Playing Blue Files in Douluo Continent?

I never thought these two pussy things could come together. This reminds me of the fact that I had just graduated with a doctorate, and I was the commander and the ship's wife. We boarded the legendary pilot Suzune's plane to teach in Kivotos. As a result, the plane crashed on the way. Together with the four-person survival team, we came to the city of Harran, which was full of zombies, and successfully rescued them. Kyle Crane, along with Aiden, were on the evacuation plane of Task Force 404 to watch a big dunk. Suddenly, a basketball-playing chicken appeared on the plane and started singing and dancing. I was shot in the knee. I can only retire to Griffin as a commander, take my tactical doll with me, go to Night City, and become a new generation of legend. I go to the junction alone and become the God King of Elden. However, I am transported to the emperor's golden toilet by the summoning spell of a brave man from another world. I have no choice but to become the fifth warp evil god, become the national will of the United Human Government of Earth, successfully dominate the galaxy, and after the natural disaster ascends, I return to Chicken Nest Toss, help Colors succeed in being promoted to Outer God, and build the Angel of Peace to Kivotos.

Read more serious literary works, learn how to write, and then start writing novels. You don't even use any decent rhetorical techniques. You can't stand the pure flow of writing.

There are some things in your book that I really want to complain about. First of all, it is about the students. They have no impact on the plot. They barely appear in the plot. They are only mentioned a few times by your name. It can be said that they are not even seen in the battle. It can be said that they are not even seen in the battle. There is no description even when they appear. They neither speak nor interact. Even after being incorporated into the team by you, I can even say that I have never seen them take action. Even if they occasionally release a few songs, they don't have many moves. You are just describing how the protagonist improves his strength. Then why don't you just write a lottery system? Then just don't write about the Blue File System. The novels written by others summon those lottery characters, even the most inconspicuous ones, at least they will have some impetus and influence on the plot. The students summoned by the protagonist seem to be a group of air, such as Hina and Shirako. You can say they are guardians, but what role do they play in it, what they have experienced, and what status they have. When the protagonist talks to them, other people compare I didn't see it at all, such as shock, incomprehension, or some other dialogue to reflect their status and strength, or their promotion and influence on the plot. Apart from the protagonist, you can say that you don't even want to say a few words about these students, so you might as well not write about these students. There is no need to extract them anymore, and just use the total force to fight the boss. After all, it is completely useless, so there is no point in extracting it. The extracted characters written by others will at least fight side by side with the protagonist, have an impact on the plot, promote, and describe. Even if they are summoned from other places and then return to the team, it can be said to have a focus on description. At least they will have some impact on the plot. At least they help the protagonist in their stories and play a certain role. This novel is all about the protagonist fighting alone, and you don't even want to spend more time describing other students.

I have never thought about putting these two things together in my life😂

There is no interaction with the students, and I feel that the students are useless. There is not much description of getting along with the students. It feels like the students do not exist, and they are not called teachers.

The second problem is that the way you write it feels a little like a running account, and the length is a bit short.