Datang: Picked up a Little Princess at the Beginning

Oh my god, this book is simply a collection of ancient time travel pretense. After reading about 10 chapters, there are already poems about the Loli Princess, the reckless man Cheng Yaojin, watermelon, potatoes, sweet potatoes, pork, peppers, tomatoes, refined salt, hot pot, liquor, toothbrushes, Tai Chi, and Li Bai... It's not a question of whether it's good or not, and I'm shocked too often.

Brother, you pretend to be awesome in other books, and all the knowledge you wrote is in the public chapters. This not only causes the public chapter to appear dry and rushed, but also causes problems: What are you going to write about once it is published?

Unbelievable! I actually saw the historical fiction of the Tang Dynasty in 2008 in the 24th year of the starting point. I have to say that it is quite awesome. I admire it.

Please check the historical data. It is generally believed that watermelon was introduced from the Western Regions in the 9th century, and Li Shimin's period was only in the 7th century. It was two centuries earlier. How could he know watermelon? Cucumber was brought back by Zhang Qian on his mission to the Western Regions and was called Hugua. Shi Le, the founder of the Later Zhao Dynasty, strictly prohibited the word "Hu" from appearing, so Hugua was renamed cucumber. There is also a difference of several hundred years.

It feels like you have finished covering the B part of Chapter 1000 in Chapter 100!

I'm a newbie, and the writing in some parts may not be very good. The rhythm may be a little faster in the front, but it will slow down later. It is already being modified. I hope readers will be gentle 🔨

Good looking

In the past, Cheng Chumo was the male partner of the queen, but now he is always picking up either Changle or Jinyang.

Little princess

When I first said that I was a time traveler, the sense of mystery was gone, even though in recent years, this kind of book has been

Coordinates Chapter 216, that's it. Summary after reading: In general, there are no bad points, but there are a lot of flaws. The book is still interesting, but there are too many obscene elements, and there are contradictions in the context. Especially in my current period, when the heroine joins, everything starts to get weird and ghostly. Finally, there are so many flaws that I can't stand it anymore. What are the divisions and the company system? How can these be carried out alone without a complete environment and system? There are also many situations where modern cognition is unconsciously substituted for ancient people. It's meaningless to talk about too many shortcomings. What I want to say is that this book has advantages, but the shortcomings are so numerous that the advantages cannot outweigh them. It is undoubtedly a failed work. If the author wants to do better, he can learn from the failure experience of this book and use it in his next book. For example, under the premise of the story outline, the worldview structure should be generally logically consistent, and then the settings should be perfected in the process of writing the book. If it is a real worldview, then you must check more information, and don't overthink the plot. Believe me, this is really not humorous, and it will affect the reader's perception. That's all, it's a long journey, so I'll say goodbye. I hope to see you stand out in the sea of ​​books next time.

I might have read it 5 years ago, but now I know what's going to happen after just a few chapters.