I Worship the Blood Sea Guanyin to Become an Immortal!

The Blood Sea Empress

Brothers, please come up with some names for your supporting roles. It would be best if you can bring some simple exercises. The setting does not need to be particularly detailed, these characters can die at any time.

Little brother, when your book was placed in Immortal Ni and A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, it had a larger audience. However, looking at it now, there are too few interesting points, and books nowadays should put the interesting points as much as possible at the front, at least to make people want to read it. I read your current chapter, and only your title and Guanyin attracted me, and the rest were really too bland. I don't know what the problem is. Maybe this is the difference between you, a newbie, and an expert.

The ideas are good, but creating conflicts and some descriptions are too immature and blunt.

To be honest, it feels like "The Weird Immortal"

Male, 15

Support, red envelopes will be given out 😡😡😡

If the protagonist like Guanyin is in the world of ordinary cultivators or high martial arts, it will be fine, but if the power system of the Supreme Being is as high as that of the Supreme Being, it will not work. Wouldn't it be better if you worship the ancestor of the Yuanshi Demon Styx?

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I'm so excited to read this book (it seems like it can't be finished)

It's a good beginning, good luck to the author!

There's nothing sinister about it, so it's more classic when you meet the heroine.

Is it over before I even watch it?