on the Grand Line. At this time, Luffy is still a child with red hair and just sacrificed his hand 😰?

I just finished reading Dragon Clan, let me briefly talk about my thoughts after reading it. This is the first time I have seen the astronomy of two worlds written in 140,000 words at Qidian. The full text gives me the feeling of reading a simplified and expanded version of the detailed outline. First of all, it was Pirates. The protagonist traveled through time and was picked up by Master Zoro. Then the time jumped to eighteen years later. The protagonist became stronger inexplicably. There was no process of getting stronger, no process of getting along with the characters, nothing. He just mentioned it and saved the dead characters in the original work. Then he thanked the teacher for his concern, took the knife, and left. No, buddy, you write like this and I'm watching a fair? It doesn't matter what you want, just highlight a hole. Then there is the Dragon Clan, which also has no twists and jumps in the plot. The protagonist runs into the country for no reason, goes to find the Lion Road for no reason, and has a fight with Constantine for no reason. Constantine, who is in a violent state, also helps the protagonist reshape his body. No buddy, what is the process? Write down all the key points of the original work, and everything else doesn't matter, right? It's really awesome, man, you're so cool

In this kind of multi-faceted book, the main character is so trashy. I really didn't see it. The combined power of several worlds was unable to suppress the natives. Hanging it is the same as not opening it.

The author probably has never read the original work. The biggest selling point of the fan fiction is not the plot, but the characters. Readers have a certain understanding of the characters, which can reduce the text of character creation. The author's One Piece situation in the first chapter completely destroyed the original characters. The two generals were covered up with the same character spectrum. The plot is completely inconsistent with the logic of the anime story. It was very painful for fans of the original work. At least I was persuaded to quit.

Did the author not read the original work? The entire book reveals various specious setting bugs, such as magma turning into fireballs. 😰It feels like I started to follow the fandom after reading some.

I would like to make a suggestion for you to explain in advance that you should filter and read it to avoid being scolded. However, it seems that you have already written the free chapter and it doesn't matter whether you delete it or not. The main thing is about what you said, there are bad people in the clones, which means they will kill each other. Some people will definitely criticize this.

Laughing to death, different experiences in time travel will definitely lead to different personalities. Are all good people good? Are you writing a fairy tale?

Let me tell you a joke. With so many things that can influence each other, how do you rank the strength values ​​in the martial arts world? After writing for a long time, I still don't have my own system. It's just a mortal fight.

Forget about Japanese comics, the dragon clan uses a knife to look at people and kill them with one sword? ? ?

Very annoying, what is the difference between this dragon clan and the original?

The more the dragons looked at it, the less interesting it became. I don't know what's going on recently? There are more and more people writing about dragons. The plots are pretty much the same.

Um, I didn't understand it. Maybe because I was watching it too fast and jumped, I didn't see the image of the protagonist clearly, and I didn't know the protagonist's character, three views, etc. The plot felt a bit baffling.

I guess the author is a newbie, and the writing is very messy, and the timeline is also a mess. The protagonist is the same age as Robin, and then a few chapters later it is revealed that the protagonist is only two or three years older than Luffy. Good guy, Schrödinger's age is still nineteen forever.

Cosmic Wanted, the one played by Jet Li, if you kill yourself in a parallel world, your strength will increase. This is reasonable. If you divide it into so many parts, how can you become stronger if you don't kill them all?

This kind of tree can be on the list. He will be back at 7 o'clock.