Red Dragon: Journey to Destruction

There are too many unnecessary things interspersed. When it's time to fight, you should fight. For other interesting things, you can insert them when you have free time. If you insert them during battle, I feel it is a failure.

The short story of Dragon Legacy is quite interesting, but there are too many interspersed in it, which seriously interferes with the main text.

What a pity, there are only three comments including me.

The ability to destroy can be a bit more interesting. It's all about strengthening, and the contract is gone. What setting? It's too mediocre. Destruction is spewing, and I feel there is a bit of overlap in ability with your black hole. The key is to gain abilities and strengthen yourself. You don't use this very much, so it doesn't show up.

Why are Julong's articles all about farming? I don't want to read farming articles anymore.

There are too many settings and too many background stories, resulting in too little actual plot content.

The not so good thing is the development time. It doesn't say how long it has been since the protagonist was born.

A different world? Will you go to Westeros?

It's a lot of nonsense, it's too cool, it's four or five chapters in a row, and each chapter has a lot of nonsense. I'm here to see the protagonist's growth experience, not your nonsense.

Can't control thoughts after transformation? Quite useless

There are typos and incorrect sentences in the introduction. It should be a pause, not a footnote.

There are so many explanations, so dry to watch.

There is too much popular science. If you read too much, you will not be able to stand it anymore.