Douluo: Huo Yuhao's Second Life

After going around for a while, except for changing his body and re-cultivating to level 90, the protagonist has not grown at all. Inexplicably, he starts to reflect on Yu Yu. The people at the bottom are so miserable. In the end, he did nothing and was killed by Shura and a large number of gods in the lower world. Such a big move is destroying the people who are doing nothing? Tang Shenwang also knew how to do some tricks to cover up. The whole Dou Yi is a mess. 200 Chapters have been written and a preface has been written. Has the plot of the original novel changed? Such as change. As soon as he arrived at the Divine Seal, he was put on a dog leash. The dog leash was pretty awesome. It included positioning, teleportation, and electric shock. Did the Third Young Master of the Tang family know that he was so awesome? After that, the bottom of the demon clan was so miserable, Balabala, helping the demon clan to do things. Things that had not been done in 6,000 years were casually replaced by the industrial revolution in 4 years. Confronting Long Haochen, there are more than a dozen helpless words in one chapter, helpless eyes, helpless heart, and helpless tone. "Senior brother, please listen to my explanation." "You don't want to listen to the bastard chanting sutras." After saying that, the description in his heart really didn't make sense, and then he continued, "Senior sister," "I don't even know how to make up lies. I'm just trying to trick a fool." He kept talking nonsense over and over again, and he was already being treated like a dog by the demons. What else was he thinking about? Isn't it okay to beat him down first and then talk nonsense? While facing the crisis of world annihilation, he was leisurely playing house, urging Long Haochen over and over again, Long Haochen is your mother. In two lifetimes, you are dozens of years old. You act like a little kid, mother-in-law.

There is actually a power generation for love, which is awesome. I have always wanted to see Huo's sexual transformation as a fan. This fan dream has come true. I personally think this book is very well written, and it is a long one. It was so enjoyable to read. There may be shortcomings. But the flaws don't hide the advantages, it's a point.

It's a very delicate and comfortable article to read. It's still about generating electricity for love. The author is great.

The author is motivated by love, I love it so much. There is no soul that has penetrated Yuhao, and there is no harem inexplicably. Let me put it first, it's not like I haven't seen the harem, but when I search for Huo Yuhao from the starting point, it's really hard to comment on the ones that pop up. Some of the female protagonists are only in the plot of The Horns, so just accept them if they are just a mother. .

It's a good herb🌿 and can be eaten

Come on, author, this book of yours is the real fan, and the others are just like the male protagonist of the little pornographic novel who took over the body.

The writing is average, but the full text is free and purely for love. I declare that you are the best Dou 2 fan.

Original Huo, the plot logic and characters are relatively harmonious. There is no obvious arrogance of the protagonist like other fanfics. I also don't want to see Huo Yuhao deal with Tang San like a bad person grinding a bad person. I like Huo Yuhao's little angel-like character. In this work I can glimpse

How should I put it? This is beyond description. It seems that he is either being plotted to become a prisoner or is on the way to being plotted to become a prisoner.

Little Huo Niang

Yun Ming must have been completely stunned. One mouthful of glory, glory or glory, he himself is not annoyed. To be honest, I am tired of listening to it, and Austin is tired of hearing it. I even suspect that if his own situation does not allow it, he would even want to tear Yun Ming apart. After all, for him Said, this fly is too annoying. To be honest, it's also thanks to Xiao Huo's good temper. Author, please try to let Yun Ming change it in the later stage. He said it's not annoying, and I was annoyed to death. I don't have a good impression of Shrek in the first place. Sometimes I don't even read novels that follow the Shrek line.

The first part is very good, but the second part is a bit confusing. I suggest you speed up the progress.

You haven't even listed this on the author's shelves 😰

I started reading it when the author started writing Divine Seal, and I read more than 200 chapters until the end. I should be considered an angel investor😎😎😎

After reading it, I found that although the writing style at the beginning is a bit immature, the author's writing is indeed very warm, enough for people to ignore the deficiencies in writing style. There is no sense of urgency and it is very comfortable to watch. After reading it, it was very warm and soothing in the early stage, but it started to become more compact after being beaten by the old Shura. Although the timeline is not particularly tight, it feels like Xiao Huo has just finished this one and then starts the next one, which is very tiring. Now in Dousan, it is estimated that Qiangu, Holy Spirit Cult, Mouse and the like will have to be dealt with again. I hope Xiao Huo will deal with it soon and return to his warm daily life😭

Why do I feel that the God of Love is the strongest in Douluo Continent 🙂

Congratulations on the ending. It's not easy. The plot content is quite good. It basically makes up for most of the regrets I had while reading the book. I hope there will be some extras in the future, which can write about the daily life of Yuhao and Qiu'er. I feel that the ending is a bit rushed and there are too many battle scenes. Maybe it's because I prefer reading daily life. It's hard for me to explain a few sentences before it disappears. But the author is amazing and can write such a long work. It's amazing. I'm looking forward to the new book.

What I wrote earlier is the same as the sweet article. It's so beautiful. Why do some people keep putting it there and saying it's not good-looking and childish?

I started reading from about 390 to 400 pictures. I can't be considered a veteran or an idea, but I can be considered relatively senior. Speaking of which, if I want to write the next book, should I change my gender? It's a bit early to ask this question, but I'm still curious.

To be honest, Douluo Dalu is the first novel and comic book in my life. It has always been like this from elementary school to high school and university. When I was in junior high school, I lived in my hometown in the countryside. Without a mobile phone, I went to town to buy books and read them every week. Later, I also had the idea of ​​writing a book. But as I wrote, I only felt that signing a contract was the motivation to continue writing. I still read less fan fiction. I used to be narrow-minded and thought that all fan authors wrote just to sign a contract. After all, I didn't love it enough 😢

A masterpiece. Have you been sanctioned by the power of God? There are tens of thousands of recommendation votes, but only a few hundred comments. It shouldn't be judged by the quality alone.

It's fun to watch. I've been watching it for two days in a row. I read more than 400 chapters in one go. Still my favorite little Huo Niang. This character's personality is really suitable.

{"NickName":"Cangxuan Guming","UserId":410573502}Can the author make a character card?

Hatred, confusion, despair, this is the mainstay of everything, the purest and most powerful force. Because this is my mission. The man named Electrolux entrusted it to me with great care. That was the day of destruction of the Holy Law God of the Dead. Huo Yun'er, Electrolux, Tianmeng Bingcan, Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er... I remember each of their names. Because remembering them is the only thing I can do. They were "killed" one by one under Tang San's conspiracy before my eyes, but I could only run away shamefully. ... Like a scared and weak beast. Every dark night when I can't see the light, I will dream of that man. In his transformation into a point of light, entrust me with his name and legacy, over and over again. Finally, I came back and used his name to fulfill the promise of destroying everything. Strength, destiny, ideals, when I inherited the name of the Holy Law God of the Dead, I thought I got everything from that man, but there is nothing that belongs to me under this name. I am just playing a shadow that has been dead for many years, But why should I play a failed shadow? That's right! I killed the Poseidon Tang San! Saved the world, I did it, what that man couldn't do, I have surpassed him. I am not crazy, I defeated the world This is my own strength, my own destiny, my own ideal... This... Is the real me!

{"NickName":"Cangxuan Guming","UserId":410573502}Does this author have a male protagonist in this book?

Judging from the plot, although there are some flaws, the general direction is still okay, but the writing style is still a bit bad, and sometimes it is really unbearable to watch. You can go to some better authors to learn their writing style, otherwise it is still a bit awkward, and I also hope that the author can improve the writing style in the next book. There is also the issue of paragraphing, which needs more attention, otherwise it will be a bit tiring to read. I won't go into too much about the other minor issues. I am generally satisfied with this book, and I look forward to the author's next work.

Let me tell you my opinion. After reading only the Dou Yi part, I feel that the author's character of Huo Yuhao is too indecisive. He reflects every day, but does not take any practical measures to change the status quo. As a result, even if Huo Yuhao is reborn in the time and space of Dou Yi, it does not have any impact on this time and space, so this rebirth is completely meaningless. At the same time, the soul ring skills written by the author are a bit too repetitive. Most of them are just pure attribute blessings, and the help of these soul ring skills to Huo Yuhao in battle is not reflected in the article at all.

I finished reading it in three days. Xiao Huo Niang is right, Great Mercy is right, and my mother is right. The little changes in psychology and the use of some bugs in the original work are also very interesting. There are many small problems, such as water-draining (especially the three chapters of fighting), too many inner dramas and passerby dramas, and feeling aggrieved. The lower realm of Shura feels like a mechanical deity. But after all, it's free, and frustration is a characteristic of many Bianwen. After all, Bianwen often involves identity and psychological changes. It's normal to feel frustrated in this process, and it's acceptable for someone like me who likes Bianwen. What I was really disappointed with was the lack of character interaction. I was very pleasantly surprised in the first 100 chapters. The feeling of gathering friends, spending time together, and getting in touch with the world ten thousand years ago really attracted me. When I read fanfiction, I really like to see the interaction between the protagonist and the original characters, as well as the interaction between the original characters under the influence of the protagonist. This is good in the Dou Chapter 1, Yue Ye Abao in the Divine Seal Chapter, and Tang Wulin Gu Yuena in the Dou Chapter 3. I am also quite satisfied with it. However, in the Seal of God chapter, the protagonist has very little communication with his senior brothers and sisters, as well as the original protagonist group, and the interaction with the characters from the demon clan is not outstanding. The subsequent interactions with the brothers and sisters after they finally got to know each other were all brushed aside, so there was still some communication in the finale of Seal of God. In the three chapters of the fight, the reunion between Little Huo Niang and her soul beast companions and Yi Lao, the communication with Tang Wulin Gu Yuena and the original protagonist group, the communication with the Dragon Prince, and finally the communication with everyone in the God Realm when she returns to the God Realm, etc., Many of these are mentioned in one stroke, which is a bit regretful. I still hope that the author will write better and better. In any case, Power Generation with Love can have such quality, I praise the author.

Let me write down my opinion. The fight ended in a hurry, and it changed but didn't change at all. The sudden jump to God's Seal went away. It's already a bit watery and boring up to this point. As for Dou San after that, it's very watery and the protagonist has very few scenes. For example, when Tang Wulin fights the Five Gods, there are more than ten scenes where the protagonist doesn't show up, like an invisible man, and there's nothing interesting about it. But then again, the author's writing and writing style at the beginning and later have not improved at all. Occasionally, you can still see golden sentences that resonate with emotions, such as the resurrected soul beast in Dousanli said to Xiao Huo: Is it Lord Rui Beast who is taking us home?

The masterpiece I just discovered came too late 😭