Gou Entertains at Home, Specializes in Fame and Fortune

Today's authors don't know how to write live broadcasts

To be honest, I was quite optimistic about this book, so I got into it when I got into it around chapter 30 and have been following it all the way. I started by picking up rags to break the situation, and then I interacted with Xue Song and Fang Qiting in the film. I liked it very much, but after the movie, I suddenly felt something was wrong. I admit, I always thought that Song Yuanfang secretly liked the male protagonist, so I was disappointed when I found out that her favorability towards the male protagonist was only equivalent to that of a stranger. But I felt that something was wrong with the plot, not because of this, but because the male protagonist suddenly acted as if he didn't think about anything after reaching the queen's dungeon. Dating and taking people to the amusement park are great, but why not communicate beforehand? The actress went out wearing high heels. Don't mention that you brought her travel shoes. You know what size of shoes she usually wears, which does not mean that the size of shoes you bring is suitable for her. Author, have you ever seen shoes from the same manufacturer? This model has to wear 38, but that model can wear 37? Not to mention feet of the same size, there are differences in width, fatness, and height of the feet. When you have to go out for a long walk, only your own shoes are the most suitable. If someone else brings you a pair, it's just a make-up. It's definitely not a surprise! Then it's time to eat. The male protagonist knows that the actress's friendship with her is at the level of a stranger's, and he even plays a "do you want to eat" game with the actress. Come on, that's a senior in your company! It is the supporter who will support you in big events! It's the source of your salary! It's even the source of your boss's income! What kind of rapport do you have with others? Is this all you do? Next is the merry-go-round, wouldn't it be nice to have a merry-go-round song after the ride? What does the male protagonist say that the last time the movie queen played with the Trojan Horse, her teammate wasn't even pregnant? Do you know that your words will offend two people to death? Please don't copy and paste the above string. Author, can you use your brain? Then write it back and come to apologize later. You have ruined the date like this. How do you expect the actress to accept the apology? In other words, the author is trying to cheat. If I were a movie queen, I would accept the apology on the surface and then close the door. Who would listen to the male protagonist singing? Who are you with such a big face? No, I don't understand. Don't you have Hongdou? You have published dozens of chapters. Who are you waiting to give them to? Besides, if you can get out the rotary wood, you can also get out Faye Wong's other songs, such as "Open to Tea" and "A Hundred Years of Solitude". If you want to stir up the heartstrings of the actress, there are many tricks, but you have to ruin the poor favorability of the male protagonist, right? I don't know whether the author is a man or a woman, how old he is, whether he has social experience or love experience, but whether I am the male protagonist or the actress, I really can't see the rationality of the plot these days, so I vote for the first 90 chapters that I like very much, and it will be considered as reward, and then we will meet again. I have to think about my fragile nerves that have been on the verge of breaking frequently lately. I wish the author's books will get better and better, and don't engage in such magical plots again. This is a parting advice to readers.

There is a lack of explosive points. I feel that everything that happens is very dull. There are no twists, contradictions, and conflicts, like a farming novel. But if it is a domestic entertainment novel, I still like to watch the slap-in-the-face kind 😄😄😄

In the early stage, it was emphasized that Song Yuanfang excluded other people in the company from bringing the male protagonist to the event. It gave me the feeling that the male protagonist has a special status in her heart, and she thought it was due to her status that she could not show her affection for the male protagonist. Lian Zong could be used as a catalyst. As a result, in the last few chapters, it was revealed that Song Yuanfang's favorability level was 17 and he couldn't even be bound, and then the male protagonist led him astray. I felt embarrassed just watching it. In addition, the joke about "do you want to eat it" at the end of the new chapter is of course a minor interest if the two people have a crush on each other. But when you think about the fact that the friendship is better than that of a stranger, it feels boring. Finally, if the Song Yuanfang you created as the author does not have a high impression of the male protagonist at first, and it is just out of the senior's care for the younger generation, don't make any psychological asides such as "Sister, I'm not polite" or "Sister, I have a heart-to-heart with you", which is in stark contrast to the 17 favorability rating.

Author, what kind of character do you want to create, including the plot, the whole process is pretentious and has no depth, the intention is bland and has no core, and it cannot retain people.

Sister Qing who still has charm

Tang Xiaomanthi😜😜😜

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It's not that exciting. The male protagonist can't control it, and he travels back and forth and systematically does it like this, without even seeing it.

There is a problem, it is not very enjoyable to watch. The writing is fluent and so on. Let's not talk about that for now. This is an online article. It is still entertainment. It must make readers feel happy. It can be pretending to be 13 or pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, but there must be a reversal. I invested in the post bar, and after watching it for so long, except for two songs and a pendulum, they are gone, gone... Now that a new plot is starting, I can only say that it is an extraordinary performance. Good luck.

It must have been written by someone born in 2000! I don't know any of these!

Hey!

Like the title, write it according to your own ideas, don't be a eunuch hahahaha

It can be seen that there are no big poisonous points, but there are small poisonous points, such as the ex-girlfriend. You write about girls regretting it. Well, it is a normal writing method, but there is a part in your book that describes the specific chat between the ex-girlfriend and the current boyfriend (boss). What does it mean? Although there are only a few sentences, it is still very disgusting. Moreover, you later wrote about how your ex-girlfriend liked the male protagonist. Why, you still want to clear your name? There is also a song that the male protagonist writes for his male counterpart to pursue his childhood sweetheart. The author likes this tune very much?

After reading more than ten chapters, I don't see the use of the system. Either don't write cheats, or just use cheats to the end.