Dou Po: Tian Zhizun Returns from the Vast World

The original Yao Boss has woken up long ago. What use can the fighting spirit of a mere fighter do to him, a fighting master? It's just that he doesn't want to accept another white-eyed wolf disciple to inspect Xiao Yan.

Must the Supreme Breakthrough Heaven be the origin of the world? Dou Di's breakthrough requires source energy, but it can be said to be high-level spiritual energy. Lin Dong is the embryo of the planes that first broke through the ancestral realm and then merged. The planes are large and small, and the source is the same. There are so many heavenly supremes in the vast world who need the world source. How much world source is needed? The predecessors have used up the source for breakthroughs, so how can the younger generation break through? That's not the end of strength.

Smart Anti-Inflammation seems to be bigger than Sheppard. Both of them have been around for hundreds of years since the plot started.

Do you need to make the protagonist's family so awesome? Inexplicable second design...

If his family was that bad, the protagonist and his wife would not have been captured in the original novel.

Single heroine? Qing Yanjing? A very strong woman, beautiful and powerful, a great master of the Holy Grade.

I just don't understand how you can make such a ridiculous statement about the protagonist's life experience, and even marry him to the ancient pagoda clan.

A little trivia: Emperor Yan and Martial Ancestor are both bigger than Mu Feng

Legend of the Great Dominator's Edge😃

The anti-inflammatory medicine could sneak into Xun'er's room during the fighting spirit stage. It was most likely that Yao Lao secretly helped or Ling Ying was blind. . .

I haven't read it yet. The idea seems very novel, but you may want to pay attention to the timeline. Xiao Lin is at least over a hundred years old, and Mu Feng died of over 40 years old. The timeline should be adjusted.

Recognize your own strength, don't look like a bitch, it's disgusting

It may be more refreshing and cheerful to watch without thinking.

It's a bit stiff and always feels weird.

A decent nanny story with a lot of flaws.

Brothers, is it a harem? If so, I've seen it

Tsk, I never read a book that exceeds 1,000,000 words, but you finished it with 99,000 words, you are like this👍🏼

I was spinning around the map so much that I was too dizzy and didn't handle the details well.

The writing is too messy. The first paragraph was still fighting spirit, the next moment it became Daqian, and the next moment it became Tianxuan. Keep turning. As for the daughter-in-law others mentioned, she was originally the confidante and wife of the original protagonist.

This book is not good at all. The protagonist goes from being a half-step Heavenly Supreme to breaking through to Heavenly Supreme. He actually needs to get the origin of the world before he can break through. This is a blind change. There is also this Pinxixi type system. Every time you complete a task, you will get fragments of the world's origin. You have to wait for the fragments to accumulate to a certain level before you can synthesize the world's origin. This is very discouraging. Writing like this, I feel that this system is useless. It feels like it is as difficult as ascending to the sky to break through the Supreme Being with a system. Another thing is that the protagonist of this book has no main plot of his own at all. He is witnessing the growth process of Lin Dong and Xiao Yan throughout the whole process. He has no experience of his own at all. It is written like the animal world and the protagonist is this photographer, with no sense of existence. I won't say much about this protagonist. He is powerful but doesn't show off in front of others and doesn't pretend to be cool. Whenever there was a chance to show off, Lin Dong and Xiao Yan would do it, and he would just watch from the side, just like a passerby. It's so unqualified. He is obviously an invincible being in the lower plane, but he still deliberately acts like an ordinary person. He looks panicked In the end, there is this protagonist. He doesn't accept any women, but he still recommends it to Xiao Yan and Lin Dong, and then he is still watching from the side, writing like a clown. I also specifically wrote a single female protagonist. I wrote a single female protagonist and there was no plot, so I just copied the original work Summary! ! ! ! If the protagonist has strength, he won't use it. If he has talent, he won't pretend. If he has a girl, he won't accept it. He will take the initiative to give it to Lin Dong and Xiao Yan. The protagonist has no sense of existence in the whole story. Most of the plot is about Xiao Yan and Lin Dong. It is completely witnessing the growth process and experience of Xiao Yan and Lin Dong. This is the most boring 😅😅😅

Contact with the wonderful background, the inexplicable timeline, and the inexplicable unwillingness to marry Qing Yanjing

Is the next novel about Fighting to Break the Sky?

It's a gift for women. If you can keep writing this kind of thing to 1 million words, you're a genius.