Sky-Covering Fire Unicorn

It's well written and not bad, but if you pay a little attention to typos and repeated words, it's still readable.

You are about to become an emperor, yet you are submissive to a great sage, calling yourself a junior, and pretending to be a great sage? I was also speechless, and in the previous paragraph, I felt relieved when I saw that the Mending Heaven Technique was not incomplete after hundreds of thousands of years ago, hadn't you been born hundreds of years ago? Why don't you go get it? It can only be said that there are a lot of little plots.

The first life of the ruthless person is indeed stronger than the ordinary enlightened person, but it is not as exaggerated as you said that killing the ancient emperor is like slaughtering a dog. It is just a incomplete chaotic body. Her real rise was after the second and third lives. In the later period of the ruthless person in the fourth and fifth life of Zhetian, she could not kill even a sublimated supreme in an instant.

In your first life, you were as strong as Wu Shi, and ruthless people can't do anything to you. The strongest person in the first life of Zhe Tian should be Wu Shi, and forget about ruthless people. There is a problem with the method of becoming an immortal, and it cannot show its strength. The Immortal Emperor can hit Emperor Ye Tiandi with one hand and hurt him. At that time, Ye Fan was the Emperor of Heaven, and he could hurt Ye Fan with one hand. The expressiveness of the Immortal Emperor who has lived for several lives should be that of the Immortal Emperor. You can say that its method of becoming an immortal has been out of shape for too long, but he is not weak.

Is the author very dissatisfied with his identity as a human being? He reincarnated into a Holy Spirit and was full of hostility towards the Human Race. As long as he knew about the Human Race, he robbed all the opportunities. He also wanted to transform the restricted area, befriend the Supreme who launched the dark turmoil, cultivate hostile forces of the Human Race, and planned to kill several unenlightened Human Race Emperors. This simply refreshed my three views. You said you are a Holy Spirit, so you were a human before time travel, and your soul was also a human. Your education in the previous life failed like this. It is really that the three views are inconsistent.

To be honest, the protagonist has the Holy Spirit in the beginning, but the author's portrayal of the protagonist feels like a scoundrel. As for the Taoist heart, it can't be seen at all😥

After the clone came out, he became poisonous. Why should the clone find a woman and cuckold himself?

Dacheng Perfection Saint Lin Ling sneak attacks on the Immortal Three Killer Dao King. . . Author 6

I was hooked before I even finished reading the first chapter. The mark of Tianxin will disappear within ten thousand years of the ruthless man's first life. Are you kidding me? You still insist on saying that things change in different times🤮🤮🤮🤮 Do you know that you eat books and drink Chendong?

It's strange that I have to leave the circle. What I wrote is misleading, random creations, and all kinds of things I'm thinking about.

I found that it is a complete paradox that the Great Emperor of Zhetian World only has one Imperial Weapon. As long as the materials are sufficient, if a human race emperor or ancient emperor is shameless, if he trains 8 out of 10 pieces for his own clan, his descendants will have no problem in protecting themselves. Even if he cannot train the Imperial Weapon, he can still train to a slightly weaker Supreme Weapon.

I never expected that the protagonist would take on the role of the Holy Spirit and make the Empress the enemy. This is really a big deal. So many people would not take the role of the Holy Spirit, but they would actually take on the role of the villain, the Holy Spirit.

People can't, at least they shouldn't. For example, the author and his protagonist are more suitable for time-traveling Douluo, and are a perfect match for the Tang Shenwang. Don't be a disaster. As for the character portrayal of the protagonist, he is not even as good as the Supreme One who kills himself in the restricted area.

Dreaming back to ten years ago, the ancient harem fantasy novel covered with a veil 😂

I have never seen such a loser Zhe Tianwen

The reader is a human being, not the Holy Spirit. Is it difficult to guess what the reader wants to read? You are sitting on a crooked buttocks. We will not substitute the Holy Spirit, and we will not think that your writing is good.

There's no logic at all. Just think of it and force it to be weird just for the sake of being funny.

What is this shitty AI pushing? In the body of Zhe Tian Sheng Sheng, he can actually write more diaosi than the diaosi in the urban god hero's article. It's weird.

They are all written about ruthless people. They are rubbish novels. They are still trying to whitewash the Holy Spirit. Those rubbish are not good things.

A Holy Spirit who is about to become enlightened does not think about his own tools, but wants to borrow others'. You have really read "Zhetian" in vain. The path of the time traveler Ye Fan is not only available at the beginning, but also learned all the way through life and death. The good world of "Zhetian" has become a stupid courtyard in the hands of the author.

The early part was very good, but unfortunately the later part fell apart and I didn't want to read it anymore.

Is the protagonist going to take revenge on the ruthless person or lick the ruthless person?

Brother, the second empress is the Nanling Heavenly Emperor. She is a real innate chaotic body with Heavenly Emperor level combat power. How about you hit her with a hammer? I'm going to test you. Find a woman for your avatar. The avatar that covers the sky has no sense of independence. Try it, you won't know, right? There is no such thing as perfection

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Talent, a person who has lived the fifth life of Heavenly Emperor is almost the same as the first life Emperor of Heaven. Your fifth life has been in vain! Originally, you became an emperor in your first life, and then in your later years, like the Emperor, you abandoned your former Taoism and lived to become an emperor in your second life. You took elixir to live in your third life, studied elixir in your fourth life, and studied formations in your fifth life. You can reach the normal fifth-generation Heavenly Emperor level no matter what, but in your fifth-generation Heavenly Emperor = first-generation Heavenly Emperor? Haha, it doesn't matter if you don't accept it.

Should I still write this? 😒

This book is gone? Can I apply for a refund?