Magical Girls Are Monsters!

After reading Chapter 9, overall the setting is okay, but the writing is too messy. I feel that there is no outline to write what I want to write, and there are too many psychological activities. This is the starting point. This style of writing is not suitable. It is best to switch to Mao or Bao.

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The protagonist is the child of the previous protagonist and a magical girl.

In this worldview, if you create peripheral products without your consent, do you think that magical girls are good people and will not be held accountable? Moreover, there is no official management in the book. The following plot will not involve the protagonist registering with the official and then being forced to become a master by this new magical girl.

Overall, it's pretty good among magical girl novels. The character setting is okay, there are not those too brainless and demented sleeping dragons and phoenix chicks. The characters are well portrayed. I cannot say that the vivid images are flesh and blood, but at least they give people a relatively vivid impression. As of now, I haven't seen any serious poisonous points or mistakes in this book. The disgusting plot did not appear either. Throughout the whole article, the reading feels relatively smooth. There are some small flaws in the plot advancement and plot setting details, which are slightly inconsistent with the requirements of most works and readers in the current online literature market. In addition, the title of the book... To be honest, it is quite hard to describe. In some plots, the plot is arranged to make the protagonist a little... Immature. However, no flaws should be concealed. After all, everyone has their own preferences, understand and respect them. All in all, this book is smooth throughout, with no obvious poisonous points, and there are no major problems with the characters and plots. Although the writing style is not sophisticated, it is still remarkable. The magical girl novels are pretty good. Come on author, we are all optimistic about you.

This novel is really great. It writes about magical girls and has a great world view. Although the protagonist is stupid, does things without thinking, and is often used as a pawn by others, the protagonist does not care. Whatever the magical girl does is correct, even if she is blamed for no reason, she will become the enemy of the world. , But you still have to fight monsters and save people. Although the protagonist is misunderstood by others, the protagonist doesn't care. Isn't it just that he is often used as a pawn by others and always takes the blame? The protagonist doesn't care. The plot is quite exciting and the world view is also huge. The author needs to continue to work hard. It's beautiful and I love it 😜

It was mentioned in the first few chapters that the magical girl is the eye of the contracted beast, and then he directly accepted a magical girl as his apprentice. Lan has no memory at all. The reason why she became like this

This blue is so uncomfortable. She always makes her own decisions. I really want the protagonist to beat her up. And didn't it say that the magical girl has Kyubey's eyes? Then the protagonist is exposed and slipped away. The updates in the past few days give people the feeling that there is no outline. It feels like this book is going to die suddenly.

The author is probably not here to make money. He will become a eunuch once his passion for writing wears off.

It's a bit difficult to keep an enemy ward close by. Outsiders and apprentices are the nodes that start the plot, but I still prefer the strong cooperation between the beast Gu and the human Gu. Apart from the previous violent beating of Lan and the blocking of speech in the dream, I feel that the suppressive power of the beast Gu can be mentioned again.

Taking the photo to someone else's school and asking where the teacher is, is this considered moral kidnapping or forced abortion? Let's see how the author deals with this little apprentice

The same type of stuff has already come out, so hurry up if the author doesn't do it yet

It's really a bit too hasty. It throws settings around like crazy and keeps introducing new characters and forces. It's a bit chaotic.

It is not recommended to watch it. There are too many settings, too many riddles in the plot and characters, and you don't say anything directly. The protagonist clearly knows the facts but is running away from them. The author's writing skills are insufficient, and the full text is not refreshing enough. It is really frustrating to read the text.

Writing a novel is contrary to nature, and dying on the road is normal

The writing is so messy that I doubt whether there is an outline. It is more likely to lead to sudden death if it is written this way.

When Lan comes out, he can't keep up with the radio waves (◔◡◔)

I feel like the ideas are interesting, but the arrangement and characters are a bit abstract. Lan obviously has her own secrets related to the world view, but the author doesn't want her to reveal them. The character is not established, and when her motives are unclear, she is placed next to the protagonist, which affects the protagonist's ability to seize the scene. As a result, I don't have a very good impression of this character, and I don't know how the author will deal with it later.

The previous writing was pretty good, but it started to get messy when there were multiple souls. The author was not able to sort it out clearly, so it became more and more messy as he went on.

I found that the protagonist is not one person with two souls, but his mind will be affected by his body. The mind of the monster body will be more monster-oriented, and the magical girl will become more childish under your influence. It is most normal only when he is in his true form.

I feel like I can't watch anymore since Lan appeared. I still like the plot without Lan appearing at the beginning.

I feel like this is really a pity😭

Recommended starting point, the introduction seems good, click to take a look, updated 9 months ago 😰

The writing is okay, just average. It's just a eunuch. It's a pity.