Reversal of Fate, I Become an Immortal on My Own

Seeing the rebirth of my previous life five hundred years ago with a younger brother, I remembered my great love, the Immortal Lord

This reminds me of a certain Great Love Immortal😏

I've finished reading it, it's great, but a lot of names are misspelled, and everything else is great.

I haven't read it yet, but the introduction is so attractive. Whether it's the imaginative fantasy of the original Dharma Sutra or the strange adventure of the strange story, it's very attractive. I've added a bookshelf. I'll give you a review after reading it.

It doesn't look like reading an online article, but it feels like reading a physical book. The author is very talented.

It feels like the author wants to write the feeling of Gu Zhenren. The character's IQ is on the line, but this is the logical setting, which is a bit far-fetched. I don't want to read it after more than 30 chapters. It feels weird. It's okay to leave the black and red girl unkilled as a hidden stake, but why not kill the Qilan Snake? I feel like it doesn't matter whether he stays or not, and there is this Snow Mother, which is really the most uncomfortable. Don't imitate the ancestral biography of Gu Zhenren, you can't write it. To sum up, the character's IQ is online, the logic is not good, the setting is a bit complicated, the imitation taste is too strong, but the essence is not written, the darkness is not dark enough, the justice is not justice enough, it is too far-fetched

I've only read Chapter 18, and it's almost all good. I don't know why I haven't read it much. The descriptions of scenery and objects are very delicate, and when they appear on the paper, I seem to have really entered this fantasy world. The emotional description is even more outstanding, you can hear the thunder in the silent place. Some rough slang and tribal allusions, combined with wild impressions similar to those of the Miao and Yi tribes, portray the world in a profound way. There are some references to the plot, but it is innocuous. The writing style is too strong. However, sometimes the character perspective is a bit shaky, but this is a minor problem among minor problems. However, I still hope to see the wonderful imagination of Taoism. This can be slightly inspired by the imagination of Tongtian Bamboo Cultivator, Immortal of Mist, and Qinghe Magician. They have a lot of flaws, but their imagination is okay. You can take a look at the adventures of monsters, mountains and seas, and Taoist scenery of immortality. Just a personal suggestion. It is an indigenous protagonist, but it is normal for the emotions of the indigenous protagonist to be brought in. It is very interesting, but I feel that the following verses are not easy to open up the imagination. This author is truly platinum, but the data for newcomers may be a little less. If the profit is not good, I can accept it if it is cut. Just remember to post the new book later. I wish the author's new book will sell well and find readers and confidants who resonate with him in this vast world.

The writing is very good, but I have a question. When he killed Qi Zaoma, didn't he tell his younger brother the truth about Qi Caohuang's killing of his parents? Why does the younger brother still hate his older brother? Is it because I understood it wrong or something?

There are four major categories: flowers, birds, fish and insects. The first is the name of the insect, and so on (the fly rubs its hands). I love you all.

It's a lot of seams, but it's supportive.

Being old is awesome. All are latecomers. Next class

It's really like the beginning of Gu Zhenren, but Gu Zhenren introduced external variables such as caravans to coordinate the protagonist's promotion and troubles, which seems more logical, and the story of Ren Zu is indeed better written than the story of Xue Mu.

Man is the spirit of all things, and Gu is the true essence of heaven and earth?

It's a shame about the eunuch, but I still like the setting and writing style.

So well written. The rhythm is well controlled. The third golden chapter not only introduces the background, but also introduces the golden finger, conflict points, and the relationship between characters. It reveals a little bit of the power system and lays out a little bit of the main line. What touches me most is the burden and sense of mission that arises spontaneously. Seeing this really gave me a creepy feeling, and I was very surprised.