Immortality Starts from the Demon Slaying Shop

After reading Chapter 52, the protagonist has reached the fourth realm and is still working on redemption. Then he is called a slave every day and still looks calm. I am convinced. The protagonist of a book used to be like this. He was almost invincible in the novice village, but he was still a slave. It was uncomfortable to watch, so I gave up.

Nostalgia has been rampant recently. It was quite a novel experience to see the seedlings here when searching for red envelopes 😎

Either the author has no money to write a new book, or his account has been borrowed and resurrected to write a new book.

How many hands has a deed of sale changed? Turning one hand and pretending to slap him in the face once is not enough, right? The writing is too childish

I suggest you remove the word "ding" and watch the drama. In modern times, only novice authors write like this.

After seeing the relaxed, fast-paced and imaginative nature of the film, I no longer had the desire to continue watching.

The author feels that he has not graduated from high school. Was the part about the slave turning into a slave at the beginning written by someone with experience?

It seems pretty good, I invested in it, I hope it won't be cut.

Why not upgrade yourself and strengthen Master Dong at the critical moment?

If you don't add martial arts, just add some random things, is it just pressure?

Book quality: White You can read it after losing your brain and breaking your head.

Leader, where are you from Yunnan? Just let me catch you, hehehehe😍😍

The leader's new book🤓

I feel the ranking is low. Some of the top ones are not as good as this one.

New book? , Waiting for three months

This crazy author came out of nowhere. When I clicked on the title of the book, I saw that he had written more than 60 chapters. After a closer look, I found that the latest chapter was updated more than a month ago...

Holy shit, this is a new book by the author of the novel Enlightenment. I thought the author stopped writing books.

Tell me your own ideas. If they are useful to the author, you can adopt them. If they are not, you can just take a look at them. What is the core plot of this book? Is it to counterattack from a small person to become a professional master, or is it to be responsible for slaying demons? Judging from the name, he is responsible for slaying demons, but the beginning gives the impression that it is the process of a small person's counterattack within the system. The protagonist is not given a specific goal at the beginning, nor is he allowed to experience anything personally. Generate ideas that are relevant to your goals. The sense of substitution is not strong. His golden finger didn't say anything about how it would help achieve the goal, so there was no sense of expectation. In addition, there are not many other expectations, such as the expectation of the protagonist's life experience, the expectation of his relatives, the protagonist's relatives help the protagonist, and the protagonist wants to become stronger, and in turn helps them. Goldfinger's sense of anticipation, what else has Goldfinger not yet explored. You wrote the entire third chapter directly. With the golden finger, whether the golden finger will help him practice quickly or help him find his goal. Quick cultivation requires resources. How does the protagonist find resources? Martial arts goals, how does the protagonist find them. These protagonists take the initiative to find the best, rather than following the plot, in which the master gives him martial arts skills. In this way, the protagonist has no pursuit and no initiative. What I said may not be correct, nor do I mean to give advice. Everyone has different ideas. I just expressed my thoughts. If it helps, adopt it; if it doesn't, just take a look. And your writing and vocabulary are so good that I can't write them the same way.