Global Summoning: From the Start, I'm the Undying War God 096

It made me laugh. An Arab asked me to read this book. It's outrageous. However, foreigners also like to read cool books.

If you can't write, don't write. At least, let's understand it before writing.

Didn't you understand it before writing? The foundation has been reduced to nothing.

I really can't understand why the role of Gu Yun should also be used as the male lead. Moreover, the plot almost reproduces the old template of Annie and the male protagonist intact, with the same xx becoming stronger. Let's not talk about whether this is right or not for a brother. He has robbed someone else's sister and fiancée. Now that the goddess has also robbed him, it is too outrageous. It doesn't matter if Anne is like this. The opportunity for Anne and the male protagonist to be together and the experience they have with each other are more story-telling and fateful than other female characters. Anne's role as a little woman is very clear, so there is no problem. But as the second female character in the play, can't Gu Yun make some differences? She can be a confidante, a strong career woman, a senior, etc. Let Gu Yun have a relationship with the male protagonist. Is it okay, and Gu Yun's original vigorous and resolute character is more suitable as an idealist. It is too cliched to stick to a woman. It is completely formulaic and has no differentiation. The other three fiancées are the same. What is the meaning of existence? Is it just to let the male protagonist open a harem as a vase. Then let's talk about Anne Anne currently plays the most roles and deserves to be the first heroine. Anne has the most interaction with the male protagonist in each chapter. Even if the male protagonist is not around, she will mention Anne in various places. I feel that the author deliberately added Anne's role. At least in my opinion, Anne's treatment is much higher than that of other female characters. She also has the most writing and ink, and she has the most participation in the plot. But Anne's current positioning as a character is very strange, which makes it awkward for people like me who like to see Anne and the male protagonist's pure love, because there are other female characters between them. When I read it as a harem, I found that most of the text was devoted to Anne. It can be said that except for Anne, the shaping and plot of other female characters are very empty. Lin Yaya and Shen Zhi can only be deleted directly. Lin Muxue is basically a soy sauce. If you want to write about a harem, don't make the other female characters look so frivolous. If you want to write about pure love, let the male protagonist take control. You wrote Anne and the male protagonist to be very sweet, and at the same time, the other female characters are basically vases. As a result, now I feel that Anne and the male protagonist can have pure love, and there is no need for other female characters. The harem will affect the perception.

The book is a good book, very interesting to read, but it kind of ruined my childhood 😅😅😅 096 was cut into a kitten "The attack is no different from that of a kitten" 682 was cut into 2 ha "It's too sharky, the original 682 has a high IQ, and the attack is much weaker" 049j is not easy to comment on "049j is made by a fan, so it doesn't matter, but the main skill is soul stealing of 049j's main skill "stealing 106 skills" and 343's partial skills plus 173 teleportation ability, which is a direct blow." The author had better say that they are all giving in, can't the popular characters be stronger? My childhood! Give me back my childhood! ! 😭😭😭

It's just that so many women are disgusting, and there's a reason why they're not popular.

Your novel has tens of thousands of likes for each video on Kuaishou, not including the likes of other video software. However, the readers of your novel are so different. People nowadays rarely spend money to read a novel. It is impossible for your novel to become popular on this platform, so think about it.

The author, this is just my impression after reading 😰 First of all, I feel that the portrayal of 096 is too weak. I can accept the small weakening, but it is too big. Secondly, the foreshadowing is a bit too long. I still hope there will be more fighting (just a personal opinion) 🤐

This kind of marriage where the male protagonist Long Aotian meets a woman crazily has been written so badly in novels that it couldn't be worse. Can you stop being so cliche? You found a good subject matter, but isn't this just squatting on the toilet and defecating 😅

I really don't know what the physical fight between the protagonist and the bear country means? I originally came here to see the foundation, but it's totally boring like this.