I Cut Grass in a Deserted Village to Seek Immortality

I didn't want to read it anymore, the beginning was okay. Stallion from behind, kneeling down to write. No one can beat it

If I vote to spray you with monthly votes, what exactly are I writing about? ? ? Is there really a bunch of loopholes that make me want to vomit? After watching it well, the plot suddenly cuts off and jumps to the protagonist suddenly practicing? ? ? Wtf buddy, did you disappear in the middle of writing the sacrifice? What kind of writing is this? I don't want to talk about more bad things 50 points of extremely poisonous

What did you write after it was released? Moved off the bookshelf

What did I write after it was put on the shelves? It was basically a routine after that, and I couldn't bear it! But not invincible? The entire Buddhist temple was fucked until he ran away! The monsters outside are more awesome than the source of Buddhism, right? And were you fainted by the black smoke at the entrance of that well? I don't know how big the thing in the well is!

When I was in the village, I was very weak and was not afraid of being pushed underwater by the water ghost. I changed the map. What happened when I came into contact with someone? Just like a fledgling baby!

It was originally well written and very comfortable to read. But after it was put on the shelves, it was dull and retarded. It started seven days later to collect debts, and in the seven days it was filled with a lot of irrelevant things. The part where the Gong family collected debts was full of nonsense, and they were laughing and joking about whoever wanted to take revenge. It made me sick. Makes me want to give up the book.

If you want to withdraw it, why don't you tell me what you wrote after it was put on the shelves?

The original character is a time traveler who owns the Red Moon (Origin Castle) and gradually ascends to the gods. But what happens after he leaves the village? Ah? It's not necessarily behind-the-scenes or bestie style, but it's down to the floor. Slip away, gone away

What I wanted to read was Wushuang Mowing the Grass Around the Village, but what the hell was it written? The content of having the protagonist go out of the village to collect debts was so poor in style that it fell straight into the cesspool and I decided to abandon the book.

What was written after it was put on the shelves was so rubbish, it was a waste of money and time.

As the title says, what I wrote before was just okay, but what I wrote after it was put on the shelf was like it was being pulled and erased. A bunch of loopholes and poorly described content with no combat logic, like a first-time book author

The content written before and after it was put on the shelves is actually quite separate. Before it was put on the shelves, it was a fantasy style about becoming a god, and after it was put on the shelves, it was a martial arts style about solving puzzles and collecting debts It's not that the writing after it was put on the shelves was completely bad, but it's just that the target readers it attracted in the early stage were all about the fantasy style, and they didn't want to read the martial arts style about solving puzzles and collecting debts. . .

The writing was so overwhelming after it was released! Abandon the book decisively!

The book is okay, but why are there so few fans?

After leaving the village, it became increasingly boring.

It's okay before it's put on the shelves. It's a bunch of stuff written after it's put on the shelves. I suggest you cut it out.

Some parts of this book are well written, and some parts are terrible. It doesn't matter if there are many loopholes. Whether it is poisonous or not is really screening readers. Especially the last few chapters, starting from the village, are extremely poisonous.

Have you ever felt that changing the map instantly makes it boring?

If you don't believe it, you can read the posts on my homepage, but this book had a slight flaw in the beginning, but now it is getting better. Brothers, you can keep reading. It's not easy to find good books. I believe you guys, give it a try.

In Chapter 22, I have actually died twice. Can I write a good book? It's a pity that I gave 4 recommendation votes. The author spreads poison everywhere, suppresses the realm, and abuses pig's feet. It's not fun at all.

Can it be refined?

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, clever and joyful. "An old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...