Siheyuan: I Am Able to Rejuvenate Myself

Is this writing a book? A messy preface with no follow-up!

This type of chronicle writing about capitalists is too unfamiliar with the past. I have a friend whose grandfather and grandfather were both capitalists. And when this friend was two years old, he carried his parents on his back and fought together. As a result, he suffered from asthma since he was a child. It disappeared in his fifties. This was not the craziest period from 66 to 69.

This book has a lot to say, but Shan Cong's writing style is okay. As for the plot, Siheyuan is just like that, and it's pretty good among Siheyuan fans. But there are several big problems, and this book will basically be useless unless solved. 1. The starting time is 60 years, a year of food shortage. The protagonist eats all kinds of big fish and meat. The author is afraid that he does not know the situation of having money but no food in the year of food shortage. Similarly, the protagonist, as the son of a capitalist, is not good enough. Is he really not afraid of being reported? 2. Although the plot and character description are in line with the image of most courtyard novels, this means that no matter how high this book reaches the level of food and grass, it is impossible to achieve a higher level. Take Yi Zhonghai as an example. As a person who is good at messing with others from the moral high ground, if he fails to mess with the protagonist once, he will calm down, think about countermeasures, and only take action after finding the protagonist's sore feet, unlike the unreasonable nonsense in the article. 3. Siheyuan novels can also be said to be a type of chronological novel. In addition to looking at things in the quadrangle, they also look at some social conditions and systems at the time, and how the protagonist develops under the conditions allowed by society at that time. But the premise is that there won't be any big mistakes, and you can't write with your head in the air. The simplest article is to buy seeds. At that time, you had to get a seed ticket to buy seeds. In the years of food shortage, the ticket system was implemented in all aspects. Otherwise, some hungry people would definitely buy seeds as food. The price of seeds is much cheaper than the price of black market food! 4. When opening a book, it is best to describe the situation of the protagonist in the first few chapters. The situation in the courtyard of the protagonist in this book is described, but when the protagonist traveled through time, what his job is, and where he works, there is no description at all, which is very helpless The above are just my personal thoughts, and there is no malice. I just hope that the author will write better and better 🙏🙏🙏

Did the author write the last two chapters by his feet without using his brain🧠? The language is inconsistent, garbled and unintelligible.

I took a look, it's so messy and doesn't look good.

This is the opposite. Others are third-generation poor, but this is the son of a capitalist.

You have influenced everyone with your love and you can finish the book