Incarnate as a Shrine, I Can Confer Gods on All Things

It's very good. I've been reading it. It's a solid source of food and I can't catch up on it. It can be seen that the author is a newcomer. The previous plots were a little immature, but after only twenty or thirty chapters, it can be seen that he has made great progress. He can carefully design and foreshadow the plot. The awe-inspiring part can still feel good. The other parts are also full of expectations. I am very curious about what will happen after the egg. The worldview of this book unfolds slowly, and I am very curious about what the complete worldview will be constructed later. The author's writing skills are good, and he will incorporate his own imagination into the plot later on, using a few jokes from time to time. The plot design is logical and has no obvious poisonous points. Generally speaking, the future is promising, and it can be seen that it has been making progress. Of course, it is definitely incomparable to the books on the list now. But it is considered a good potential stock among newcomers, and I hope to keep writing. Reason for recommendation: 1. The world view is interesting, the realms of each realm are designed, and the energy of different colors is introduced. Readers can have a clear understanding of the strength gap in different fields 2. The characters are distinct, such as Big eyes, scholar, Mr. Zhang, Mr. Li, even the fusang tree seems to have been working as a tool 3. Big brain, the author should be a man of science and engineering, the extraction should be in chemical engineering, and he has also been exposed to biology. The protagonist feels like he is engaged in scientific research in a fantasy world It can be written in the introduction, which is very interesting 4. The plot is very clear. Although it is a group portrait article (it is very brave for newcomers to dare to write a group portrait article), it does not have the common problem of scattered plots here and there, and a complete plot for one person will be written. After that, I will write about other people. In the middle, when the plot rhythm slows down, the plot of the next person will be properly prepared. If I guess correctly, after the scholar plot, there should be a plot of the little fox taking revenge and attacking Xuanwu Hall, or the plot of the big eyes. The main plot is still very clear, which is to attack the Zhou Dynasty, tear it apart, and find out the truth behind the emperor's murder of gods.

Dear friends, this is the first book for a newcomer, and the data is as expected. I don't care about future data. I am lucky enough to sign a contract with such a high volume, and to be able to test the waters. I am already very happy and satisfied. There are a few readers who have been insisting on reading my books. Although they may not necessarily leave comments or chapters, they have always been there, and I am particularly grateful to them. So I want to finish writing this book, at least to give them and myself an explanation. At least I was lucky enough to sign a contract and get a recommendation. No matter what my grades will be in the future, I will at least get perfect attendance. Many people at the same time as me cut out their books due to poor grades, and some even advertised with me before. I clicked on it and saw that his book had already been cut out, and he didn't even make it to 100,000 words. Bad reviews are a huge blow to newcomers, especially for new books. I would like to ask all the book friends who commented to raise your hand. If you feel that the style of the book is not suitable for you or the writing is not good, just cross it out. I am afraid that those supporters will not read my book after seeing the bad comments. It doesn't matter if I don't make money, because I write books part-time, but it will be a big blow to me if no one reads it. There are even people who read the title of the book, come in and say something, and then leave, alas. I want to try more different writing methods, integrate the results of my studies, slowly find my own style, and strive to get better and better in the future.

Delete the last four paragraphs of the introduction. I feel like I have read the entire book after reading the introduction. Besides, the emperor is the human emperor. Even after that era, people still have a special emotion for the emperor. In your introduction, you openly state that the emperor died because of the protagonist. The key is that he died because of the destruction of gods... Originally, it was right to destroy gods! Gods are meant to die! If God does not die, how can he achieve success for man? The first introduction is fine, but the last four paragraphs are simply the opposite of Tiangang. I suggest that it will be much better if you delete it. 🙂🙂🙂

Tell the truth. Shouldn't a blacksmith use his tools to practice Taoism? Shouldn't scholars enter Taoism through Confucianism?

The front is okay and the Penglai Secret Land in the back makes my head hurt.