What? Various Versions of Liu Tianxian Have Come True!

When I have little Sissi, I have no other choice but to raise one.

All the following logical thinking is based on my 15 years of experience in reading online novels, just read it for fun. Advantages: Firmly grasps the three flow elements of today's urban system flow novels (realistic urban background, golden finger system, post-85 female star Liu Yifei) The opening concept of this book is very well chosen, focusing on the city at the beginning The light, luxurious and relaxed style of the urban system flow began to develop through the interaction with Liu Yifei and his various film and television roles, and has firmly attracted a group of fans of the urban system flow and Liu Yifei, especially readers of some urban system entertainment novels that are highly overlapping. But it soon fell apart because the author reversed the order of the three elements of the novel. It was supposed to be based on the urban background, with the system and Liu Yifei and her characters as the main development paths, and the world view was advanced through various interactions with the protagonist. However, the author has magnified the basic urban background and turned the system and Liu Yifei and the various characters they realize into supporting roles, although it is understandable. Because it was established at the beginning that Liu Yifei's various characters will become reality, this will lead to more and more characters, making it difficult to control the overall interaction and plot balance. But at the same time, the author puts too much emphasis on describing the real-life background of the protagonist of the novel, such as parents and friends, which should be simple background relationships, causing the novel to become more and more boring from the 20th to 30th chapter. If I were an editor, I would pay attention to him after seeing the first 10 chapters of this novel. However, after seeing the first 30 chapters of this novel, I am sure that he has no development potential, because there are no obvious plot conflicts to comprehensively promote the plot. He just uses the system and Liu Yifei's various characters to realize the strong promotion. The enthusiasm of readers mobilized in the first 30 chapters gradually faded away after that, or to put it simply, there was no excitement. Especially after 2015, there were many harmonious points in online novels. It is difficult to grasp reader stickiness on this basis. Through a series of interactions between the system and the various characters played by Liu Yifei, it can be seen that this author is actually very valuable and does not have the meaning of water chapters. However, it also clearly highlights the dilemma the author encounters when writing, that is, the more he writes, the less he knows what to write. It can be seen that the author himself may not have prepared a complete outline of the plot. The main highlight of this book is the three elements I mentioned at the beginning. As Liu Yifei plays more and more roles, the existence of the protagonist of the novel itself is constantly weakening. In addition to maintaining it through the development line of emotion, due to the unsuitable system settings Due to this reason, the protagonist is in a weak position when interacting with these characters, which results in the loss of part of the initiative to promote the plot. Therefore, the overall reading data of this book should not be very high, and this data may even drop significantly after 30 chapters. Why do many protagonists with realistic backgrounds nowadays have backgrounds such as the death of both parents? This is what it means. Try to cut off the connection with the realistic background as much as possible to avoid the inevitable reversal of priorities in the plot, thereby losing the main plot conflict. It is a pity that the development of the worldview suddenly collapsed from transparency to nonsensical. From the treatment of various realistic backgrounds of Liu Yifei's characters, it can be seen that the author himself wanted to rationalize the description at the beginning, otherwise he would not have downplayed the weakening of the system after the realization of these characters. But what is not handled properly is that the interaction process of these characters is more biased towards the third party's system selection rather than the protagonist's personal experience. Therefore, in comparison, the only concept of existence of these characters after they are realized is the relationship with the protagonist. That is to say, once the description of the system simulation is over, there is not much to see. In fact, even if you can randomly obtain certain abilities from these characters, it is very good. Although this tendency did appear in the later stages of development, it is too late. Disadvantages of this book: The plot conflicts are not highlighted, reader stickiness is low, there is no obvious representation of the plot, there is no obvious description of the climax plot, and it cannot capture the reader's interest (a very serious climax plot). I hope the author can continue to work hard. The concept of this book itself can be used to write a lot of things. If the author can downplay the urban background or deliberately make it more mentally retarded, the creation may be easier and better. I hope the author can write better works in the future.

It's over. Then isn't Liu Yifei the weakest one without makeup? You have to put on makeup to be like other characters, and her upper limit is the lower limit of other characters.

Take Xiao Longnu to find Fat Fairy 🤭

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Hey, first-class subject matter, barely first-class writing, because the writing is not good, it will not be so frustrating, third-rate plot, the plot is really messed up, the plot in my imagination should be about falling in love with the characters played by various immortals, and engaging in Shura fields. In the end, except for the meeting with Xiao Longnu, which is slightly normal, the treatment of Wang Yuyan is simply Abuse, please forgive me for using the word abuse. The author really abused Wang Yuyan into a psychopath, and even abused Wang Yuyan together with Xiao Longnu. It's so fucking outrageous. Didn't you write this subject just to create a harem? You are so pretentious, and you brought it to the real world without being invincible. You really wasted such a good subject.

It can be seen that the author is not very old, Xiao Longnu must be Li Ruotong, Liu Yifei is far behind

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What a great story ahead, the daily life of the protagonist and various Sissi. Nowadays, most of the comments are made by netizens on the Internet, and the protagonist immediately responds in various ways. There are other experiments like this and that. The supporting characters have more scenes than the heroine. They are completely off track.

5 Star praise! I have read Liu Tianxian's novels on many websites, such as variety martial arts, variety movies, entertainment, etc. What I want to read most is to collect Liu Tianxian's novels. This book is great! In addition, the protagonist is not Liu Tianxian, who is mainly involved in the entertainment industry, and the urban novel is also a bonus! Finally, please recommend other collections of Liu Tianxian's novels! Is there any? ?

If the female protagonist in a book like Jicha comes out, even if every female protagonist has been played by an immortal, the audience may be larger.

No, are you really hiding Little Dragon Girl at home? It's so truely written

Empress Yuyan

It's written in a mess, and I guess the author doesn't have an outline. The plot can be made up with some logic at least! The more I write, the more confusing it becomes

This protagonist is pure trash and has no agency at all.

No, such a beautiful book has poor grades? ?

Shouldn't this be more refined?

Came here because of its reputation. The title of this book is too cruel😭

Hahahahaha very interesting author

It was exciting before, but suddenly it became chaos

The writing is broken. The more I write afterward, the more nonsense it becomes. Please start a new book quickly.

This book is also very good! I will be your loyal fan from now on!

Bai Xiuzhu comes out as a revolutionary... Plus Wang Yuyan acts like the king of the world... People all over the world stand up... Author, do you dare to challenge me?