Lu Mingfei: Return from the Adventures of Jackie Chan

To be honest, I felt very disappointed after reading this book. He obviously came back from a world like Jackie Chan's Adventures. However, Lu Mingfei didn't have the open-minded humor of Jackie Chan's Adventures at all. Instead, he was cynical and jealous like a sophomore in high school. He was full of hostility towards everything, and everything he read had the flavor of conspiracy theories. It gave people the feeling that he had not come back from the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, but had read an original dragon book annotated by others, and despised everything from the God's perspective of the original reader.

Good guy, the Holy Master saw how there was an extra member of the family opposite Zhengqi.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't see what the protagonist's golden finger was after he came back from The Adventures of Jackie Chan. The author didn't explain it either. The plot was too bland and there was no sense of expectation at all.

It's pretty cool. This Lu Mingfei is very sober.

I can't stand it when I see the way it was handled. I was bullied like that. I don't care if I don't get the money back. I gave them a lot of money in order to move out. This is not a licking dog.

I don't like it very much. The words I complained about Nono can be put on this Lu Mingfei, who thinks he sees everything and decides the path of others like charity. For example, the relationship between Ye Sheng and Ya Ji, in my opinion, unless the other party clearly wants your help, just mind their own business. The two people have a tacit understanding. What they lack is an opportunity, an atmosphere, and a process they have to go through. As a result, a stranger whom he had never met a few times undermined his efforts. If the original Lu Mingfei had low self-esteem, this Lu Mingfei is very narcissistic.

It's all about the interactions between the supporting characters, and I'm speechless. The writing style also suddenly declined, and it suddenly became difficult to read smoothly.

After reading Chapter 43, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The plot is too bland and uninteresting. Then in order to prevent Concubine Ming from being hostile to Nono, he deliberately messed with Concubine Ming, and then Concubine Ming was defeated. It's uncomfortable to watch

I feel like most of the dragon clan Nonos, how can I say, feel like they need to be beaten, and they feel like they want to be beaten up with one punch👊

The magic from Jackie Chan Adventures that Lu Mingfei learned should be useless. After all, the essence of qi magic is the righteousness from Jackie Chan Adventures. It is not the five elements of earth, water, fire, wind and spirit that the Dragon Clan calls, but the so-called balancing elements of yin and yang, good and evil. There is no such thing in this world at all. If it works, it's even easier, just sit back and wait for the Black King to resurrect and cause the end of the world, and no one can stop it. Lu Mingfei, the only one who knows righteousness magic, will be directly strengthened to the point where he can fight against the Black King. Just sit back and wait for the upgrade. 🤔

Why has Dragon Clan started again recently? Is it because of the studio's efforts?

Why spend part of the text introducing the background of the Dragon Clan? It's so verbose Return of the Road Ming has a fixed readership. It's okay if you don't introduce it. The introduction makes it uncomfortable to read. There are also a few books that are omitted directly, and it doesn't affect the score.

It's a bit messy. It's recommended not to insert large chunks of memories into the ongoing plot many times. For example, five or six of the thirty chapters are all memories. This will make people feel messy. Or make a more obvious distinction between the description of memories and the way of writing in the ongoing tense. Of course I am just a suggestion.

Lu Mingfei had just traveled to the past and dared to use antiques to hit the gangster trio. I explained that I was very hungry, which I understood. Later, Su Tiannv directly hooked up with her, and Su Enxi and her aunt were even more direct. Do you want to investigate Kassel? At this time, would Cassell just be transparent with them about the information? Summary: The plot is bland and the characters are ooc

The new Lu Mingfei joins the battlefield

I really hate Aunt Lu Mingfei's family. After reading a lot of fan fiction, most of them really can't feel the excitement of this plot.

There are already so many Lu Mingfei, why no one wrote about Lu Mingfei who returned from northern Myanmar?

Don't you know how to use Lope's spell magic? Learn the adventures of Jackie Chan and turn all dragon kings into spells and statues. Release the black energy and righteousness to guide the balance of the planet. Transform the little devil into the book of time. Then you can let Lu Mingfei lead Chu Zihang, Chen Motong and Fenrir to form a team to have various adventures on the historical line rewritten by the Black King. Ah, the youth pain protagonist you wrote can die.

What is the level of the Holy Lord when he comes to the Dragon Clan? I feel that writing about the journey is not as interesting as writing about the Holy Lord coming to the Dragon Clan world.

For a book like this that is currently being serialized and does not have 300,000 words, if it does not have 100 monthly votes within ten days, basically no one can read it. Even if it is a niche subject, as long as the writing is readable, it will not cost less than 100 monthly votes.

. . . . In the past two days, I have been pushed to more than 10 different sources. . . .

Dear book friends, can we do a big integration of Lu Mingfei's return?

(Reprinted from Zhihu) If I were asked to write a Dragon Clan fan, I might also choose Su Xiaoqiang As for why, let's count the female characters of the Dragon Clan in detail One is like Chen Wenwen, Liu Miaomiao, and Nuonuo. There are a lot of characters, but readers don't like it. Some of them are a little tea-smelling and very unlikable. When readers read fanfics, of course they don't want them to be heroines (especially Chen Wenwen, I think Bi Nuonuo's operation is more slutty, and Ryuichi and Ryuji's writing is quite disgusting and bitchy) The second type is people like Eri and Natsumi (actually Natsumi is my favorite character in the dragon family) but why is it not suitable to write a heroine in a fanfic? Because the original work is so well written, when compared with the original work, it is really a blast Xia Mi and Chu Zihang of Long Er are also very well written. Long Er's writing style and emotions are the most delicate in the Dragon series, and they are all written very well. Coupled with the strong sense of CP, it is actually very difficult to remove. The third type is Aso, Su Xiaoqiang, and Sakura Among them, Aso is dead, and the background is a bit bland, and she is a Japanese girl The background is so limited that Aso can only be encountered in Japan (after all, Japanese civilian girls are unlikely to go abroad), and the protagonist's novice village is generally in the United States and China. Sakura's writing is too complete, and there is nothing much to add about the character. In contrast, Su Xiaoqiang's background is that of a rich girl. She has the opportunity to come into contact with dragons and can easily join the background. (For example, when I sneaked into a certain company in China to get information, I happened to meet Su Xiaoqiang who came to discuss business.) Secondly, she is beautiful, and thirdly, she has a good personality, straight to the point, and open and close (Long Yili was the only one who did not ridicule Lu Mingfei, and even criticized Zhao Menghua, and Long Sili was the only one who went to the mental hospital to see Lu Mingfei, and also solved Lu Mingfei's heart knot, cheerful and generous) and the character has fillable parts, which is really suitable for writing a fan fiction heroine. As for Shutoku Aki, Shutoku Mai, and Susie. Either the CP feeling is too strong, or the play is too fancy, or it is too ordinary, it has to be considered a special situation and a special discussion. In the end, it still depends on whether the author likes it or not. If you like it, the writing is good. If you don't feel it, it's hard to tell.

This novel, what should I say, read it in the newspaper

Finally someone like me is complaining about the Kassel team.

How should I put it? After reading Chapter 18, the protagonist's abilities and some processes were not explained clearly.

He talks like a kid, like the kind of kid who pretends to be deep, like when I was in junior high school, it looked so damn embarrassing 😅

This road Mingfei is really unwelcome. I have received various time travels and received re-education. I remember six or seven versions 😃