My Survival Fog Game

The author sees it, sees it, sees it, sees it

Please comment, it can be regarded as outstanding among various survival novels. There is no obvious plot to reduce intelligence or blunt plot advancement. The protagonists and supporting characters are at least smart people, and the writing is acceptable. Post a post to support the author, so as not to be too eunuch to read it.

It is a fighting male protagonist that is rare in survival novels, and there are no mentally retarded plots or supporting characters. I will give this a good review and then comment on the content (there may be minor spoilers below). Let's talk about the advantages first: In the early stage, the protagonist was still a businessman protagonist in a traditional survival novel. He made a small profit by selling bamboo tubes and nectar. Later, he also wanted to farm iron ingots to earn wood. However, since he almost died with a tiger, the protagonist began to rely on fighting to develop. He was either fighting or recuperating every day. But in terms of personality, he was calm and forward-looking in the face of trouble. So he did not feel like a reckless man. This is again a good comment. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the important female supporting character Xiong Batian (should not be the heroine, the current character cards for the two female characters are supporting role cards) This person's character is still okay, but the acquaintance with the protagonist feels a little too coincidental, and then the part where he helps the protagonist buy medicine, although it does not feel very abrupt, but it is still a bit strange (maybe I really can't read The Virgin) The inner activities of the book) There is still an uncertain point, and that is water, but recently, according to the author himself, he has deleted a lot of about 10,000 words in the previous article and added three chapters. But I really don't want to read the previous content again, so I don't know what the situation is now. After more than 30 chapters, I feel there is no problem at the moment. I will look at it later.

The first is the plot: the plot seems to be written in a game-oriented way, and contains a lot of information. I give it 3.5 Points; The second is the characters: the characters are vividly drawn, non-toxic, and the characters have a harmonious bond. However, if you set your horizons too high, there will be the disadvantage of facial expression (probably the level of a popular online article) , give four points; Then there is logic: the connection between the past and the present is relatively large, the characters' actions are in line with the positioning, and the degree of connection is average, give it three and a half points; Finally, the writing style: the writing style is here, there are few idiom errors, there are not many typos, the sentences are smooth but there are many long and difficult sentences, four points are given. Recommended to read carefully. Taken together, as long as this book continues to maintain the same standards as before and after it is released, there is no guarantee that it will become a hit, but it will definitely succeed. I hope the author will not be sucked to death by me

Reading the comments and replies today, I found that most book friends complained that recent chapters were too watery. I thought about it for a long time, and finally decided to rectify the outline of the first volume without affecting the reading experience of the published chapters, delete the rankings and the previous setting of No. 10866, And slightly modify the content of Chapters 42 to 44. Here I would like to say sorry to the book friends who have finished reading. Today I will update two chapters to express my apology. If a similar situation occurs again in the future, I will add additional chapters according to the number of characters. (ps: The ranking settings will appear later in the article. I will add additional updates when they appear. I apologize.) (ps: The deleted plot will not affect the reading experience, please rest assured.) (ps: If I do it again next time, I will punish myself by updating it by 10,000 words. I am really sorry for your support.)

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The accumulation of this kind of plot is the cornerstone of a masterpiece! While enriching the characters of the supporting characters, it makes this survival world appear more real! As long as it's not a brainless supporting role! It will be popular!

This book has gradually become boring after it was put on the shelves. I have ordered forty chapters, but there are still more than ten chapters that I can't read. As of the chapter invited by 10866, I can't figure out what the author wants to write. First of all, Xiong Batian is overly stealing the show. The male protagonist is very dependent on her information resources, and the male lead is weak. Will there be other male characters after Chen Lin to shoulder the branch plot? I came here to see the male protagonist. It's okay for the male protagonist not to be like Bai Xiaosheng, a long-sleeved dancer, but where is your information channel, male protagonist? All I can say is that the road is narrow. And is the male protagonist a lone wolf or a team player? If you are a lone wolf and are extremely lacking in resource transformation and information exchange, and your interpersonal relationships in the team are not very active, you do not read the news on the world channel, and you are just like a stand-alone post bar every day, aren't you just being funny? If you have to rely on others, you need to take a few more paths and learn to leave room for yourself and the protagonist. If you don't need it, don't set so many settings for Xiong Batian. In addition, it is best to write things like equipment settings in a simple and easy-to-understand way, so that people can easily understand them, and don't write them in a complicated way. When I see the protagonist in the author's works, I feel that it is very nihilistic, with no key points and a single behavior pattern. I wish you success. Also remember to create a few male supporting characters. If you write about multiple women or a harem, just pretend I didn't mention it.

Watched them all so far. Generally speaking, it is a good idea, but the narrative of the statistical process is very scattered. This is a story of survival. All his actions. For the purpose of survival. Your frame is very loose. Did a lot of inexplicable things. It looks a bit confusing. The above is what one family says. For reference only.

It's okay, but the author's written expression skills are not good enough. Sometimes the reader's reading is very confusing, and the attention is scattered. The excitement is not concentrated enough, and it is uncomfortable to feel that it is a small climax of pleasure but not at all.

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I'm really surprised. The book I've been wanting to read for so many years is a survival novel that doesn't overwhelm my wits. The heroine is very good. It's great.

He is probably a eunuch 🙂

To be honest, I feel that the avatars of Gu Shuang and Chen Lin are both average.

As title. It won't be finished, right?

Starting point, witness every cyber tombstone

I just read it today and realized that this book is about eunuchs.

The setting is so huge that after watching half of it, I knew it was going to be a hit!

It's mediocre, the plot has no development, you can watch it to kill time, the rest is just nagging, the plot has no ups and downs

Hey, maybe I'm stupid. When I saw the items that were rewarded after killing the first tiger, they had too many attributes. I felt like I couldn't remember them at all.

The protagonist is lucky but his brain cannot move. Now it is known that the enemy has a soul-sucking monster that can turn into a human. The soul-sucking monster can replace a human. There is currently no scale that the protagonist can deal with, but after it is established, the protagonist's current IQ will not be enough to deal with it. After the protagonist dealt with an incident in which the soul-sucking monster turned into a human, a profession similar to the keyboard warrior jumped out. With the protagonist's brain having to deal with the soul-sucking monster, this sudden profession is useless for the protagonist. It cannot be solved, which means that there is an extra IQ bomb on the protagonist's head. This bomb will definitely jump out and hit the protagonist according to the needs of the plot. And based on the protagonist's current performance, this bomb will be exploded on the protagonist's weak point. Almost half of this novel is about the introduction of item abilities. In other words, this is a novel that is biased towards refreshing stories, but now the protagonist has a bomb tied to his chest that will explode at any time, so everyone should run away in order to prevent the bomb from exploding.

You've given up on writing, right?

The details can't stand up to scrutiny, but the rest is fine. The exchange materials can be easily traded, and they will collapse in a minute. This kind of article should distinguish between bound items and non-bound items. Also, the undead I got for the protagonist for the first time was too strong.

The results are good, why don't you update it?

Compared with a bunch of AI-written global novels, this is a very good article. After reading it in one go, let me tell you my feelings: What's better is that there is no random use of sand coins like treasure boxes; the characters also have their own personality traits (the greetings are particularly realistic); and the numerical values ​​​​and skills are not super model. Some suggestions: use the trading shop with caution, you can buy good things so there is no need to take risks; the numerical suggestions are gradually weakened, the level can hold enough things, there is no need to stick to numbers; in terms of combat power, I feel that the author is still thinking about the difficulty and system, and you can consider light casting undead; the story line must also be pushed away, otherwise it will be like writing a house.

Do you guys have any recommendations for T0 survival novels?

Qidian rarely writes such well-written, flesh-and-blood female characters. In one sentence of the label, kindness is not the Virgin. Give the author a thumbs up.