Douluo Jueshi: Prepare to Moisturize the Sun and the Moon, the System Is Here

Egg

Xiaowu? Jiang Nannan

To be honest, the excitement of the first ten chapters of this book was ruined by the soul-hunting plot of the elder sister in the last 20 chapters... This soul-hunting plot is awkward and off-topic (the system is offline and the plot is boring). After the system comes back, it looks better, but the author still likes to go crazy in some chapters (such as Xu Sanshi's two chapters yesterday). Author, please be more reliable. Your current text "System" and "Run the Sun and the Moon" only touch on the system, so how to highlight this "system that is 10,000 years behind" should be the focus. Stop engaging in plots like soul hunting.

The more you scold Tang San in the book, the happier Tang San becomes. Why? He earns it for free, and he gets a cut of it from writing fan fiction.

It is recommended that the author go to B station to analyze and cut the video to work, it is a piece of water

Shui, more than half of the latest chapter is about the author or the protagonist's understanding of Douluo Continent, and the plot is very little.

It's really outrageous. You say you want to nourish the sun and the moon and fix those who have and don't have. You don't owe anyone else, you are really talented.

It's very ink, and it says that it will be polished into the final twenty or thirty chapters, or the plot of the dialogue with Shrek's people, and the plot of the 100,000-year-old soul beast is very confusing, and I don't know what I want to do.

The author only complains, the plot does not advance, and there is a lot of nonsense. Your writing is even uglier than Zhang Weidu's

It's all nonsense. Holding a super artifact is not as good as the original work.

Now I'm curious whether the system will recognize Tao Zi or Dong'er as Bai Chenxiang. After all, the protagonist is now "Ma Hongjun"

Xiaowu's mother

Three unique features

Your writing is off topic. You have written about Huo Yuhao who has not gone to the Sun and Moon with the Ice Emperor for 52 chapters. You have described so many Shrek chapters before and I don't know what to do. You can obviously do less, but you insist on getting involved with Shrek.

All Tang Sect disciples should not cause trouble easily

Let's first conclude that the Divine Seal Throne contains elixirs Even I've pressed my spiritual power, and the opposite side has raised a thousand spiritual powers I've only upgraded to a dozen levels

It's so chaotic, all timelines are messed up

Peach blackening

Now your book can really be renamed "Traveling through Huo Yuhao: This system and the world are in chaos"

It should be Han Ruoruo

It's so confusing, my brain is burned out

I don't know who the protagonist is and what he is doing?

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit poor

Who is the protagonist of this book? There are so many pictures at the back, but why don't they have the name of the protagonist? There are too many supporting characters, and the protagonist is drowned out.

There's so much inner drama, I don't even know what I'm looking at

The plot of God Realm is not over yet...

The plot of God Realm is obviously too exciting... Stop it

It's too watery, especially the episode with Shrek's 100,000-year-old soul beast. I wrote several pieces of it, which really discouraged people.

I couldn't stand it any longer, and kept saying I wanted to leave. I kept looking for a hundred thousand year soul beast, and found a thirteenth-level soul master who was useless, but I just couldn't leave.