As Soon as This Simulation Started, I Was Number One in the World?

The plot changes so abruptly that it's very confusing 🙂

If you don't keep reading, it's still a good book 😁

The writing is okay, but the literary youth has been cured, and the flavor is too strong, which affects reading. The author's mind is full of one sword and nineteen continents, which suppresses the progress of the story.

It's such a refreshing, powerful, and domineering novel that I really want to beat the author to his knees and make him keep arrogant in his words!

You guys are talking, I'm so scared

The first part was quite fun to write, but the further you go, the more rubbish and messy it becomes. If you can't understand the group portraits, don't write them. There are dozens of plots with dozens of supporting characters. I'm really confused.

Is it the first book? The writing style is okay, but the content is a bit messy. It feels like the logical line is not prominent.

It looks incoherent and feels like a lot of content is missing, which is weird.

The more I write, the more chaotic it gets. The plot is not well connected at all, with inexplicable insertions and inexplicable pretentiousness.

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We chatted for more than half a year and we had a good chat. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just friends, so I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked quite beautiful. She left me. The city is not far away, so we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to go somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is also my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging her. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was peeling shrimps for me, picking out fish bones, and walking out of the restaurant after dinner. She held my hand, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi.

What kind of writing method is this? I was still fighting in the last chapter. I was writing inexplicably while writing other things, such as memories, what people from other perspectives are doing, or all kinds of vain descriptions such as One Sword and Kyushu. I didn't see how grand the world is. I just saw that the author's writing style was not deep enough to express the feeling. It just felt chaotic. There were dozens of names of supporting characters. It's only been a few chapters. I didn't even remember the name of the protagonist. The protagonist didn't know the use of a lot of skills.

The simulation quality is too high, the reality is too poor, the gap is too big, the writing is okay, food

Gee, I kind of regret having ordered more than 30 chapters at once. Wen Zou Zou's character "Wen Jue" is very incoherent, and the plot also feels a bit awkward, but the protagonist is still an invincible protagonist. You have written the protagonist so well, and you feel that the number of words is not enough to write a bunch of nonsense, then you might as well write more things neatly, and do things as refreshingly as the yin in the moon. If you feel that there are few words, do more things, it is worse than hitting with a cannon. It's better to have mosquitoes in the water. In order to show that you are not so good, you always skip transitions in the plot connection and the plot is incoherent. This is not a group portrait article, but you always write generously about the supporting characters and passers-by. However, these supporting characters have no follow-up plot or even live long, which also seems very watery. You only give writing and ink but not the plot, which means that the main line is taken up, and the branch lines are not opened, which does not make the plot full.

I thought I would be number one in the world at the beginning, but it turns out isn't it?

It jumps too fast and the plot keeps going around and around. The author is happy to write it, but it is painful for the readers to read it.

The author should have let go and handed it over to the computer. The characters in the plot have absolutely nothing to do with it.

To be fair as a reader, the author is not trying to prevent theft, but is just lazy and procrastinating. I posted it before midnight for the sake of perfect attendance. You can just wait until tomorrow or two hours later to read it. The author supports you.

I have always had a question, will this kind of mentality never change after one lifetime of experience? He is still like a young man who is passionate and impulsive but has no brain. Will his behavior and habits not change?

How should I put it? I can only tell you that only 1/3 of this book is about the protagonist, and the remaining 2/3 is about the supporting characters. You can make your own choice.

In today's novels, you only need to read the first chapter to know what it is about. This is indeed okay, no need to waste too much time. I am most afraid of the kind of author whose writing style is not bad but gets sick in the middle. That's really disgusting. The first chapter of this book clearly tells you the quality of this book. If you can read it, read it, and if you don't, leave it 😁😁

It's not too bad, it's much better than Jiang He Zaiyue. Jiang He Zaiyue first described the environment when the villain appeared, then the villain's image, and then the words and performance of the crowd. I wrote a whole chapter of nearly 6,000 words, which was very shocking 😁

I hope you, the author, have a beginning and an end. No matter what, the story will eventually have an ending.

I think it's pretty good. Even if you don't, why don't you just finish the first life? I'll give you an explanation for the rest.

Alas, eunuch. As expected, some of you authors who write books have no outlines, and then they have problems. Some readers raised them, and you didn't read them. Then, when the time comes, it seems that no one wants eunuchs. In fact, I have been raising books. When did I start raising books? Departing from the main line, in my early stage, your main line is that your father is the prime minister, right? You have to upgrade quickly and save your father. In my opinion some time ago, it should be very compact. Then what you write here is relatively watery. Do you want to be watery? Are you in the mid-term? Just like you can't be tight all the time, you also have to loosen it. Then you start to be timid in the early stage, and I think you may want to be a eunuch, because there will probably be a group of people like me who want to raise books. And then you don't read the suggestions you make, so just leave it like that. As expected.

Writing a novel is contrary to nature, and dying on the road is normal