Reborn in Jiujiu, You Have to Be Famous as Early as Possible

In fact, just write the novel normally. Do you think there are so many conflicts and oppositions when reading?

Junior high school is okay, I can take two classes at the same time, so I still have a chance. High school is useless. If you can't learn, you just can't learn.

I wrote one hundred chapters and more than 200,000 words, just a few junior high school students copying the book and competing for it.

If you don't study in junior high school, what can you do in high school? The babble is all trivial talk between little kids, there is nothing to see. Forget it, let's go.

The first seventy or so chapters contain a lot of school nonsense. If the foreshadowing is too long, it loses its appeal. It would be much better to shorten it to less than fifty chapters and then focus on the main story.

The writing is good, but there are too many trivial matters. To achieve good results, one must either learn from female authors about their daily chores and write with delicate emotions, or one must have a great time doing great things as a male. You feel like you are not doing your job well. In my humble opinion, if you think it's not good, you can delete it.

It's too watery, and the physical book is not an online text. Five hundred thousand words is difficult

The author has been suppressing the protagonist, and all kinds of clowns are jumping on the protagonist's head, and he is not quick enough to slap the face. Then the literary plot is also very slow. There are only a few articles after dozens of chapters. The key is that your daily writing is not good, the pace is too slow, and the protagonist is too suppressed. You know, readers come to read the enjoyable articles, not to read the articles that abuse the main character. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is now a clown in school. I am really convinced. Goodbye

What kind of bullshit music teacher can threaten you with just a cigarette? I dare not do my homework and smoke because I am afraid that the class teacher will find out. It makes me laugh to death. You are forced to add drama. You have the thinking of an adult and you know the bad things in her family. In turn, you threaten her. It is like a clown.

The third chapter ended with a song that was inexplicable, which made me feel very embarrassed. It was a typical example of trying to show off but the writing couldn't hold it up. There were also "ha" and "speak" in the text from time to time, which made me feel like I was reading a Japanese light novel. It was very strange.

Author: I am following your old book. I am curious to ask where Tobu is.

The front part is too wordy, the back part is okay

The writing is not good! There are a lot of words but not much content, so at least revise, refine and condense it before publishing it! It's so wordy! Just think about it, what is the level of the top 15 in a 500-word composition for a primary school exam? What level are you at?

The writing is okay, but maybe the classmate dispute was a bit overdone, but there was too little follow-up reading.

I felt that the pace was so slow. I felt so depressed while watching it, and it wasn't very satisfying after I finished it. I skipped reading it before I reached 100. I started to feel that the writing was good, but I couldn't follow the plot anymore. It was a refreshing read that didn't feel good at all 😭

Even if you forget to read the knowledge in junior high school, you can still recall it by reading the book. Unless the protagonist was seriously partial to science at that time, look at the introduction and see why the protagonist didn't just start from the college entrance examination. After all, high school knowledge is much more difficult.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing and full of joy. "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious to the heavens...

When writing about this kind of literary giants copying books, you should at least understand some of the novels published over the years. What about Tomb Raiders Notes and Battle Through the Sky? Are you trying to make people laugh out loud? But if you look at relevant information, you won't have such shallow ideas.

Who is the heroine, but she is still a double?

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and even the villain has a dedicated chapter, but your childhood sweetheart, Bai Yueguang, and music teacher have no relevant plots. They have written a bunch of miscellaneous chapters, but there is no key content at all.

If you want to write good novels, it's best to go to college. Otherwise the logic doesn't make sense. Junior high school students are considered minors in anything they can do.