Jidao Martial Ancestor: Crimson Great Bodhisattva

This protagonist has put aside his good side and is just a pure beast. As a human being, I really don't like to see this kind of beast.

The protagonist is sane, Goldfinger is direct and straightforward, the plot progresses quickly, without being pretentious or overwhelming the protagonist. The plot in Jidao's novel is good, the plot of the female characters is concise, and the fighting atmosphere is well created. I hope the author can grasp the relationship between the upgrade of the protagonist and the length of the chapter. If he writes about the weirdness of high-level gods and Buddhas in the later stage, he can have a good plot and a sense of satisfaction. Also, the battle scenes would be better if they were well written. The author may need more ideas that fit the background of the novel. If he can innovate in the later plots, he can break out of the Yakuza circle.

It's not what I wrote. What my family wrote is like a fool or a lunatic. It's better to shut them down temporarily, resurrect them when they reach the highest level, grant them wealth and benefits, and completely cut off the cause and effect without memory.

What the hell, practicing martial arts makes me less of a human being? What ditch

The more I write, the more abstract it becomes. I don't know how to write it. It's full of greatness and power, but it's all unfinished. Brother 😅

The protagonist's family is really too poisonous

This protagonist has bad views. He only kills his own people. He is an expert in civil war and an amateur in external war.

The flaw is that it still has a bunch of baggage holding it back. Wouldn't it be better to let those baggage game over in this apocalyptic world?

I think it would be much better if the protagonist was an orphan. Many authors cannot write about family members, so they have to write about them?

A sun with a red top appeared in the east, and in the sun stood a tall Bodhisattva. He could see everything. He saw that in the highest place in the world, there were people suffering the deepest and deepest suffering. With a finger of the Bodhisattva's hand, the Bodhisattva soldiers crossed thousands of mountains and rivers to save people from great suffering. On the head of each Bodhisattva soldier is a five-pointed red star.

Worship the Compassionate Rabbit Buddha and enjoy the Bliss Immortal Grass Strengthen the muscles and bones, and reach the end of the ultimate path

Ji Dao Ryu, besides getting away, only the great eunuch Ye Yuxue can watch, the martial arts is so hot-blooded

There are already signs of the Bund. If this is the case, then we can sell it domestically and export it to play Zhutianliu and patch the panel. I've thought about the energy for traveling through time, so I'll use the fragments of the Imperial Arms.

3Rd rate, get out of the way is the only condition, 1st rate: not worse than get out of the way, but there are many eunuchs, plus get out of the way first. 2Nd rate: It's cool, the plot is obviously borrowed from it, but the writing is not enough. Level 3: The writing, plot, and excitement are all one level below. Unpopular: It has a name, but it actually doesn't matter much. This article has a strong sense of being a Yakuza, but don't default to the Yakuza style. The protagonist is a bald guy who only knows how to kill, okay? But if you really look at it, that's not the point at all. This of yours is considered off topic. The setting of the cool point is also very inexplicable. I don't know where you are happy, but you are in trouble? Each of your hostile forces is better than the last, the protagonist's strength is not unique, the plot is like an outline, and the battle descriptions are not good. 3. I'm not kidding.

One of the small drawbacks is that I decided not to write about the heroine, so I don't drive for no apparent reason. The second major drawback is that the family's belief in a cult is not a big problem and has been solved in various parts, but the protagonist sneaked in and became part of the main plot. There is also the fact that a cult is a cult. If I don't write about it, and I have to clean it up after writing, what's the point in that? It's better to create a heaven and earth society.

All plug-ins that will make you hungry are garbage.

This book is okay, but the plot is a bit thin, and the realm and relationship network are also very vague. It is a bit difficult to become popular, but there is an audience, and it can still be read if it does not collapse later. The main plot is just a killing path, and there are no other subplots. To be honest, if you want to be popular, your book cannot only be about killing monsters and upgrading, but also having an emotional line. And don't you think that except for the protagonist, everything else in your book makes people feel very vague? The strength, the map, and the network are not spread out. Personal opinion, don't complain.

It's average, but I can read it. What makes me most uncomfortable about the author is his devilish paragraphs. There are many paragraphs like the following in the book "Thank you, Thank you for your help." "How is it possible, How can he be so strong?" One sentence must be divided into two paragraphs.

I'm almost done, hold on.

Let me give you some popular science about the Yakuza-ryu protagonist. When you see the Yakuza-ryu, you can be sure that the big muscle tyrant will start, and in the middle stage, he will probably not be in human form. If you want to see the 1.9-Meter-tall and 60-kilogram thin dog lose weight after training, you can just go out and turn left. Finally, I would like to add an important point: Are you awesome, Brother Kun? 😁😁😁

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Let me ask you weakly, do you want to lower the level? Stop watching it.

Rubbish novel, the protagonist only kills his own people

I didn't want to read it after it was put on the shelves. Before it was put on the shelves, his family was just a fan of it. It's still okay.