Divine Network Layout

In this regard, I suggest you read "Reincarnation Paradise" by Mosquito, as his layout is better.

There are also punctuation marks, it is recommended to change them more. Many sentences did not end with a full stop, which gave people the feeling that... It was hard to explain, but it was easy to persuade them to give up. The impression it gives is not very good. Although I don't pay much attention to it when reading, if the punctuation marks are not clear, it will make you feel uncomfortable. Of course, this is just my personal opinion and is for reference only.

There is also the issue of the title of the novel. If it weren't for the fact that I felt a little bored and happened to click on it, I wouldn't have watched it at all. Why? Because there is no such eye-catching name at all. No matter how good it is, at least the core content of this article should be pointed out. And the title of the novel you came up with is unreadable, let alone attractive enough to read. So, ask the editor if he can change the title of the novel, otherwise it will be difficult to attract people.

I just watched it a few times. How should I put it? I feel that the paragraph layout and punctuation marks are uncomfortable. The rest is fine so far.

It's my turn to be six, and you, the author, are a bit... Well, difficult to deal with. At first, I just clicked on it and took a look. When I saw the name of the protagonist, I thought it was a woman. I didn't expect you to use him, thinking it was a man. From the beginning, it turned out to be a woman, which shocked me! Author, have you been robbed? Or is there something wrong with your input method? I suggest you modify it so that it looks confusing and you can't tell whether it's a man or a woman.