Qing Yu Nian: Grand Master of Fan Mansion

I'm speechless. I can't appreciate it. I was tricked into killing by Douyin.

Being plotted against. As mentioned before, Meng was the flag bearer, but now he is plotted by the prince, plotted by the eldest princess, and criticized by Lin Xiang. . The protagonist himself knows that he is not a grand master, but he already has the combat power of a grand master, and the outside world has already assumed that the protagonist is a grand master. . It seems that the Grand Master is worthless, and other Grand Masters should also be plotted at will. Then why does the protagonist want to become a grand master? Why not develop power and rely on the army to push it forward?

Pure nanny article... A dog renamed Fan Mansion

I'm a little shocked, how can a book of this level be of high quality? Feel sad for readers

Rubbish. The protagonist is the same as the two-armed one. Someone hit you on the head. You have been doing nothing for a long time. You have also set up the character of a martial arts idiot. You also said that you will be a chess player in the future. You should just be a dog.

What a piece of shit. I have reached the Grand Master level and continue to be a dog. What a good dog.

As the deputy commander of the Forbidden Army, the protagonist was blocked by Xie Bian at the palace gate after get off work and invited to see the second prince. The protagonist did not want to go so he was directly attacked by Xie Bian at the palace gate. Why don't you just write that the second prince took Xie Bian and two people into the palace to assassinate Emperor Qing? It's simply outrageous. The author has a primary school education? People who read books should read without thinking, but you who write books can't be so mindless and outrageous, right?

Thanks to the popularity of the TV series, Qing Yunian has gained traffic, and the number of fans has increased, but there are really no high-quality ones, and they are all hovering in the middle and lower grades. At the beginning of the book, it was barely above average, but as soon as he returned to Kyoto, it took a sharp turn and became a mess. Mao Ni is actually very literary, and there are not many fights in Qing Yu Nian. It is an old work, and many of the routines are quite embarrassing now. The difficult thing about Qing Yu Nian's novel is that Fan Xian, the protagonist of the original work, needs him to advance the plot. Why does it have to be him? Even if Naruto fans exclude Konoha, other villages still have a lot to write about, but Qing Yunian is different. It is difficult for Qing Yunian fans to find a suitable entry point. Why? Because the proportion of the three characters Fan Jian/Qing Emperor/Chen Pingping is too large, and they are all connected to Fan Xian. Qing Yu Nian There are killers in the world, there are local tycoons, there are gangs, there are warriors with strong personal strength, there are monks but no Buddhism, there are Taoists but no Taoism, it is not a world, and there are too few points to write about. The imperial court is too strong. In addition to the Grand Master level, the power of gathering people like the military formation is even more powerful. Black Flag and Tiger Guard are proof of this. This world is not a vulture shooting. Hong Qigong can go to the palace to steal food. He is not the best little emperor in the world. It is not the chaos of the last years like Yitian. The Qing Kingdom is too strong and the Qing Kingdom Palace is too strong. There isn't much to write about Northern Qi and Dongyi, the main point is still in Qingguo. Ke Qing's kingdom is in a relatively stable environment. The court seems to be divided into several factions, but Emperor Qing suppresses everything. Whether it is power, personal strength, or prestige, Emperor Qing suppresses everything. Coupled with the fact that the Supervisory Yuan monitors the court, everything is a stagnant water. The slightest ripple will be detected. Qing Yu Nian Qing Yu Nian fandom is destined to be a niche. The entry point is difficult to find. This is the case with this book. The beginning is barely okay, but it immediately becomes hay and the readability plummets. The identity of the Fan family and the status of a minister have become the biggest shackles. Ye Liuyun was at the Grand Master level and was also controlled by Emperor Qing. It's just that the grand master's personal strength is strong enough, and Ye Liuyun's humanity is enough. His feelings for the Ye family can only be regarded as controlled. The main character, the Fan family, is a courtier, and the current plot is embarrassing and disgusting. Why is Fan Xian not so critical in the original work when he is also a courtier? Because Fan Xian is the son of Emperor Qing. This is what this book is like. As I write, the focus changes. I accompany Fan Xian through the plot. In terms of power, being crushed, and in terms of personal strength, it is still inferior. It is dry and dry, with nothing to write about. What will happen even if the protagonist becomes a grand master? Don't suppress everything, as long as you still have humanity and care about your relatives and friends, you will still be controlled. That's why I said that the author's writing was okay at the beginning, but after returning to Kyoto, it became a mess. Not attractive anymore. There seems to be no difference between watching it and not watching it. There is no coolness or refreshing feeling. The author can either write it dryly and then put it on the shelves, or he will cut it off sooner or later. The plot arranged by the author is problematic. In some places, we can also see the immaturity of the author's writing style and lack of social experience. He is not sophisticated enough and appears childish in many places. To put it bluntly, it's not self-centered enough. Modern people, a mature modern young middle-aged man, must have a coexistence of rationality and confusion, and both good and evil thoughts (mostly good will outweigh them). After experiencing time travel, you will definitely cherish another life even more. Self is inevitable. The protagonist in the author's works is too much Ma Daha. The Fan family is not a good entry point. In Fan Jian's heart, is the protagonist, the eldest son, more important, or Fan Xian, the nominal son? If I had known, Fan Jian had sacrificed his own child in order to save Fan Xian. The original work was written early, but upon closer inspection, in fact, from God's point of view, many of them are obvious. Chen Pingping has been suspicious of Emperor Qing since Ye Qingmei's death, and she has a plan. Fan Jian also knew it. At first, he only wanted to let Fan Xian take over the inner treasury to save his life. Both of them were powerful, but under the imperial power. I'm too lazy to continue commenting. I can only say that Qing Yunian's fans will either introduce the All Heavens and All Realms style, or give the protagonist a royal identity and create a behind-the-scenes style flow, otherwise they won't be able to continue. Following the plot of Fan Xian and working as a nanny for Fan Xian is a very disgusting plot. The collection has been deleted, bye

Female author? I originally thought it was a martial arts master pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, but it turned out to be a real pig. I haven't read such a disgusting novel in a long time.

A typical person who wants to get a wave of traffic but has no ability

Do you know how Fan Xian survived? The eldest son of the Fan family changed his life

I haven't read the original work, but many fanfics want to kill Emperor Qing. Why? Just because he killed Ye Qingmei. With Ye Qingmei's behavior, even an emperor would kill her, let alone the Barrett she had. Which emperor would dare to let her live? Is there anything wrong with Emperor Qing in managing the country?

I haven't read it yet, but the title of the book makes me feel like I'm being treated like a dog.

After reading the introduction, I thought that the protagonist was aloof from the incident, calm and calm, strategizing and winning thousands of miles away. Read the main text and you will know that the protagonist of the plot, a lackey under the Qing Emperor, kowtows until he becomes a powerful figure. In the political whirlpool, he is a pawn who is being played around by others.

First of all the writing is very poor! Maybe it's because I just came here after reading the original work! It feels like reading a primary school student's composition! Secondly, the plot is very poor! The protagonist has no main plot, let alone branch plots, and the plot is very childish! The feeling of running a running account! At last! I gave up!

Chapter 8: Overwhelming combat power, stuck at level 7 for two years, you can read the rest for yourself

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng was not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Tan and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houdan did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and love, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, ups and downs, and makes you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have attracted the attention of readers. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have endless yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in the Akina Mountains immediately highlights Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. In the book, the stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to go together to save grandpa are also highlights!

It's a bunch of stuff about the plot and characters of the original work, a bunch of stuff about martial arts and martial arts rhythms, and a bunch of stuff about politics that you don't even know anything about. Can this stuff go to Sanjiang?

It is really unexpected that a fifteen-year-old ninth-level master, instead of pursuing the pinnacle of martial arts, would become the leader of the Tiger Guard and run errands for the emperor, wasting time.

If you fucking travel through time, you will be in the Fan Mansion, and you will be licking dogs. It's so fucking disgusting.

Damn it, you wrote about the son of Si Nanbo? I thought Wang Qinian was a common man, a common man, a little brother, a little brother, just pretending to be at home.

People even copied your acceptance speech 🙂

My brother died for Fan Xian, why are you still helping him get sick?

This is too wordy and watery!

I have finished reading the "Qing Yu Nian World" chapter, and I didn't find any problems with the plot logic and plot development. It is normal for the protagonist to practice cheating. 1. There are many advantages. For example, the protagonist does not have cerebral palsy, tolerates when he should, and is more careful when he has the strength. The three views belong to the chaotic and orderly camp. They will not kill innocent people indiscriminately and will be decisive when necessary. Emotional single-mindedness (this really pokes my xp, I can't accept harem stories) 2. Disadvantages: the plot advances too fast (simply put, the protagonist's force value advances too fast), resulting in many things being briefly mentioned. For example, the emotional scene with Zhan Doudou had no foreshadowing and no process, and was covered in one stroke in 8 months. Then it is too watery, a lot of unbelievable, terrifying, and shocking. These three words are mixed in every chapter. This means that the force is advanced too fast, which leads to the plot advancing too fast, and there is no content to write. Only water words can be included. 3. Since readers can search for books from Qing Yu Nian, it means that most readers like us like Qing Yu Nian, Jiang Ye, The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow, or Da Feng Da Geng Ren, a novel by the same author. The new world that the author opened after the end of Qing Yu Nian should be original. I don't know what others think. I gave up the book when I read Xuantian Continent. I read it for the same type of novels and humanities, and ended up with an original fantasy. If readers really like original fantasy, they won't search Qing Yu Nian at all.

Tomato copied the title of the author's book, Fan Fu Tuo You Ping's Development as a Grandmaster

I really know the plot, but I haven't done anything about it. The entire story of Flying Dancer describes a Junbi protagonist.

The protagonist's name is not good. His father is Fan Jian and his younger brother is Fan Xian. You should be called Fan Bing (Bing).

Water, before the breakthrough master, he always emphasized that he was almost a breakthrough, but after getting help, he was still almost a breakthrough. This way of writing is very annoying. And Fan Jian sacrifices the protagonist's biological brother to save Fan Xian. Doesn't the protagonist feel a bit sad about the death of a rabbit and a fox?

Is there a female protagonist? Who is it? The protagonist won't always be single, right?