Naruto: the Puppet Master Should Control the Ninja World

The only unreasonable plot in this book is that there is no reasonable plot.

The Dawn Society was exposed so early. There were more than fifty jounin elites and more than three thousand chunin and genin. This number was basically not as large as the sand ninja's internal defense troops outside. The protagonist and their families could just change the country and restart. With such a strong power in hand, wouldn't it be nice to engage in the inheritance of several ninjas or Chiyo siblings from time to time? What can Scorpion do that the protagonist can't do? Just go to jail and expose the secret cards in hand to save the siege? The opportunity to fake death and hide in the dark to accumulate power has been wasted. What kind of identity should I have after controlling the third Kazekage?

When it comes to bewitching, you might as well write a protagonist with a retarded aura, otherwise the character will be as terrible as a retarded person.

Finished reading! I was a little confused, so I didn't say anything at the beginning. Maybe I was trying to attract readers, so I was bewitching White Fang. The subsequent dawn meeting, including the dreams of Orochimaru and Jiraiya, was very boring. What was even more outrageous was that he often went to see White Fang? The more you talk, the more you expose. How much do you look down on White Fang? Shouldn't the audience be behind the scenes? Do you accomplish your goals through various coincidences? The author should change it! Or re-open a book! Can't stand it anymore

It's not interesting. I always write about mental illness, schizophrenia, doppelgangers, etc. It's too poisonous.

You are not a real puppet master at all!

Author, your book is going to hit the streets, I'm telling you. Forget about the Secret Goldfinger, and add a mental patient, too many readers, right? I hope the author's next book will have a normal person's outlook on life, values, and worldview

At the beginning, Konoha White Fang made a suggestion and almost gave up. I only read it in Shuhuang. The mysterious audience path came too late. It is recommended to reveal the audience channel at the beginning, rather than showing related content plug-ins in the next dozen chapters. In the fast-paced era and the era of fast food writing, good plug-ins are a bright spot. As written by the author of the audience path. Just look forward to the collision between the advanced stage and the ninja world! So no need to hide it. Aren't you the authors of Golden Three Chapters? Readers all know it. Tell me about the cheats early to increase your expectations. 🙂 I won't tell you anymore, just in case you won't be happy. What to do if you are blocked. I wish you good health and no herniated discs. Ten minutes for writing and five minutes for running and fitness. Arrange your time reasonably. Enjoy silky smoothness.

Too inky. The protagonist is PUA Hatake Sakumo, and he has PUA for seven chapters, so let's just say he has a B slot. The next second he was imprisoned by his own people, and then Scorpion discovered his strength.

During a secret mission, Hatake Sakumo chose to save his teammates and gave up on the mission, causing the village to suffer huge losses. This man deserves to die. The third generation didn't take pleasure in punishing him on the spot because he failed to complete the task. Instead, he couldn't bear it and committed suicide. It's so funny.

Why did you break into the eunuch? Isn't the writing very good?

Is this a name change? I saw this afternoon that I still started to persuade Hatake Sakumo to defect.

Squirt, it's okay now, don't even look at it

It looks weird, I don't know why

After opening up wasteland and dividing the city, the author began to enjoy himself, and the protagonist's B level continued to decline. First, he talks to himself about the split personality of his clone, and then goes out to eat, drink, whore and gamble, and still insists on this line of pc. What is he trying to describe the protagonist? I only saw the author's own little thoughts 😥. It was originally a pretty good book about ideas, but unfortunately it failed because of the author's writing style and layout.

The author's books are inferior to each other, and the best one has to be Swarm of Insects

Fortunately it was just a false alarm

I looked at dozens of pictures and felt polluted and sad😅

Discuss Welfare Posts

I'll give you a monthly pass and update quickly 🙂

So far, all the Jonin who have appeared in the Hokage are masters, except for young Kakashi who just makes up the numbers.

What the hell? Audience approach?

The fifth-level author has been cut off, will the next book be a masterpiece 🙂