One Piece: Becoming a God Begins with Artificial Devil Fruits

To be honest, if I had to write a name for Zedu, I would just write about how good the Death God form of Renren is. I had to find a name that we were not familiar with, and it felt very unpopular.

The protagonist has now swallowed (Shadow Fruit, Menmen, Tuntun). In fact, if you really want to develop into a god of death, the [Underworld Fruit] is a must! (Communicate with the Netherworld, and an additional resurrection) and the [Darkness] corresponding to the [Nika] fruit. Only with the [Underworld Fruit] can you truly enter the underworld and communicate with the dead! The second is Auntie's [Soul Soul Fruit], the soul to It is very important for the God of Death. Whether it is a person who has just died or a person who has died a long time ago, as long as he communicates with the underworld, people will make the soul of the deceased into a shadow soldier, or possess others or the protagonist. You can also use Tuntun to directly swallow the soul to gain abilities and memories, thereby gaining the fruitful abilities and martial arts during life, so let me provide an idea (provided that the authority of the "God of Death" is truly completed). The current development is basically moving towards the Shadow King. Although the Shadow General is a bit like the Shadow Legion, maybe a fusion of the two, the real God of Death can fish people out of the Netherworld! ("Susui Fruit" can control [human lifespan] and The "Regression Fruit" can control a person's age, make them younger, and use it multiple times to directly erase a person's existence. Both are considered the authority of the God of Death) Complete Death = (Shadow+Darkness+Menmen+Tuntun+Huangquan+Suisui+Regression+Hunhun) Of course the author is like If you have a better idea (the cooperation of fruit), you can leave a comment below. To be honest, I didn't expect Sand Crocodile's sex change. It has so many girls. It would be good to write more emotional scenes. Generally speaking, the writing is very good. I read it on QQ and posted comments on both sides, so the author will reply. {"NickName":"Magical Keyboard Mushroom Girl","UserId":448147352}

In the first chapter, when I saw Kaido calling Kizaru the Flash Kid, I didn't want to read it. They are about the same age, which is too loose. The author said that he called him that because he was not familiar with him and he was a Marine. So would Kaido call Garp the Iron Fist Kid?

Objective evaluation: Advantages 1. The writing is good                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          .                 Disadvantages 1. The timeline is confusing and greatly deviates from the original work

Why are there so many typos? Can they be corrected?

This fruit of yours is not as strong as the Gate Fruit. Open a door in your opponent's stomach and throw a Devil Fruit in. It's like killing a chicken.

I hope the author will review it before publishing. There are many typos and many sentences that do not make sense. As a reader, I think your plot arrangement is pretty good, but because there are so many mistakes and omissions, it's hard to read the article. I have to mentally replenish your mistakes, which makes me a little tired. I hope the author can improve and create a masterpiece {"NickName":"Magic Keyboard Mushroom Girl","UserId":448147352}

After it was put on the shelves, even the time and the age of the characters were unclear.

Let's raise it first. I can't stand it anymore. There are too many people on the ship, and the bears I like have no sense of existence. There are a bunch of female crew members, and I want to take them. It's a trap where Yamato's protagonist's childhood sweethearts and bears join in. What's the point of taking in a bunch of inexplicable women? I feel like it's over, so I'll take care of them first.

There are a lot of typos. Author, couldn't you read it yourself and correct it before posting?

Let me see what's going on. Babys, please don't raise it. Please take care of the new book. At least read it on Tuesday, you will die of it

The protagonist can't even awaken his domineering domineering power...

You. . . It couldn't be that the author of the book called "Shadow Hangs Up" has been reincarnated, right? That book also had the shadow fruit awakening a phantom beast in the form of a god of death.

It's not easy. Finally found a novel that can understand the mechanism of Devil Fruit.

By the way, do you want to recycle Brook's underworld fruit? Under normal circumstances, I should do it.

Stir-fried keyboard girl🤓

The first thing that came to mind when I saw the title of the book was the one about artificial blue dragon. When I came in and took a look, to be honest, it was not as good as artificial blue dragon.

The more I write, the worse it gets. It was at its peak before it was put on the shelves.

Use the boss's treasured land to advertise.

Is Yamato's setting in your book a stupid comparison?

It looks pretty good, but there are too many typos and omissions. The author can make some corrections.

There are so many typos, serious word omissions, and different sentences.