Young Owner of American Pawn Shop

The subject matter is niche, which is interesting, but the first chapter is a bit awkward. It would be better to travel through time first and then be called back home. And a family like the one in the protagonist doesn't need two descendants to be in the mortgage industry, right? We definitely need someone to go to the public prosecutor's office! All relations within the family depend on the police, prosecutors and the law. It would be more reasonable to set up the situation where the eldest brother has to go to the public prosecutor's office and there is no one to inherit the mortgage bank, so the protagonist has to go back and inherit it. There is also a 500-square-meter warehouse in the core area of ​​Las Vegas with land deed, which is far more than 7.5 Million US dollars.

It looks like it's not good enough yet, so just cut it off, little eunuch.

The setting is good, but the protagonist is a bit too young, not like an adult who has graduated from college, but like a junior high school student or even an elementary school student. No sense of immersion.

enen

As long as you don't speak Chinese when you see rabbits, just look for Chinese food everywhere and speak Chinese.

The character of the protagonist really cannot be complimented

The character of this protagonist is very strange, and it feels so fake.

Not enough fun, too many trivial matters, more than enough than above.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit schizophrenic

Worldly, tender and kind-hearted

The narration and dialogue didn't look at the names. I would have thought they were locals.

The Congressman's Daughter

The last one died, so don't let this one die young.

Many people don't understand. Let me give you an example. Bill Gates and the Koch brothers are both very wealthy. However, old American politicians would rather offend Bill Gates than the Koch brothers, because only a few employees at Microsoft can get a few votes. The Koch brothers' hundreds of thousands of votes themselves plus the millions of votes from upstream and downstream companies and employees' families can easily determine the direction of the elections in the areas they cover.

Hurry up faster 😡

Arthur

Watch more American TV series and understand how Americans get along with American values ​​and families. Now it seems that America is China's province.

Can the protagonist take a few more people with him when he goes out? There must be four people protecting the protagonist at all times, otherwise I am really afraid that one day the protagonist will die outside. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not broke, so there is no need to design those pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots, which would be disgusting if seen too much.

Young people work hard to have the daughter of a congressman.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

A single chapter was published 2 weeks after it was released. Is it because the data is too good?

I like the subject matter very much. I will make a complaint here. It has nothing to do with the author. It would be really cool if I had the opportunity to learn the pawn trade from my family. Not to mention that my family has such a good pawn shop. It is impossible for me to go to New York to work as a pawn. Of course, everyone has his own ambitions, and that is understandable. Comment is over, give the author some advice. The dialogue can be more American-style and more engaging. Then write about making money before putting it on the shelves. Arrange a few plots to make money, reduce emotions and daily life, and then add it after it is put on the shelves.