Lords: Start with the Elemental Mage

This introduction Lord× Palu√

Looking at this introduction, the protagonist is not a lord but a nanny!

Sage, when you sell things, they are all at bargain prices. When you buy things, you are taken advantage of. If you don't know the value, you don't bid. The seller negotiates the price.

Based on my many years of reading experience, I would like to express my insignificant feelings about Chapter 1 of this book, hoping to bring some insignificant reference significance to the author. As a system or plug-in article, my most important requirement for the system and plug-ins is that they are unique and cannot be shared by others, because with my IQ, if others also have plug-ins, it is impossible for me to compete with others, so if the plug-ins are not unique, I will not have a sense of involvement at all. So after reading Chapter 1, I found out that the protagonist's system was either broken or inherited from someone else's, and I instantly lost interest. This is what I want to say to the author. There is no need to give the source for cheating. You don't need to explain the origin of the cheat. As long as the cheat is unique and it works, that's it.

I watched it today and found that there is no problem with the direction of the plot. I hope that the follow-up will be more exciting. I have been watching female videos before, and now it is good to change my taste by watching male videos~ It turns out that the style difference between female videos and male videos is really so big.

I don't understand the division of family property. Why can the fourth child only get the least? Could it be that the division of family property is not based on bloodline but on combat effectiveness? Isn't it normal to divide equally? The content written later is also relatively tedious and weak, and the three golden chapters are not grasped well. I hope the author can learn a lesson.

Mage content 0.1% Kingdom battle 99.9%

A duke's cash flow is only a few thousand gold coins, and the complete equipment of a dozen of the most rubbish knights costs 100 gold coins. Really💩

Ah, there are really too many authors like you who are delayed because of something, and come back to read it after two days, but the inspiration can't be sustained, so they don't want to write, and they just take the bucket and run away.

Apart from the weird value of the gold coins, there are not many other flaws.

The transition is so abrupt. I was still writing and looking at a map in the first paragraph, but in the next paragraph I reached my destination. How about adding a transition in the middle? When I looked at it, I thought I missed it.

A real military meritorious duke, only such a small amount of money? The kingdom only has tens of thousands of gold coins. Based on your currency ratio, plus the money you pay to the serfs, how many people do you have? This kingdom is just a town, right?🤔🤔

Fantasy Lord Food and Grass, very nice looking.

The plot is incoherent. Did the author read the manuscript before publishing it?

I hope the author highlights the mage's career and future path. The characters are well described, but I hope the map is more vivid.

There has been no update for a day. Is it a eunuch?

Change Asr in Chapter 1 to Aslan! The latter is written as Aslan.

Don't give up

The spirit is commendable, but the content is really average