Naruto: Tree of Rebirth

After reading it a little, I feel that the text narrative is very colloquial (like telling a story). This kind of narrative without strong emotions makes it read very blandly, like a white text. I suggest the author consciously avoid it.

Not trying to make excuses, just my personal opinion. Hey, the main character is basically invincible with his current strength, and then he starts to get bored.

Although the writing is short, it's still pretty cool.

Byakugan's various abilities are notorious. His natural fighting eyes can see through fate, the future, see through space, read minds, control people's thinking, coerce, blur, etc. Hinata's Byakugan seems to be normal, and Otsutsuki Ishiki's eyes are probably also a change of Byakugan. It's not clear yet. Byakugan's further reincarnation eye is also terrifying, and the Toner Otsutsuki next door is going to the moon 😥

It is recommended to use more sentences describing actions and less metaphors and adjectives.

Sit back and wait, you didn't write it well at the beginning, and you wrote it at the beginning. You were discovered not long ago, what's the point?

It is recommended to go to the Pirate World to plant trees.

A protagonist appears, everyone is super shadow level, Otsutsuki is level one 🥵

All the novels in which Uchiha Hikaru appears are gone.