
Under One Person, Xiao Wu Zhu Just Wants to Collect Elves
一人之下,小巫祝只想收集精灵
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Under One Person, the Weird Under One Person Fanfic
If you like the Chinese comic "Under One Person", you can read it. The writing style is uneven and the imagination is wide open.
Ji Mo Yuxia's Favorite Books (No Heroine, Single Heroine)
I don't want to forget the books I have read (›´ω`‹ ), so I decided to make a book list and write it down. (I personally prefer novels without heroines, and I tend to pursue novels without heroines. Occasionally there are some with single heroines, and I don't like multiple heroines)
Better to Lack Than to Overflowthe Novel Should Be Interesting as Long as It Is Interesting
Interesting is not only a feeling of readers, but also a comprehensive expression of writing style, plot, conception, form and content. The book list only adds interesting books. No matter how highly clicked the book is, it will not be added if it is not interesting enough. It suits my taste, and I hope it will also suit the taste of book lovers.
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The content is very good, but your introduction should be changed earlier to persuade you to quit. The best way to set the tone for the whole book is to tell the story of Wu Zhu's practice, and also to screen people. I saw some people saying that your book doesn't follow the main plot. The protagonist is stuck in the duality of being strong and not strong, and he doesn't understand it even at his age. Let's add some comments from others.
In the Northeast, Huiju Ling will send you to kill you. This is purely an eye candy for everyone in the Northeast. Who do you think you are?
Have all the authors who wrote one-person fanfics recently become enlightened? ? Many of them look like one person, but finally they are not the kind of articles written by Long Aotian.
Yan Huan/Sima Hui (Mr. Shui Jing) and the Witch King in 9981? ? ?
The only advantage of the flow story is that it can be completed, right?
The author directly applies the protagonist's character template and memory from 9981, which is a mixture of time traveler and reincarnation of Shui Jing. Then Sima Yi's appearance was meaningless and illogical. It felt like he suddenly came from the world of 1981 to the world of one person. Then an inexplicable family and parents were added, which was of no use. The combat power is quite broken. The second uncle once said in a live broadcast that the combat power of 9981 is generally better than that of one person. Even the old Heavenly Master is not the strongest in Nine-Nine-Eighty-One. After all, one is the worldview of ordinary people practicing cultivation, and the other is the worldview of the continuous reincarnation of the generals of the Three Kingdoms. According to the setting of Nine Nine Eighty-One, the Five Elements Elf is not as good as the Eight Deceitful Gods. As a result, the Five Elements Elf in this book far surpasses the Eight Deceitful Gods. The protagonist has collected the Eight Deceitful Gods, it is better not to collect them at all. The Eight Deceiver Gods' abilities are not reflected at all, and Soaring Snake will crash into them at every turn. The protagonist's combat power has been raised too high from the beginning. After that, he only accepts an elf to improve, and then his combat power explodes. He does not cultivate as much as one person. "Writing the plot is like running water, changing the location after a few chapters, and collecting the eight deceitful gods is not as exciting as collecting stamps. The only advantage is that there are few fanfics that can be completed
It's a very bland article, but it's pretty good among fandoms under one person.
My feelings after reading more than 160 chapters so far
1. There is no female protagonist. At least after reading more than a hundred chapters, I don't feel that there is any sign of a female protagonist. It has a bit of a Nantong tendency (Li Shuyu). 2. Chaos, the author combined Nine Nine Eighty-One and Under One Man, and the writing was very chaotic, especially in the Zhuge Village section, where everything about Sima Yizhong and Zhuge Liang appeared, and the balance of combat power was not done well. 3. Miscellaneous. The protagonist's methods (elves) can be said to be miscellaneous but not refined. Miscellaneous refers to the essence of the five elements and the eight deceitful gods being somewhat useful, while the big-headed thief and ghost are basically useless. The word "not good" refers to Teng Shesi's frightening and weird things (written by the author himself). He used it a few times at first, but then he just hit people with "Teng She, crush him". The gold spirit and wood spirit are full of flaws. Even with the gold spirit in his body, he is still afraid of poor ghosts. 4. Busy. Since going out for training, the Five Elements and the Eight Tricksters have been easily found one by one. Basically, there is no gap between the front and rear feet. To use an analogy, it is as outrageous as removing a strange fire from the next copy of Anti-Inflammation. In just over a hundred chapters, there are three essences and two deceitful gods. Looking at the titles of the following chapters, it takes more than two hundred chapters to complete the five essences, which is outrageous. To summarize, the protagonist is a collector and likes to collect elves. He can read the 9981 edition of elves as a single person.
What the hell is Sima Yi writing about? Can't stand it anymore
I couldn't stand it after reading the latest comic. Any side effects are nonsense. The Eight Magic Skills are the true method of reaching heaven. What are the side effects? It's just that you haven't practiced enough!
The magic change is a bit too outrageous. All the legendary characters appear. It feels like a fantasy novel, and no one is like that.
The female channel is here, right?
Looking at the cover of the pen name And the plot of the book The protagonist of Asasi No matter the world is good or bad, I have a beautiful tune
The protagonist is furry control
I originally thought that the article was about a witchcraft and a shaman who is close to nature, that is, one who would not go on a killing spree, but I did not expect that the protagonist is also very violent. In addition to furry, he mostly resorts to killing to solve problems, and sometimes uses inhumane means. Let's see how the protagonist's character will grow in the future.
Yan Huan
Nine-nine-eighty-one
Overall, it's good. It'll be fine if it ends safely.
The process of finding the Essence of the Five Elements in the early and middle stages was quite interesting. I felt that the progress started to speed up in the middle stage, especially the big brawl in Zhuge Village which was a bit over the top. After that, it was a crazy rush to catch up with the progress, which was a bit slow, but it was okay. However, the content of one person's own is not much, the original work has not been finished, and the fan fiction usually stops there. Unless you start writing from the Jiashen period at the beginning, that's all the modern content will be. And I feel that some of the settings in the later stage have a sense of immediacy like "The Legend of Wu". For example, the special characteristics of the land of immortality are analogous to the land of enlightenment, as well as the path of all things, the path of ghosts and gods, and Zhong Kui. The first thing that reminds me of it is the spell of animal creation. The book is coming to an end. Should the ending be that Yan Huan becomes a mortal? I just don't know if it's all things or ghosts and gods.
Is this Yan Huan based on the one from 9981? Seems a bit familiar
Has the author read the latest comics? It seems that the Eight Magic Skills are about to be revealed. The Fenghou Qimen has become seventy-two transformations. Now the Eight Magic Skills are the real Eight Banners. It seems that Ju Lingqian Jiang and Liuku Immortal Thief have become the lower two miracles. I have some doubts that Qi Ti Yuanliu and Tongtian Ru are the upper two miracles.
The Lu family is actually okay. When they defeated Little Japan, the Lu family used all their strength.
After reading the latest chapter, if the author wants to resurrect Chen Duoliao and Liao Zhong, we can see the follow-up. The past will leave traces, and the paper cannot cover up the fire, or the author forcibly reduces the intelligence and makes everyone mentally retarded. Either the protagonist kills everyone by himself, and everyone has relatives and friends who died in various accidents. The protagonist will not be able to survive on the government side, even if he surrenders, it will be useless.
Can we sink Nason Island🙂
Good
Yeah, number one today
Beat up the king
When can we get to the plot of beating the king?
The writing is good, but it contains too much content.
But I feel like I don't want to read novels anymore and just go straight to comics.
Give it all to you. Give it all to you. Please, please, please give me more.
There are nine of the Eight Magic Skills and ten of the Eight Deceitful Gods. Does the author of Suzaku and Gou Zhen plan to accept them?
Does anyone have complete pictures of the Eight Fraudulent Gods and the Wuxing Jingjing? The text description is a bit blurry.