Cultivation in Tokyo, Endless Happiness

Can you please stop cutting me? Your character will be ruined if you cut me again.

Personal feelings: In the first 40 chapters of the book, the author describes many times that the male protagonist tried to judge whether the two mature aunts were human (knowing that he was greedy for her two bodies), but they have traveled through time and cultivated immortality. This cannot reflect that the male protagonist has read novels about immortality in his previous life and firmly believes in the sixth level of his own cultivation. In Chapter 22, there is a passerby NPC to test the novel, and the author is afraid that the reader may get angry when the NPC touches the future heroine's aunt, which makes the reader feel awkward while reading. Repeated descriptions of uncertain judgments make the reader more verbose and irritable as they read. Nowadays, it is common for readers to read chapters 10-20 at a fast pace and then run away without interesting content... If I hadn't read the author's previous book "People in Tokyo, the Peerless Raptors Are Afraid of Hatchets", and have patience with the author's astringency, I would have been satisfied if there was no interesting content in chapters 30-50 of my own book that could attract me to continue reading...

This book of yours would probably be useless if it wasn't exposed. There are too few people. The book is good.

The author, like Crow, is really not suitable for writing fantasy novels. The collapse was severe. The same goes for Crow's book, which I couldn't stand halfway through, and the same goes for the author's. When it comes to writing about emotions and finance, it's okay, but when it comes to fantasy, it's really explosive.

Every time I plant a picture, I will harvest a lot of pictures after a while

I don't know why, but it was fine in the beginning. After Chapter 30, I felt like there was no sense of the main plot. I only had this kind of reading experience. Of course, the writing style was okay, but I suddenly lost interest in reading.

Boss, I finally opened a new book 😭

This book has a pretty good start, so you have to work hard, but soul penetration has become a bit toxic recently, so I suggest you reconsider it.

I also read Chapter 22, and I felt that the male protagonist was a little confused. Someone tried to test him, but he couldn't see through it. He rushed to solve the problem. This is contradictory. Moreover, the previous few pictures were a bit too deliberately entangled with the matter of whether it was a human or a demon. After Chapter 22, I personally couldn't read it (this is just my personal experience).

Traveling through Japan makes your mind smaller than Japan?

Alla Kanako

Ten kilograms of gold and tens of millions of yen? . .