Beginning from the Troubled Times of Demons and Demons, He Became a Human Immortal and a Martial Saint.

This novel also emphasizes many times that the Demon Suppression Department is an independent department. Internal applications must be approved by other department officials, and demon slayers must also obey the orders of other department officials? Is this an independent department?

After sacrificing so much experience and lifespan, why can't he kill a cannon fodder Bai Ji? Eat Xiang's?

I can't stand reading the first chapter. People have rebelled against a high-ranking official and there is only a big man with a mace. Are you writing about a duel between peasants in the countryside over a field of water cans? Then you added a little sword and killed him in seconds. All the other weapons in the frame were thrown away and surrendered. This guy looked like a rebel. There was no villain pattern at all. He was worse than a street gangster.

After reading so many novels about slaying demons, this one's The Demon Slayer is the worst. In other novels, the Demon Slayer is a high-ranking figure. In this novel, the Demon Slayer is just a clown who can bully just anyone and no one takes him seriously.

Come on, good writing😁

Qin Mu

Come on, author, the writing in the first dozen chapters is still very smooth!

I just wanted to see how bad it was, and after reading three chapters, I can tell it's an old author, but the plot is messy, and it's a slap in the face from the beginning. Goldfinger is similar to the one about slaying demons, which is easy to understand, but the plot is too messy, and the forces come in too early, which makes my head hurt.

Who is Weiwei? Why do you have this kind of writing habit!

It makes me feel even more unhappy when I can't see the sophistication of people in the book. It's not interesting and it's too embarrassing.

How about rewriting the beginning? The first chapter is a bit discouraging.

The writing was okay in the first few chapters, but then it started to become illogical.

As bad as it is. Tens of thousands of years of cultivation. Still wandering around the garbage factory

The character of the protagonist is very appealing to me😁

If you can't accept the setting of first-class martial arts, you can't learn other novels, and you will fail. The hacker method can also overturn everything.

No matter how many times the protagonist upgrades, someone stronger than him will emerge.