Travel Through the World of Yu-Gi-Oh! and Become the Sorcerer King

I'll give you some useful advice. When writing a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic, it's best to start with DM or GX. Not all people who read this kind of book are veterans. Let the protagonist interact with the original characters to increase the fun and excitement! It's best not to write pendulums and hyperlinks, they are too complicated.

As the title says, no one has made suggestions in this regard, so I will make a separate post to talk about it~ In addition to playing cards, I have arranged some plots, and I would like to hear your opinions. (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) The author knows that he is not very popular, and there may be fewer people watching, but I still hope that you can tell me about my plots, dueling methods, etc., So that I can have ideas for improvement Although the author is a street fighter, it is good to let me be a street fighter who can improve ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

If you are not a mechanical general, you would never have thought that this deck of cards could defeat the Hero deck with one Rite of Alamesiah every turn.

Generally speaking, the plot of the first volume mainly talks about the affairs of the kingdom, and the second volume is a new copy. It is best to let the characters of the kingdom also show their faces in the second volume. If the interval is too long, they will be forgotten quickly. The duel in the second volume is well written, but readers who don't play Yu-Gi-Oh Cards very much may seem a little confused Also, it is best for the two volumes to overlap and not be too far behind. Otherwise it would be two stories. The subject of Yu-Gi-Oh is not very popular, and the audience is also small. The author should write slowly first. Maybe more words will attract more people?

The writing is okay, but this book assumes that the Sorcerer King is a wise king. Why is he being besieged and his family is completely helpless? It's too nonsense. Moreover, the stories spread after the Sorcerer King's death are all positive, which is outrageous, let alone for a foreshadowing.

Everyone is welcome to read. The cover of the book was drawn by myself and then used magic (the stupid author's painting skills are really pitiful)

You can write your suggestions on this post~ Try not to open new posts, just post them on this level. If there are too many posts, the author will not be able to see them ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

The author writes well, keep up the good work!

I think it's okay. Why is Mao's collection so small? Are newcomers even castrated from smart push?

Some explosive situations may affect the perception, so I will try my best to simplify the process without affecting the overall situation. Please be considerate of the details_(:з∠)_ The next step is about DM and other early Yu-Gi-Oh environment readers: Well... I will try my best to Write the content simply. If you don't like it, please tell me and I will make timely adjustments~ In short, I will try to make playing cards as simple as possible, and I will also make some improvements to the plot. Don't worry, I am an author who listens to advice and will always pay attention to the needs of readers~

I'm sorry, eunuch. The author felt really sad, feeling like no one could save him even though he tried hard. I love every character in my work, but I can't give them the future they deserve...

The author will adjust the plot according to the situation, _(:з∠)_

Sooner or later it will be popular~😆

Hey, I just rewarded you and you stopped doing it.

You, the Sorcerer King, are you the Sorcerer King that my wife always sticks to Alai?