Something's Not Right About This Kamen Rider Journey

A strange woman appeared in front of the author. Although she looked very beautiful, she spoke unexplained words. Strange woman: "Because you did not get enough follow-up readings for this Kamen Rider novel, the investors voted to participate in the next Game of Desire." Author: "Ah, I am going to DGP?"

Waiting for harvest

Go!

I have read six chapters so far, and the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is a very superficial tokusatsu enthusiast. He likes the appearance, power, and coolness of Kamen Rider, but he does not understand the core in depth. He likes to play jokes too much (saying lines regardless of the occasion), which is very close to a joke brat. Currently, I don't have the caution I should have. It is very close to the kind of third-rate bitch who overestimates his capabilities and wants the power of a knight, but is blown away soon. I hope there will be changes in the future...

It can only be said that he is very strong and the author is very envious.

Wang Xiaoming squatted coolly on the roadside Unknown to everyone, an invisible black hand was targeting him in the dark

Mizusawa Yuu Mizusawa Mitsuki Takayama Jin Yuyu

Kamen Rider and Ultraman have had a relationship, so it is normal and reasonable for Ultraman to appear in Kamen Rider

It seems that the writing is okay so far. From the slight jump at the beginning to the complete establishment of the goal of fighting the Federation for innocent people, the growth is quite clear. The writing is pretty good among all the special photography articles in Qidian. Persistence may help you stand out.

Couldn't you have also written the one next door to Xia Chuan?

Overall, it's very niche, and you can't even understand it if you don't click on Kamen Rider.

A mature author should be able to send some pictures for everyone to see.

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The background of the main world has a sense of déjà vu

I have an idea about this, maybe because I can't see it all, so I'll just say it casually. I named the main world where the protagonist is located Star World. The first point is that the strength of Zim World can break the Kamen Rider system, which proves that their upper limit is absolutely high. My thoughts may sound very dark. Just let people from Star World capture a few Amazons and take them back. Then study all its features. Create a method to control Amazon, then invade it on a large scale, captive the entire world, and then replace the entire world with Amazon farms to raise biological weapons. After cracking the first world in this way, you can use the second world as an invasion world Of course this idea is very dark, in which the protagonist can be a good person. Accompany the Amazon protagonist team to save the world together, and then see the darkness hidden under the star world. Of course I just expressed my personal thoughts, which may make people feel uncomfortable.

I feel that there is a problem with the image creation of the main world. Although I have seen that the author has worked hard to shape the intention of the main world to be a malicious world, it still feels a bit like how to put it. The protagonist is a bit like eating with a bowl and putting down the bowl to curse. Everything has two sides. How can I put it? It may be a problem with the author's creation. Simply put, it is a relatively fair world, let alone absolutely fair. I feel that it is difficult to form, and we don't have it. It is too difficult to realize it. The world of Datong is an ideal world. There cannot be only good and no bad. Everything bears yin and embraces yang. There cannot be only yin without yang, and there cannot be only yang without yin. Nothing is beneficial to all people and things. This is impossible, but it is difficult to achieve a good overall trend. Therefore, the image of the main world created by the author at the beginning conflicts with the purpose of creation. Personal opinion, if you have any objections, you are right.

The current chapter looks pretty good

After reading more than thirty chapters, I have some feelings. First of all, it is really similar to the cat's, but they are just basic settings and minor problems. Secondly, for more than thirty chapters, I feel that the emotional fluctuations brought about by the plot are all on a horizontal line. There is no climax of the plot. Even the protagonist's initial acquisition of 01 power gave me a sense of "Oh. The protagonist can transform", which is natural. It is neither unexpected nor surprising. Overall, it is too bland. Third, what is the protagonist's goal? After the appearance of Goldfinger, I felt that the protagonist inexplicably embarked on a path similar to that of the protagonist of I Am Really Human. But except for a deleted memory, the protagonist has no conflict with the main world. Fourthly, the upgrade of the protagonist's abilities is also a bit inexplicable. Everything is a logical and natural narrative. There is also too much world stitched out from the beginning, and the balance of combat power does not feel set well. Now the protagonist gives me the feeling that he can fight all knights below their final form. The same goes for Goldfinger. As long as you get the power once, it will be unlocked in all forms without any explanation. Readers who don't understand Kamen Rider are really confused. And if you design it like this, if you find a way to get the King of Time's drive and transform once, it will feel like the protagonist can encounter evil. Also, Ultraman emm... In general, the writing feels a bit tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to discard.

Do you want to go to the world of anime, comics, and games?

I feel like I don't get recognition if the main character doesn't have a surname.

It's so confusing, the background is unclear.

I just read the first few chapters, and I wonder if the author wrote the wrong version of Zero One, or if the person became something other than 001? Yak Zero One is the red and white one in the drama.