Sorry, If You Have Money, You Will Become an Immortal

I don't want to see this alchemy technique that has been charged for more than ten levels still being used on low-grade elixirs. If this is used for practice, wouldn't the consumption of spiritual coins increase exponentially?

After reading it, the plot before winning the alchemy competition was okay, but it became a bit boring after that. Although the author's writing style is very good, many life-like details are well described, and the setting control is okay, but it still lacks a lot in seduce readers' desire to read. For example, the male protagonist does not have a clear goal after the alchemy competition. The subsequent plot is very scattered, causing the reader to lose attention during reading. Describing the male protagonist's goals or desires in the third person can allow readers to understand the core development direction of the plot more clearly, rather than reading comprehension. There are also the three heroines who appeared first. From my perspective, the three heroines correspond to the three attributes of familiar childhood, ignorant youth, and longing for adulthood. They are well written, so the problem is not with the heroines, but with the protagonists, especially after the alchemy competition. The attitude of the female protagonists is still indecisive. This is not to say that indecisiveness is not good, but that the male protagonists have not been written about any growth after a big plot, such as a more mature character, a certain determination, the courage to take responsibility, etc., Which makes readers feel boring and depressed, and hopes that the subsequent plots will be improved. (And the title of the book is indeed a bit strange. It feels that it has little to do with the content of the novel and the theme is unclear.

I hope that the money charged into the system will go to Yuanyiyuan later.

Daily poison😰

A purely systematic stallion story, the core highlights are shocking and boring.

No, it's not like you can't read this book. Why is there no one there?

A bit interesting, update soon 😍

You are obviously writing about the harem, why don't you? If you don't write about it, I will scold you if you write about it later.

🙂Very beautiful

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can see that the protagonist has some brains. Although he is not a veteran, he is still a college student with social experience. I think this book is really good.

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