Start Farming and Cultivating Immortals by Drawing a Card from Tudigong

A system that is useless is not fun at all. Without a system, life depends entirely on luck. If there is a system, life depends on luck. So what is the meaning of the existence of this system?

It's strange. It seems that many people like to put "a few years later..." Or "... After" in the last paragraph of their profile, and then describe how awesome the protagonist is. This way of writing, you overdraw the excitement of the novel in the introduction, and it will feel very bland when you actually read it.

I just gave up on the second level of Qi training in Chapter 23. The waste stream is really disgusting and watery to death.

The emotional writing is not good. The interaction with the female supporting character is too awkward. The female supporting character's inexplicable temptations and the protagonist's uneasy cooperation are too stingy. The second is the price. Why do the prices of spiritual plants fluctuate up and down? The first-level mid-level spiritual plant seeds traded in the Spiritual Fish Club cost hundreds of spiritual stones, while the second-level seeds traded in normal markets only cost dozens. Later, the man surnamed Gao wanted to replace the seeds with a living spiritual plant. The protagonist agreed, and then it was revealed that he had a wife who made alchemy. However, this was not about beating a rabbit with straw, the plot twist was too blunt.

Chapter 15 has a highly toxic loophole. Tian Wei said it was in the late stage of Qi training, but Chapter 15 is at the sixth level of Qi training, which is the wrong realm. Moreover, this book desperately suppresses the protagonist and the realm of three spiritual roots. So many elixirs are still at the first level of Qi training, which is more than a hundred times weaker than other books. It forcibly suppresses the difficulty of the entire world of cultivating immortals.

Lingzhifu... Isn't this word used awkwardly? ? I feel like I've seen this word used in several novels 😎

Author, why don't we write 100 chapters before practicing? We can carry hundreds of spirit stones on our bodies and carry them around when we have the initial stage of athlete's foot. Or the author could write about a person who ruled the world of immortality in the early days of athlete's foot!

There is a sense of fragmentation. Daily life is really ordinary. Even with the ability to draw cards, the secret-breaking realm is also very fragmented from the original one. . . . It feels like AI writing, but not as advanced. The processing of various things is not as weird as AI. I can read it, but I get tired of it after watching it too much. I didn't feel any mood swings after watching it. 🤝So weird

As for the Lingtai Mirror Technique, I have always wanted to ask. I bought it at an auction earlier, practiced it a few times without success, and then gave up? Or the author, you simply forgot.

The writing skills are not good, and a group of people in Shui completely follow the idea of ​​​​playing games to write novels that are even more ignorant than Xiaobai.

It's okay, but the pace is too slow

The creativity is good, the writing is a bit unsatisfactory, and the plot is too bland.

Writing too many chapters for one secret realm is purely for the sake of water, and it feels very disconnected from the previous text! I feel that whether or not you have read these chapters of This Secret Realm does not affect the reading experience at all! So I skipped watching it and wait until the end of Secret Realm before watching it.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It was well written, but maybe a little confusing without an outline. Let's talk about the unreasonable aspects of the setting. It is too easy to obtain magical powers (equipment cards), and it is very unreasonable to use them by refining Qi (only a little bit of spiritual power is required). During the Qi refining period, I didn't even learn a few spells, but I can understand the magical powers in one go. It's like a kindergarten friend who doesn't know a few words, but is familiar with partial differential equations? In other words, once you have mastered the magical power, then aren't the various spells under the magical power a piece of cake, why do you still need to learn them? For example, if you understand the magical power of Tu Tu Gong Tu Po, wouldn't you learn all kinds of spiritual methods? He already has the magical power of wind and thunder, but it still takes a long time for his subordinates to learn the spells, which is simply embarrassing. In addition, the level of magical power here is too low. After refining Qi and building the foundation to master the magical power, you can't kill randomly? At the very least, challenging a big realm is the same as playing. It's a magical power, not a spell. It doesn't even have the power of a spell like the Wind and Thunder Sword Formation. I don't think magical seeds here are even considered. You might as well change the setting. There are various magical powers on the cards, but before the golden elixir, you can only comprehend a little bit at most. After the golden elixir, the cards can be upgraded to condense the seeds of various magical powers. Even some magical powers may not be understood by those who become immortals. At most, they can feel a trace of power. If the settings are not changed, the book will collapse soon. Yang Jian has almost got the card, is the great supernatural power still far away? All kinds of great supernatural powers are not qualified to even take a look at the Jindan Yuanying. It is like a primary school student learning group theory, and his head will explode after just two glances.

I want to ask, does this have a female protagonist?

In fact, the basic settings are quite good, but I feel that pursuing mutations every day is boring. An occasional mutation is just fine. Pursuing mutations every day is boring.

There are no issues of principle, I can watch it, but what can I say, it's too bland.

May I ask if the author is still writing this book? I will come back from time to time to see if you have updated it. This is my first fully ordered work. I hope you can come back!

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The main character pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is too much. Why bother building a layer of foundation? Could you please stop talking about 5 levels of foundation building?