Since I'm a Villain, Why Should I Be More Cautious?

Congratulations on breaking 100

After reading the plot of the book "The Tomb of the King of Medicine", I felt that the protagonist was as fierce as a tiger in one action, and his record was 0-5. The protagonist seems to have gained a lot, but those things should be in the protagonist's pocket, so after the protagonist risked his life and showed off a few meaningless operations, he actually got nothing.

The first three chapters are okay after reading it. The setting at the beginning should be based on a poisonous book written in 22 years ago, but your writing is much more refreshing than his. There are several minor points raised: It would be better to change the year of Emperor Xuanwu's reign to more than 400 years in the year 458. It is a good habit to keep the wording consistent. The name of the dynasty should be simplified and smooth as possible. The purely fictional title of Daliang Wu Dynasty becomes more acceptable to the Wu Kingdom. The use of dynasty is generally used for unification, while the country is divided among the heroes. In the third chapter, the four surrounding countries are about to move, so it would be more comfortable to write it as Wu Kingdom. We can make some nice names and organization settings, Fish Scale Guard = Kingsguard? You can consider using the Supervision Department, Plum Blossom Guard, Embroidered Clothes Envoy, and Sky Patrol Supervisor, which are more powerful. Changing the red scale to the red luan or something is in line with the royal tone. Sometimes the difference between good and bad online articles lies in the name.

A story about a mentally retarded man pretending to be smart

This one is taking away the luck of popularity, and it's Xiao Yanzi, and it's Little Green Bottle, you, my brother Yan died so miserably.

Too much nonsense

Overall good. The current shortcoming is that it is too verbose. If you can understand the theme and routine, you don't need to explain too much. The only thing that is required is for the protagonist to eat a dish and introduce all the ingredients, cooking methods and cooking steps.

Looking at this trend, it feels like it's going to collapse again I even rewarded the last book, and this one feels like it's going to collapse soon too.

Aren't the two sisters separated by more than three feet? I forgot my settings after just a few pictures.

Wang Teng

If you don't understand the fake Yaowang Valley plot, the emperor has a back-up plan. . I know that the two of them are of the highest quality. . . Don't send more than one grade yet. Bad review! ! !

Is the author a fan of Tang San? So dark and anti-inflammatory

When did I write Wu Yue to death? I saw it annoying

The ancient script of deceiving cannon fodder to explore ruins, described from the perspective of the organizer, is indeed different to the senses.

It's better to kill this Ye Fan quickly. Don't let anyone jump out to protect him again.

When I saw the introduction, I thought it was the Sutra of the Dead.

The reading data of the new book issue determines the survival of the book. I hope that all readers will use your little hands to make a fortune and read to the last page of the latest chapter every day. Another: Readers who are accustomed to reading, please read the latest chapter every Tuesday, which is also counted as catching up on reading data, thank you!

Heroine