Super Seminary: I Am the Emperor

I feel like your protagonist's perspective is not very good. And there are a lot of Superman novels now. If you could write a book with a similar theme to Golden Fleet. I feel that this kind of cosmic civilization will be very successful because I feel that your writing style is also adequate. In fact, I feel a pity when that book is published. You can try to imitate that book. Including those elements? The really good ones are not based on the main plot. The protagonist should have his own thing to do, instead of hanging out with the original plot characters or being a nanny, or just following the main plot and having nothing else to write about. But there are too many such doors now. Moreover, the world view of this cartoon is so grand, why do you have to limit the protagonist to the earth? If the protagonist develops his own civilization, or if the protagonist has his own things to do in this universe, I actually feel better about remembering this worldview. This is an inevitable trend in fan fiction. Just like One Piece, how many people are there on the ship? There is no traffic after all. Write your own things and have your own characteristics. What do you think, author? You are the V3 update of Superman Academy on this platform. Although there are not many words. But I still tried my best to read what you wrote. Your idea is very good. And there is nothing wrong with what you wrote. But this main line is too cliche. If you were one of the first to write a Supermarket Academy fanfic, your novel would definitely be very successful. But now it's not very effective. Not innovative. Because your predecessors have walked this road for you countless times. You will make this thing too repetitive. Everyone wants to use this worldview to see new things, instead of seeing the same things as before, which are just different abilities or skills. But in the end, the story direction is still the same, which makes it feel uninteresting.

Is this writing useless? ? Isn't it amazing to start a new book?