Naruto: a Guide to Growing Native Otsutsuki

If you want to save Uchiha, you must oust Fugaku. At the fatal moment, an indecisive decision-maker will be fatal. The golden mean is not mediocrity. Be tough when you need to be tough, and compromise when you need to compromise.

It hasn't been long since the newbie wrote the book. There are a lot of things like plot and rhythm that I still can't grasp. I hope you guys can give me your opinions if there are some areas that are bad.

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Author, these latest chapters are duplicates

This book will not exceed 300 chapters. It must be a eunuch. I have no desire to read it.

Please help me get to the end of the last chapter and add more to this book. This is really important to me.

The idea is good. The power it gives is okay except for time freezing. It suppresses the Sharingan a little too much. It stands to reason that the three magatama should have been used long ago. The biggest problem with this book is actually that the writing is not good. There are a lot of missing parts in the written content. You need to make up the pictures by yourself. The plot is incoherent. The descriptions are always here and there, and most of them are straightforward. It is more like reading a report than reading a novel. This is indeed a problem for the new author. In addition, the so-called poisonous points, such as too much cheating as they say, are actually not a problem. Just like this book, it is written as a behind-the-scenes story. As a big boss, he has super-standard strength, but is not enough to deal with other big bosses. It is normal to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but the author is required to arrange the plot and write the book. In my opinion, most of the plot arrangements in this book are just okay. The most important problem is that the writing is not good. I hope to go further in the future.

It looks like it imitates the one that imprisoned Tobirama.

The concept of this book is very good, and it has the potential to become a god. However, it is obvious that there must be something wrong with the author's framework and outline.