The Archaeological Master of the Elf World

The author completely misses the point when writing this. We want to see that we are going to the ruins to explore and hunt for treasures, not for you to write about your daily life.

The Swampert returns to its original form, why doesn't your protagonist return to its original form? How nice to just go back to being an ape. Who is the Swamp Jumper? Is it the reincarnation of Kyogre? It's the original return.

Instead of writing archaeological conjectures, it is better to set up a time and space template, use the superpower talent of listening to the voice of history, and become unparalleled in the Pokémon world The daily bond with Pokémon in life, Pokémon training and battles, and the interaction with the original characters are what everyone wants to see.

As a newcomer, the plot arrangement is actually good, but the writing style is a bit immature, which may cause readers to feel that the flow of the story is not smooth at times, and the key point of attracting pronunciation is a bit difficult to grasp. However, the author has a good attitude, corrects mistakes, has a humble attitude, can learn lessons, and can see progress. This is really rare. There is an author named "Elf, I Can Hear the Voice of All Creatures" at the starting point. I said that his writing is not good, and he said to me, "Haha, why should colleagues slander colleagues?" I can't help it.

This Dragon's Lair is really boring. What's the Rayquaza statue of the old Yulong Clan? The three of them just lumped it together, and then abducted it. It was not fun at all. Even if they contacted the Yulong Clan for archeology later, the previous one was buried with unhatched eggs? It seems that it also makes archeology more difficult, and the scene is gone.

There is actually no big problem in the plot, but did the author use some AI editing tool after finishing writing the comma sentence break? It reads very strangely, and the look and feel is also very strange. It feels like normal breathing suddenly turns into manual gear. Commas appear in many places where there is no need for comma sentence breaks.

It's just that little, it's not enough for anyone to read. The foreigner next door saw it and thought I couldn't read. Please update it hard. 😆

It's a bit watery, but newcomers can understand it, and those who like a relaxed daily life can give it a try.

Follow Dawu to mine, and then study the excavated stone monument ruins with Sirona. The plot has been arranged for you, write it quickly 🤓😜

Focus more on Pokémon's past.

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Night Demon

Author Sang, how are your results? If no one subscribes, emmmmm, you can submit an outline. Use the experience of this book to write the next one. Although I don't support eunuchs and bad endings, it's just a matter of eating. It's not shabby 🙂